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FF-MG-LIFE TO LIVE(PART28-PG59) (Page 6)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by syedah

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thanks..hope u like it...will pm u...and ya i hav added u...hope u like the storySmile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

superb parts!...
 
wow!...maan was impressed by geet's work!...nice!...
 
can't wait 4 their first meeting!...
 
loved vicky's entry!
 
wonder which girl was dadi talking about...
 
continue sooN!


thanks ...yup updating next part...hope u like it...Big smile
and buddy maaneet will meet very very soon...till than stay tunedSmile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged

'''''''''''.PART-4'''.

''''..SCENCE-HANDA CONSTRUCTION''''

 

Geet-koi kaam tha pari???

(pari like Vicky secretly )

Pari-voh ma'am  jo mr wilison ke middle cast project tha voh jo KC ko har saal milta hain vo eis baar half partnership ke saath huma mila hain''

Geet with happy face-that is really a good news pari'.tum dekh na pari hum jaldi ya pura project apna naam kar langa'.

Pari-congrats ma'am

Vicky and rashmi outside the cabin-ab huma aj hi treat milagi yipeee'.

They gave high five to each other

Geet-tum log kabse yahan kara huin'..

Vicky 'jabse apne good news kaha'..

Geet- achha ab batao tum logo kya chaiye'.jo mangao ga vo mili ga''

Rashmi-I want moon and star''

Geet ' dhattt'.sahi sahi bata varna(with fake anger)

Vicky ' chup ho ga moti'dee  abhi ka liye treat chalagi..kkk

Rashmi-hain dee'please

Geet- let me think ??

Vicky and Rashmi togther-please!!!!

Geet-hmm'.kkk

Vicky and rashmi-yipee!!!!!

'''''..SCENCE-KHURANA CONSTRUCTION''''.

 

 Maan(thought)-kisi bhi tarah ya project mein vapas lekar rahunga'..

Maan mobile rang

Maan picked up the phone and said ' ji dadima'

Dadi maa-maan aj apko ek larki dekhna jana hain'.

Maan-dadi maa mujhe koi larki nahi dehkna'.please..

Dadi maa-hum kuch nahi suna ga'.

Maan ' dadi meri ek bahut important meeting hain 1 pm

Dadi maa- maan bas hum na jo keh diya voh keh diya'..hum na usse larki ka saath apki baat fix karva diya hain'.

Maan-dadi maa ap humasha ya karta hain'.

Dadi maa with victory smile-ap shadi ka liya tayar ho gaiya hum kuch bhi nai khanga ya karanga''.

Maan with pleading voice-dadi maa please!!!!

Dadi maa-mujhe par ye chal baji nahi chalagi samjhe ap'.aur hain ussse aj xxx restaurant me mil ligiya ka'apka naam par mana table book kardiya hain

Maan ' dadi maa suniya tho

Dadi maa kept the phone'..

Maan-mein bhi dekh tha huin dadi maa ap meri shadi kaise karvati hain'.

Maan came out of cabin

Shasha came

Shasha ' mk ap kahi jar aha hain???

Maan- shasha ek imp kaam hain'1 pm vali meeting tum handle kar lana'.kk

Shasha ' yes mk!!

Maan left the office'

 

''''''SCENCE-HANDA CONSTRUCTION'''''

 

Geet- chalo varna restaurant ki seat nahi mila gi'aur phir bhooka rahna para ga!!!

Vicky-araha hain

They sat in the car and move towards the restaurant'..

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''

''''''''''...PART- 4 FINISHED'''''''.

PART- 5- PRECAP-"GEET PUTTAR,AOO CHUP CHAP

                                  KHANA  KHALO"

                                "NAHI MUMMY JI ABHI NAHI"

'''''''''...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 05 October 2011 at 7:25am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
nice...
 
m still wondering which girl dadi has selected for maan!
 
continue soon!
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged

'''''''''''...PART-5'''''''''''..

 

Geet, Vicky and rashmi entered the restaurant

Waiter- may I help u miss'.

Geet-yes, we want table for three'

Waiter-ma'am please come this way

Geet-sure go ahead'.

They followed the waiter

Waiter showed them the seats

They seated themseleves

Rashmi in excitement-voh!!!!deee'..restaurant is very beautiful..

Vicky-vaise eis moti ki baat mein kabhi nahi manta per she is true'.this is beautiful

Rashmi-thanks devil'

Vicky-don't call me that u moti'..

Geet in fake anger-tum log etna bare ho gaya ho par maturity naam  ki chiz nahi hain''.

Vicky-dee agar hum mature nahi hain tho esma apki galti  hain'.

Geet shocked-kaise???

Vicky-ab sab maturity tho apna la liya'..

Geet- Vicky!!!!

Waiter came

Waiter ' order ma'am'.

Geet- one paper dosa

Rashmi-come on dee ap phir se vahi boring khana kha rahi hain

Vicky-sahi mein'kabhi chineeses try karo dee'

Geet-mein sada khana mei hi thik huin..tum log order dho'.

Geet was lost in her thought'she thought of her most beautiful memory'which was her child hood memories''.

Flashback'.

A lady wearing salwar kamezz came with a plate full of rice..

She was rano'geet's mother'..

Rano-geet puttar, ao..chup chap khana khalo'.geet'.

A sweet and chulbali girl of 9 year came in and hide herself behind sofa

Geet with her sweet voice-nahi mummy ji mujhe abhi nahi khana'

A tall fair  man came inside,he was geet's father sukvindra'

Sukvindra-kyun meri bichari bachi ko pareshan kar rahi ho???...

Geet with her angelic voice-papaji!!! And came to her father

Geet continued

Geet-dekhiya na mummy ji mujhe vahi boring khana roj khilati hain'..mujhe kuch chatpata khana hain'.

Sukvindra-sahi tho keh rahi hain meri pari'.mein bhi roz vahi khana kha ke bore ho gaya huin'.suno kuch tasty bano na'

Geet giggled

Rano-hain hain  ap logo ko mera khana hi boring lagta hain koi nahi dekhta ki meina kitni mahanat se sab banaya hain'..mujhe tho lagta hain mujhe koi pyaar nahi karta

Geet-mein apni mummy ji se sabse gada pyaar karti huin'.

Vicky came running ' mein bhi

Sukvindra-aur mujhe se

Geet and Vicky 'mummy ji ke baat aur hain humari rashmi bhi humara gang mein hain''

Sukvindra- achha meri bili mujhe hi ko meow''

All of them burst of in laughter and they hugged each other..

Flashback ends

Geet in thought smiled 'apki dairy mein sahi likha tha

"jo chaha tumha pura dil se,milta hain vo mushkil se,asa koi kahi hain bas vahi sabse haseen hain'.use haat ko tum tham lo vo maharbaan kal ho na ho")

(FROM THE SONG KAL HO NA HO..FRM MOVIE KAL HO NA H

Mujhe apka haath usi samay tham lana chaiya tha'tho shayad ap log humara saath hota''..

Geet had tear in her eyes'

She want to cry'cry loud so that pain inside her can be less'so that the pain of separation  from her parent  can be overcome'but she can't '..she had to be strong so that her sister and brother can be happy'she has to fulfill her parent wish'so that this cruel world don't harm them''she has to be strong'.she is happy from exterior but dead from inside'.there is no wish that she ask from her babaji expect one wish to keep her brother and sister happy'..she always say to her mother "maa give me strength so that I can face this world so that I can fulfill there wishes"'her tears wanted to flow but she has to hold them'she knows if her sibling will see them they will be worried'the thing which she cant see..the thing which she cant resist '..she cant even have silent cry because she know that her sibiling knows her so much that even her silent cry can be heared by them'.she wanna cry ,cry out loud but can't ''she says to herself "why babaji,why only me'why I cant I be happy like a normal happy human being ..what wrong I have done'.please tell me!!!tell me'..i cant live with this remorse'I cant'I cant"

This sentences is like a leech which is sucking her blood every day infact  every second '.making her guilty for the thing she has not done'..thing which is a matter of luck'.but every human being blame himself for that'this pain long last forever'.may be at the time of death'''..but the remorse, the guilt never finishes'.

Her eyes become teary'.but tear did not flow''

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''

  ''''''''..PART ' 5 FINIHED'''''''''.

PART6- PRECAP-"VAH VAH DADI EK AUR NAMUNA

                                 UFFF'.."

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

nice...
 
m still wondering which girl dadi has selected for maan!
 
continue soon!


DONT WRY..NEXT PART U WILL COME TOKNW...I THINK IN 2-3 PART MAANEET WILL MEET...SO STAY TUNED...DO COMMENT Big smileSmile
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