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angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged

                                                         PART - 20

                                                                   scence ' khurana construction

adi- welcome mr rai!!

rai- thanks for the warm khurana  kahan hain??( whr is mr khurana)

adi- sir...he will be joining you in the meeting!!

mr rai- oh..kk..then we shuld proceed!!

adi- yes sir...sir pinky will take you to the confrence room..!!!

adi- pinky take mr rai and his team to confrence room...mean while i will call sir!!

pinky- ok..adi sir!!

pinky left with mr rai and his team

and  adi moved towards  maan's cabin!!

                                     Scence ' maan's cabin

maan was smiling

he heard a knock..he thought she must be there

but poor soul heard adi voice

adi- may i come in sir!!

maan quickly chaning his he knew tht adi is detective of his dadi!!!

maan- yes come in adi!!

adi- sir clients agaya!!( sir clients have come))

maan- i am coming!!

both left towards the conference room!!

                                 Scence- handa construction

at the reception

lady- excuse me!!

receptionst- can i help u!!!

lady- can u plz call pari!!!

receptionst- whom shuld  i say is calling??

lady- say i am adi's dadi!!

receptionst- yes maam

receptionst called pari and informed her

dadi was in a dellima..that  she shuld meet her or not

what if maan comes to know!!!

dadi- no i have to meet her alone...not here!!!


pari(thinking)- may be she has come to meet maam...because maam is known as pari in KC

pari- i shuld inform it to maam!!

pari moved towards the cabin

she knocked

no reply

she agained  knocked

no reply

FINALLy she opened the door...and was shocked to see

geet totally lost somewhere

( bechari pari nahi jaanti ki whr she is lost!!! Wink;))

pari came close to pari and shaked her

pari- maam!!

little louder

pari- MAAAMMM!!!

geet finally out of the the dream world

geet- hain...oh pari..tum kab ayi??( when hav u come pari??)

pari- long time back...but where was u lost maam!!

geet- just nothing...awieee!!

geet- u tell...koi kaam tha??

pari- maam voh..adi ki dadi  ayi hain...she is askin for me..matlab pari!!

geet- oh acha...wait i am coming

                                   Scence- reception of HC

geet ' whr is she??

pari- let me ask maam??

pari- whr is the lady gone

receptionst- she left...she  said to tell u that..she have to because of some urgent work!!

pari- oh...okkk!!!

geet heard the convo

pari- so maam.??

geet- koi nahi...i will apolozies to her!!!

pari- oh..okk maam!!


geet in her cabin

her phone rang

geet- hello

guy- hey  cutie!!

geet- tum...tum phone rakh do...varna!!Angry

guy- etna gussa...not good for u!!Wink

guy- vaise...


part- 20- FINISHED

part 21- i dont know

so whom you think is he??


 hope u like it

do comment and hit like button!!

will update when ever possible!!

hope u all liking it???


Edited by ishanidhi08 - 24 November 2011 at 4:53am

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angelwords Goldie

Joined: 13 November 2010
Posts: 2123

Posted: 24 November 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Big smileWinkBig smile thank you all...for ur  comments and like!!!
keep reading!!!...hope u all like itSmile

will reply to ur soon as i will be free...from my hetic shedule!!!
till then thanks all of u...keep reading and tell me u like it or not!!!Smile

Edited by ishanidhi08 - 24 November 2011 at 4:56am

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angel_smily IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 March 2011
Posts: 4835

Posted: 24 November 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
nice part
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 17 September 2010
Posts: 30379

Posted: 24 November 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
awesome update
Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 December 2010
Posts: 14935

Posted: 24 November 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
awesum part...
maneet toh lala land mein hainLOL

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soni4eva IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 November 2010
Posts: 8258

Posted: 24 November 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
awsum update luvd it
plzz cont soon x

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ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8687

Posted: 25 November 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
fab uodate...confusion pe aur confusion and ab new entry bhi...waiting dear

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9staroneserials IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 November 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged

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