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FF-MG-LIFE TO LIVE(PART28-PG59) (Page 7)

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both part r amazing

do continue soon

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Originally posted by am_sweet_pari

both part r amazing

do continue soon



thanks ...yup will continue soon...hope u like itBig smile
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Originally posted by amzu32

nice story. .

thanks ...will continue soon...keep reading
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Originally posted by shah10

wow..love it


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''''''''''PART-6'''''''''''.

                         SCENCE-RESTURANT

 

Vicky saw geet and her teary eyes,he know very well that how much his dee is in pain'but never tell or say anything to anyone'.because she think that it will give them pain'.he know how much his dee misses  her parents'he know among we three the person who was every close to his parent was his deee'.he cant say anything to her because he know that she will breakdown'the thing which he cant  see'..he know the only person who can cheer her was'there angel, there  little sister'how was truly life and soul of there family'rashmi''

Vicky- rashmi'.dee se bolo khana agaya..

Rashmi  shaked geet as told by Vicky

Rashmi-deee khana agaya '

Geet came out of her thought

Rashmi-dee,kahlo kahana nahi tho thanda ho gaya ga'

Geet-hmmm'.

They start eating the food

                   Scence  changed where maan is entering the hotel'

 

Maan entered

Waiter- may I help u sir'

Maan 'yes, maan singh khurana ke naam per ek table booked hain

Waiter-yes sir'.please come this way..

Maan-ya sure'

Maan followed the waiter'..the table  which was booked was next to geet's table'.

Maan sat  and waited for the girl'..as he cant go back without meetin because  if  any way dadi maa get to knw this than she will be angry the thing which maan cant see'so he has to wait..the thin which maan hated to do'.after all he is "MAAN SINGH KHURANA"'.the famous business tycoon'..

Maan thought-ya dadi maa ne mujhe kahan phasa diya'uff..dadi maa'ek tho dadi ki zidd and upar se kaam ki tension uff'maan..tu tho phaas gaya'.:-)

It is 15 min already ,maan is waitin and getin angry more and more

A girl entered the restaurant

She was having havin heavy make up'and was wearing top and mini skirt..and of couse high heels'havin a hand purse in one hand and goggles is other''

She asked something to waiter and headed towards maans table

She said- "MAAN"

Maan- you?? With surprised face

She said- I am dinky, so dadi maa said that we should meet

Maan thought- '..save me!!! -"VAH VAH DADI EK AUR NAMUNA '.uff!!!

Maan-hav a seat

Dinky-thanks

Maan don't wanna talk but still-so tell somthin abt urself'.

Dinky-I am dinky, my father is rich buissness man,I do my shopin frm from diff countries..like shoes frm italy'purse frm Russia..and

She continued will her talk

Maan was least interested'and jus wanted to run away aur shut her up

Maan-thought-essa acha I hav finished with my file'.koi eski bakwas band karwao'.i am freaked out

She spoke 4 about 15 min non stop'..

Her stupid talk seems to never stop

Maan was super fulustrated''.

                  SCENCE- change to geets table

Waiter-BILL MADAM!!!

Geet-ya!!!

Rashmi-finally FINISH!!!

 

''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

 Part 7- most awaited part'''.

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 hope u like it

do comment



Edited by ishanidhi08 - 05 October 2011 at 7:26am

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hey dear its really interesting..plz do continue
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nice update..thanx for pm...
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Its really interesting. Do continue plz

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