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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] (Page 19)

orchidpurple Goldie
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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Bani is jealous and Jai taking advantage to it!!!
Nice update...
Please continue...

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Lovely update, it seems like Bani is feeling left out. Maybe now she is understanding what she feels 4 Jai. Thanks 2 Annie that is have these feeling 4 Jai and wanting him, wonder if Jai feels the same for Bani. Waiting 4 da next update. Thanks

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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
managed to read till part 11 and glad to see that Jai and Bani atleast are cordial towards each other.

p.s thanks once again for the pm.
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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
What an update Archi. You have left me with wanting more.

Good on Jai for giving Bani a hard time and making her realise her feelings for him.

I bet they are actually kissing and its not Bani's dream. It would be good to see how Bani reacts if something did happen between them.

Looking forward to your next update.

Thanks
sowmya18 Goldie
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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
loved ur update and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Loved the update! Totally not liking Annie at all -_-

Anywho, continue soon!

Cheers!
Naina
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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
update soon...
eagerly waiting...
-Archi- Goldie
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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Proud-BrownGirl


Annie is becoming irritating like a fruit fly. Angry

About time Bani tells her who JW belongs too and make

her day dreaming Day Dreaming a reality Wink  


Clap Clap Clap

Thanks! Yeah... Annie is supposed to be irritating, how else would Bani realize her hubby is precious?! WinkLOL

Originally posted by Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm looking forward to your next part of the story

Thanks Alicia! Big smile

Originally posted by music_girl

awesome
story
archi...
do cont. soon

Thank you! Big smile

Originally posted by bhanu

Great update and thanks for sending the link

Thanks! Big smile

Originally posted by jeevikagurl88

Sorry for not commenting earlier.

Both parts were great.
Please do continue soon.

No worries! Thanks for commenting now! Big smile

Originally posted by zarlish18

amazing update

Clap


Thanks Zarlish! Big smile

Originally posted by lovelyyrose

yearning for jai was superbly expressed...
 
waiting for next part...

Thank you soo much! It was hard to write trying to describe Bani's feelings, when she herself doesn't know them! WinkBig smile





Edited by -Archi- - 10 February 2012 at 4:15pm

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