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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] (Page 37)

orchidpurple Goldie

Joined: 26 April 2010
Posts: 1007

Posted: 24 April 2012 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Pls don't stop here...  :(
what an update...they kissed...
aag dono taraf lagi thi...

And...Annie knows the truth...loved the way you painted her reaction to "Mrs Bani Jai Walia"...

And a Valentine's surprise...

Pls continue...want to see ..what's in store for Bani...

Pls Pls Pls continue Soon ...sooner...soonest...
pretty please


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jeevikagurl88 Senior Member

Joined: 06 January 2008
Posts: 458

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Awesome part.
Can't wait to know what is Jai planning for her.
Please let them get back together soon.
Can't wait for the next part.
Please do continue soon.

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neethurose Senior Member

Joined: 28 November 2009
Posts: 267

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Loved the update

Good Job Thumbs Up

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archita_59 Groupbie

Joined: 03 August 2006
Posts: 158

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
They kissed!!! WOHOOO!
Plzz update soon!

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starrystar Groupbie

Joined: 09 March 2012
Posts: 73

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Hi archie, 

Thanks for the pm. 
Loved the last two updates. 
Finally Jai told Neil that Bani was his wife ... hahah his reaction was funny. 
But annie's reaction was hillarious. Heheheh bomb phuta, aur woh kaise bhi.  bechari annie.

Boy o boy, what will bani see when she enters jai's cabin. 

Oh la la Valentinesday 

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bhanu Goldie

Joined: 08 July 2005
Posts: 1066

Posted: 25 April 2012 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Yes i have one comment, i am really disappointed with you, it is not fair to stop at that point, common  we have to wait until next time to know what  surprise jai is going to give bani,

I hope it is good and not a bad news...

But the way you stopped i have a feeling next update is going to be bad news for bani

But anyways great update and always on my toes for the new update, pls dont make us wait for long...

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Ezther Senior Member

Joined: 05 July 2007
Posts: 662

Posted: 26 April 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
good going Archi...please let's not find another reason for drama in Jai's office...Shocked
anyway I love the track its on...

let's see where it takes us yeah?Thumbs Up

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-Archi- Goldie

Joined: 07 June 2006
Posts: 1181

Posted: 26 April 2012 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
@sowmya18: Thanks hun! Will be updating in a bit! 

@Naina2127: Thanks! I had too much writing the Annie part. I legit felt sorry for her after. LOL And yes, Im telugu too! what a coincidence! Wink

@Anjinie: Thanks hun! Hopefully you like Jai's 'surprise'!

@soodr: Thanks Ria! Im glad you are still reading and liking the story. And sorry about the cliffhanger, but i couldn't resist the urge to stop there! LOL

@lovelyyrose: Umm... you will find out what Jai's surprise is soon enough! Wink

@Alicia2001: Thanks hun!

@zarlish18: aww! Thanks soo much! Embarrassed I just read wayy too many books! Wink More JB? Coming right up! LOL

@orchidpurple: absolutely! Aag dono taraf lagi hai! WinkLOL Will definitely update soon! Thanks for commenting!

@jeevikagurl88: Thanks for the comment! They will get back together soon. No worries! Big smile

@neethurose: Thanks soo much!

@archita_59: Thanks!

@starrystar: Yes, i have a blast writing Neil's and Annie's reactions. I planned in at the very beginning of the story, and had to wait soo long to finally be able to write it! LOL Thanks for commenting hun! Im hoping you will like Jai's 'surprise'.

@bhanu: sorry hun, but i just had to leave it a cliffhanger! LOL and bad news for Bani... Ermm well, i won't keep you waiting for long! Big smile

@Ezther: how can this story move forward without drama? ShockedLOL And on top of that i watch too many soaps for my own good, but alas, i will try my best to make Jai's 'surprise' worthwhile! Wink 

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