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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] (Page 35)

Anjinie IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
I enjoyed every bit of what u have written @least Ranveer no's a little of Jai's life were Pia was concerned. I also like how u got Traun thinking of Jai & Bani. Pls give us some insight on Jai's past with Pia really app... Thanks

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lovelyyrose IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
the story till now is good... is dis the end...??/

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Coldpies Newbie
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM Archie. Good to have you back on board and hopefully ur exams went fine.

Good of you to bring all the characters together and them trying to figure out whatever is going on between JB.

So are we going to have a meeting of the boys where they are going to corner Jai and ask him whats going on. I hope you will update soon as i cant wait for the next instalment.

You are keeping us on ur toes.

Thanks

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zarlish18 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged

ClapFINALLY U UPDATED

THANK U

AND IT WAS JUST AWSME

Clap I JUST HOPE 2 C MORE JAI BANI PART IN UPCOMING UPDATES WID MORE MUSHY STUFFWink LOL

REPLY SOOON

N THANK U FOR UR PMClap

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Proud-BrownGirl Senior Member
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Hope Bani can move on with life after witnessing the love and affection Jai
has for her and leave her sister's demons to rest in peace.

Like always Archi, another superb chapter.Clap Totally enjoying this story, can't get enough of it.

P.S, hope you have another JB in the works when this comes to the end.LOL

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jeevikagurl88 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Great part.
Can't wait for the next part.
Please do continue soon.

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archita_59 Groupbie
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Joined: 03 August 2006
Posts: 158

Posted: 22 April 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Loved rano and ranveer... They r so cutee! Maybe tarun n ranveer will put some sense into jai?!
Thanks for nice part. Plzz update soon!

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-Archi- Goldie
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Joined: 07 June 2006
Posts: 1181

Posted: 23 April 2012 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
@ Naina2127 - Thanks for reserving the spot! LOL I can't believe im actually updating before you commented. I think I broke all records today. Shocked

@orchidpurple - Yes, one less misunderstanding, a hundred more to go! LOL Thanks for the comment hun!

@sowmya18 - Your comment made my day too! Thanks! Big smile

@Alicia2001 - Thanks hun! Tongue

@Anjinie - Thanks! Will definitely work showing Jai and Pia's relationship... it got me thinking! Wink

@lovelyyrose - No hun, there still a lot left for the story. This part was just a turning point for the story, because Bani finally establishes that she doesn't hate Jai, which is progress from the beginning of the story. Wink

@Coldpies - Exams were... well, exams. Bearable! LOL Boys cornering Jai... thats a good idea. But not exactly the reason why I included Ranveer and Tarun. But you will find out soon enough! Wink

@ zarlish18 - Thanks! Yes, JB scenes are on their way. You will def like the next two-three parts! Wink

@Proud-BrownGirl - Thanks hun! Another JB... its really appealing, but i have sooo many ideas for stories, that i can officially earn a P.hD. in fanfic-ing on IF! LOL 

@ music_girl - Thanks! Big smile

@ jeevikagurl88 - Thank you! Big smile

@ archita_59 - Ummm... Tarun and Ranveer are both imp to the story for diff reasons. But you will find out soon enough! Thanks for commenting! Big smile

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