KriYa... short story (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
brilliant post
keep it upClap

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sweet_bhanki Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant, Yemi.
Ever thought about doing your every own FF...

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged

What a denouement !! ClapClapClapClapClap

Just loved the crisp style,  Yemi  ..

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
superb yemi SmileClap but u could have elaborated on what happened in the hotel room before K went to TN WinkEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged

Insomnia agrees with youTongueLOL. What a LALLANTOP scenario. Maybe we should let POPS know we have some creative writers here on MKAP forum.  You get the MAHARANI BICTORIA LALLANTOP SAPTARISHI TARON AWARD for a well written script. If only they handled the track this sensibly with viewers cheering the man with a golden heart. If only he wasn't behaving like he had just found like long lost mother.Confused

But kya karein! MMM is fixated on the word "R-I-F-T".  Viewers are taking this four letter word bec' Pearl Gray has promised us there is a bright light at the end of the tunnel. Takurain better be ready to get the prasadi of her lifetime when Krishna turns a blind eye after his eyes are fully open to Takurain's evil doings.  This time SS will pay a price by default for failing to stop Takurain from following through on her evil plans.

Edited by MERARAI - 24 May 2011 at 5:53am

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hussainramso IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Amazing Yemi!  But I always knew you had the talent so no surprise for me. Unleash your creative side!
Next time do add a little bit of math and science. You can PM that version to me.LOL

Edited by Atticus - 24 May 2011 at 6:48am

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corvette IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
May it be JUST like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Clap
Lubbed it girl - K as we like him best...
Faithful, Fearless, F the world, its u and me baby,Forever!!!!!
Thumbs Up

Edited by kEEnkEEn - 24 May 2011 at 6:51am

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telstra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
brilliant yemi fantabulous yaara keep writing

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