A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Good poem again di, Freddy's line was too funny.
Posted: 12 years ago
wow di...the yaade one was very heart-touching...main to senti ho gayi😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for all of ur comments! Thank u for appreciating my poems! Will try to post more!
Posted: 12 years ago
@ padma:
  fantastic job yar, just a suggestion, dont use d light blue color as u did in d 1st post, it gets difficult to read den .
Posted: 12 years ago
Ya polly dear i wil keep in mind.
Posted: 12 years ago
@yaddein..
full of emotions..yup remind me empty days...
@barush..
hilarious poem...try to right long poem..

Posted: 12 years ago
hello di...eagerly waiting for next of urs...plz make it soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
Frndz just a mixed poem of wat i hv in mind.
Cid
suno gaur se jurm karne walon,
buri nazar na mere desh pe dalo!
Chahe kitna bhi dimag chalao,
tumko pakdke rahenge hum CID wale.
Jurm karne walon
jurm karke chaho, asman mein chip jao.
Zamin mein ya badal nigal jao.
Dundke nikalenge hum.
Posted: 12 years ago
That's good. Waiting for more.
Posted: 12 years ago
For daya sir!!!
{Do chor ghar mein chori karne gausse hai}
jaldi se sara saman utalo
sone, chandi, hera utalo, phir sare saboot mitalo
chupke chupke se sab utalo.
'Jarasi awaz na aye' cID TEAM peeche hai.. Ye shabdh dhyaan me rakhlo.
Gudam gadam, gudum gadam
Arre arrre ohh ahh!(awaz kyun kiya?) daya aa jayega!! Bhago daudo!! Darwaza tod ayega! Shhhu daya aa jayega phir bahut dhulayega!!!
mar mar ke hadiyan bhi todega!!!
Shhu uuu!! Daya aa jayega!!!

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