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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] (Page 5)

Rockyy_ Senior Member

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Hey great chapter, Clap.

Can't wait to find out what this thing with Pia is all about that its driving JB apart.

Continue soon please. Take care.

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Anjinie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Hey Archi i hope u have not forgetten us. Pls give us a preview of wats to cum, sorry to have disturbed u. Take care

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suwas IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
please update Archi

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-Archi- Goldie

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Hey Guys,

Sorry for the late post. I was caught up with my new job.
Anyway, thanks for your comments! Greatly appreciated. Tongue
Here is the next part!

Edited by -Archi- - 28 June 2011 at 12:10am
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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged

Chupanke Ki Saaza
 -PART 4-
 A Taste of Her Own Medicine

"Bye Papa," Bani said, as she bent down to take her father's blessings. It was almost week since she had the 'talk' with her mother and made reservations back to Canada. While her mother tried her best convince her otherwise, Bani remained firm on her decision and refused to even talk to her.
"Take care Beta," Nishikant said. "Dhyaan se jaana!"
"Papa," Bani said, rolling her eyes. "How many times did I travel to Canada and back?"
Nishikant smiled. "But you are still my baby. Kal jab tumhare baache ho, tab bhi tum meri bachi hi rahogi!"
Bani ignored the comment about her children. That was not going to happen, but she didn't want to break the news to her father yet. He had enough to worry about, without his daughter's broken marriage.
"Mujhe late ho raha hai," Bani said. "I have to go." She gave one look to her mother, who remained emotionless and said, "Bye Maa."
And with that, turned her back on India and proceeded to the checkings. The lady at the counter smiled and asked for her passport.
"I am sorry to say Ma'am," the lady said, after scanning the barcode. "But your passport is expired."
Bani raised her eyebrows in confusion. "How is that possible? I just renewed it last year!"
"But it clearly says on the system that your passport expired yesterday!"
Shocked, Bani looked at the computer screen that the lady turned for her and sure enough, in big red letters, it said her passport was expired.
"But I booked a ticket and everything," Bani said.
"I am sorry Ma'am," the lady replied. "But you cannot travel without a valid passport."
Bani was outraged. "Who is your manager? Let me talk to him!"
"But it won't make a difference," the lady said calmly. "No one can do anything with an expired passport. The only thing you can do is figure out how your passport expired early!"
Bani nodded dejected and took the number for the passport office. After being on hold for more than an hour, she was able to get in touch with a senior manager, who could not offer much of an explanation.
"An internal problem ma'am," he said.
"What problem?" Bani asked, annoyed.
"Uhh... Paperwork. Your documents are not correct."
"Seriously?" Bani yelled. "Thats all you can tell me after two hours of being on hold? What paperwork? What went wrong?"
The manged fumbled, nervous at the direct questioning. "I am sorry Ma'am, but I don't control whats wrong. I just tell you whats on the computer!"
"Oh really?" Bani said, sarcastically. "Then why the hell are you called a MANAGER? If you do not tell me the issue, I will have to complaint against you!"
Now the man trembled and stuggled to find a way to explain to his customer the fault.  "No, please don't do that. I am telling you, these are orders from board to cancel your passport and I can't do anything about that!"
"And why would the board cancel my passport?"
"Umm... Well, think about it. The board does only what benefits them. So, cancelling your passport would have been profitable to them."
"You know... bribe..."
"BRIBE?" Bani was shocked. "But... but that happens only in hindi movies!"
The man laughed. "But its true."
"Why would someone waste their money to stop me from going?" And even as she said it, she understood.
"I don't know," the man replied, relieved that Bani atleast stopped yelling. "I am sorry that I can't offer anything else."
"Thank you so much," she said, in gratitude. "And sorry for yelling at you."
And ending the call, she instructed the driver to take her to the Walia Industries.
* * *
Jai walked into the meeting room, to see all the board members stand up to greet him. He nodded and sat down at the front.
"Good morning everyone," He announced. "My father is out for the next week for the Pune project, so I will be filling in since, as you will agree, Ranveer has enough to do already!"
Ranveer shot him a smile. "Not as much you little brother," he replied.
Jai laughed. The board was surprised to see their MD in a good mood, after almost a month. They all smiled to see him happy, for Jai was more like a friend than thier boss.
"So, I know that this project is dragging," Jai said, coming back to business. "And I want to know why. For the first time in history, the Walia Industries are lagging behind."
And with that the meeting started, as Jai for the first time in days listened properly. The work, which seemed almost boring in the last month, did not seem mechanical anymore and like once upon a time, he enjoyed it.
It almost an hour later that the meeting was suddenly interrupted.
As Jai listened to the finances department explain the profit of the project, the door burst open and a fuming Bani walked it.
The room was silenced as everyone watched Jai continue to sit quietly in his chair with a smile on his face. No one knew or even suspected the elation of his heart as his eyes feasted on her.
"What the hell?" Bani yelled, not bothering to stop and think that the entire board of the Walia Industries was watching and listening to her.
"Good Morning Bani," Jai said, not affected by her anger. "Aaj yahan kaise?"
Bani glared at him. "You very well know why I am here! How dare you cancel my passport? Who the hell do you think you are?"
Everyone in the room looked away, not wanting to hear this personal fight between their boss and his wife.
"If your passport is cancelled, then call the agency. Not me."
Just when Bani was going to retort, Ranveer cleared his throat. "Ahem... Ladies and gentlemen, lets take a short break. We will resume the meeting after an hour."
"Fifteen minutes," Jai corrected.
Ranveer gave him a pointed look, which Jai understood well.
"We just need 15 minutes," Jai assured.
Thankful, everyone left the couple alone. Jai continued to sit in his chair, waiting for Bani to break the silence. When she didn't intend on saying something, he said, "You were saying...?"
Bani glared at his cool posture. "I was saying who the hell do you think you are to stop me from going to Canada?"
"I think," Jai replied. "That I am the MD of  the Walia Group of Industries and more importantly, your husband to stop you from running off."
"And so what? You control who leaves the country and who doesn't?"
"Correction," Jai said with a smile. "I control if my wife leaves the country or not."
"And since when do you consider me your wife?" Bani fumed. "Why the sudden concern for me, when our marriage was out of guilt?"
"True," Jai said, surprising Bani. "But that doesn't give you the permission to leave. Since you claim that our marriage was fake, you also have to prove it."
"What are you talking about?"
Jai smiled sarcastically. "The ever so smart  Bani, is not following me today? Thats news!"
Bani rolled her eyes. "If you think that you can play these childish games with me, then keep dreaming!"
"I think you are mistaken," Jai said. "You are the one who is being childish and running away, not me. It is you that left for a month, without bothering to sort things out, not me. It is you that is being childish and ignoring your family and their questions, not me!"
Bani didn't reply.
"And I am tired of your childish games Ms. Dixit," Jai said. "And hence, I decide to interfere."
"Oh really? And what is that?"
"As I was saying before," Jai said. "You need to prove that our marriage is fake in court."
"And why would I waste my time doing that?"
"Because I want a divorce."
There was silence in the room as Jai's words hung in the air. It was few moments, before Bani spoke.
"Yes, divorce," Jai said, standing up. "You have clearly expressed in the last month, you don't want to live with me. And I dont know how this relationship will work if you don't even want to see me. On top of that, I don't want to be bonded to a person, who stopped caring whether I live or die. So, yes, a divorce... I want out of this marriage."
"So you are the one suffering now?" Bani said, angry that Jai wanted divorce for himself. Despite everything that happened, she still craved for the care he had for her. His sudden lack of interest in her was painful. "And what about what I went through for the past month?"
"Of course," Jai said, in a very serious tone. "I understand the horror of you being called my wife, so this divorce is partly because of you too."
Bani was shocked at his words. "Horror?"
"You are being surprised alot today I see," Jai commented. "But never think I under estimate your sufferings. Because I dont. Jai Walia always values hard work and since you have put so much effot in the past month to remain miserable and angry, I won't let it go to waste."
"Stop it!" Bani said, annoyed at his serious tone and sarcastic comments.
"You see Ms. Dixit, its prudent for you to understand this concept of divorce, as I don't have all day."
Bani closed her eyes in frustration.
"So, tomorrow at 10am, we will go see the divorce lawyer, if you dont have any other appointments."
It was Bani's turn to laugh. "Seeing that you can even bribe government officials, I don't see why you won't bribe the lawyer. So, just tell me what you is it that you want."
Jai smiled. "Thats what I love about you. You understand everything so easily. Your flight was at 9 o'clock and it took you, what, an hour to figure out why your passport was cancelled?"
"I had help from the manager."
"I see," Jai said. "Its still impressive though. Things do not usually trace back to me. Anyway, you saved me time. About the lawyer, he already filed our case and before you ask, yes, I even have the verdict."
"Which is...?"
"Our divorce is not approved," Jai said calmly. "Its because both your family and mine, have both disagreed for it. However, I  argued and the usual procedure of the wife and husband living together for a year has been put in place. But, like you correctly guessed, I bribed the judge to make it a month."
Bani didn't know what hurt more. The fact that Jai wanted a divorce or that the fact that he willingly and purposefully reduced their time together to one month.
"One.. month?" she whispered, the truth finally sinking in.
"Yes," Jai continued, unaffected. "And since you have your bags already packed, why don't you just move into the Walia Mansion."
Bani didn't know how to react.
"And before you argue," Jai said, watching her expressions closely. "No, we don't have a choice. We have to live in the same room under the same roof for a month."
"No," Bani said, gaining her voice back. "I am not living with you."
"With that attitude, you can increase our time together for a year. And even if you don't mind, I do. So, yes, you have to live me... for a month. Now, excuse me. I have a meeting to attend."
And without a glance, Jai sat down and at once became absorbed in his laptop. Having no other option, Bani left.
When the board finally assembled, Ranveer, whispered "What happened?"
"Gave her a taste of her own medicine," Jai said and told the finances to continue their  presentation.

Waiting for your comments!


Edited by -Archi- - 28 June 2011 at 12:10am

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Rockyy_ Senior Member

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Superb chapter Archi, totally enjoyed it.

Love how Jai turned the table on Bani, can't wait for more

fireworks to fly between these two.

Do continue when you have the time, the story is going great.Clap

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Anjinie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Thanks Archi'for a beautifull update will be waiting for the next one

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orchidpurple Goldie

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Firstly,  Thank you for updating
Loved the update...

Jai cancelled Bani's passport...
poor Bani has to live with Jai for 1 month...
She wouldn't know what hit her...LOL
Waiting for the fireworks between JB...

As always...will be waiting for next update...
Please continue...

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