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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] (Page 47)

zarlish18 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged


and bani better choose jais more loops WinkLOL

update soon

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..Naina.. IF-Veteran Member

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
phew reserved ^_^


Aww! I'm not first! I am heartbroken.

Anywho. Wow. The last two chapters! You have this way of penning down a character's emotions that makes it all seem more than real. I'm not even lying. In the last chapter, just hearing Jai blame himself, and them expressing their love, just was very moving. And phew, with this chapter, you sure gave me a moment's worth of panic when I read about Rano being in the hospital. poor Ranveer :( But aww they had a sweet moment. I really loved how Ranveer and Rano interacted after the baby was born. Poor Bani though. Glad to see Jai was there for her, and even more glad to see how Rano made Bani kind of rethink what's going on. Looking forward to seeing what her decision will be (Coughcough. Pleasepleaseplease let it be what we all want it to be LOL) But you had betteer continue this soon! I don't think I'll be able to stand an impossibly long wait!


Edited by Naina2127 - 17 June 2012 at 6:52pm

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orchidpurple Goldie

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Amazing and a very emotional update...
Rano going into early labor...finally all was fine in the end...
Loved the way the Doctor described Ranveer's devotion to Rano
At this, the doctor couldn't help but smile. She watched Ranveer very closely during the last couple of months. And for the first time in her career, she was more worried about his condition than that of her patient, because she knew that he wouldn't survive if anything happened to Rano. Even though she rarely saw him, for he seldom accompanied Rano on appointments, it was very easy to pick up the utmost care he had for his wife. She didn't even know how he would react, if Rano didn't make it through."

And Rano guessed right what would be Ranveer's condition with her life at stake ...

Loved the emotional and jealous least helped her realize what she wants...

Waiting for her final announcement of the decision...

Thx for the PM

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alicia212 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really loving this story of your right now
thanks for the pm

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Proud-BrownGirl Senior Member

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
Superb chapter Archi.
Good all worked out well for Rano, but not fair leaving us hanging about
what Bani decision will be.
Update real soon, I don't want to have sleepless nights thinking about this LOL.

Thanks for the PM Hug

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jeevikagurl88 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Wonderful parts.
Can't wait to know Bani's decision. Hope it is a good decision.
Please do continue soon.

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archita_59 Groupbie

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Posted: 18 June 2012 at 11:39am | IP Logged
WOW... honestly, tht was soo good.
Please continue... im dying to know what her decision is!
Thanks so much!

P.S. - the FF is ending? Unhappy

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music_girl IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 June 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
waiting for next
sincere apologises...couldn't make it earlier...
thank you for pm

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