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PKYEK FF: Lost in Translation Part 5 Pg 5 UpDaTeD! (Page 3)

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
Part 3
 
 
 
 
The three girls were settling into their chairs at the dining table when the bell rang.
 
"I will get it!" Panchhi rushed off to open the door. Misha leant forward and told Pia in a conspiratorial tone, "Pakka Daanish hoga. Tabhi chehak rahi hai Birdie." Pia smiled uncomfortably and excused herself. She went to the kitchen.
 
"Aunty, main aapki help kar doon?"
 
Madhu Dobriyal looked up, startled, and the loaded tray she was carrying trembled. Pia rushed forward to steady it.
 
"Pia! Tum jaa kar baitho na table pe. I will manage."
 
"Nahin aunty, please let me help."
 
Madhu stood indecisively for a few moments, then told Pia to bring in extra cutlery for Daanish, who could be heard sharing a joke with Misha. Pia turned away quietly, and Madhu felt a bit weird - like something was wrong.
 
"Pia?" she said quietly.
 
"Ji aunty?"
 
"Beta, kuch problem hai?"
 
Pia went absolutely still. A moment later, she picked up the tray with the cutlery and said, "No aunty. Everything is fine."
 
"Sure?"
 
"Yes aunty." she replied, looking down at a spoon. "I think we should take this in", she said when Madhu continued to look at her.
 
"Yes. Of course."
 
They left the kitchen.
 
The moment they entered the drawing room, Daanish rushed forward to take the tray from Madhu. Pia silently moved to the table and started laying out the cutlery for Daanish. As she was placing the fork, she felt Daanish come up close to her. "Hey baby. You are looking hot today." he whispered in her ear. Pia stiffened. Her face burned. Aloud he said, "How's my little sister-in-law today?"
 
Pia knew she had to answer him, what with all the faces turned expectantly towards her. "Fine." she managed to choke out.
 
"That's my girl!" said Daanish affectionately, as he hugged her hard. As soon as she could without being too obvious, Pia pulled away from him and sat down next to Misha, opposite Panchhi.
 
Misha frowned, but then her attention was distracted by the entry of her father. Hmmm...something is definitely wrong...but I will have to investigate it later.
 
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
It is going very smoothly. I am glad that you were able to update even after you lost everything in the lappy crash. 

Awesome. What is this Danish upto? He is a womaniser, right? And what happened to the shadow thing?

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Continue soon

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
nice partClapClap
danish character is confusing is he  a womaniser?Confused
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

It is going very smoothly. I am glad that you were able to update even after you lost everything in the lappy crash. 

Awesome. What is this Danish upto? He is a womaniser, right? And what happened to the shadow thing?
 
Thank you Ritzie. I did have a sword hanging over my head for motivation... Wink Just kidding! ROFL
 
Daanish...looks like it. Ouch
 
@shadow...the mystery continues! ROFL
 
 

Originally posted by pari_smart

Awesome update

Continue soon
 
Thank you Pari. Smile
 
 

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

nice partClapClap
danish character is confusing is he  a womaniser?Confused
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink
 
Thank you Mansim. Smile
 
Daanish is behaving weirdly...I wouldn't feel comfortable with his current behaviour myself...a womaniser though? That depends...
 
 
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Nice continuation Adi. *thumbs up*
 
And Oh God! Danish is such ***! He is acting wierdly even here! Im not liking it. Poor Piya. Ouch
 
Waiting to learn more about each character esp...Abhay! Embarrassed
 
And haan woh shadow ke bhi darshan kara dena. LOL

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
awesome FF.I think darnish is behind Pia.I m waiting 4 abhay & Pia.Add me in ur PM list

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