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loved the part ...awesome!!!

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wow great love dev and his idea conti soon please
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PART 5-

 

 

While geet goes to freshen up dev asked daadi to ask bro first then geet .what if bro doesn't like it it will turn worst situation for geet .

Daadi - umm you are right . let go & eaten  up breakfast.

 

 

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Maan waken up by the sound of song which was playing in the hall . he was irritate & half in his sleep.he turn & found an empty bed now he jerk awake oh god where is anvesha .he look at the watch 11 AM .holy crap what am I doing in my bed  was I overslept today is chopra meeting at 11 how am I suppose to attend that meeting while thinking this he call adi .

 

Adi - good morning sir

Maan- adi postpone chopra meeting at 1 PM I will be late

Adi- there is no need to be postpone it  sir as dev sir is already there to attend that meeting

Maan- dev is in office

Adi - yes sir

Maan- ok give me all the detail after meeting .

Adi - ok sir.

 

After the call maan goes to washroom to do his dailies & get ready for his lunch he came out of his room  & bang on geet who is going to her room . she lost her balance & about to fall but before she touch the ground maan grab her hand so she landed on his chest  geet breath heavily her eyes was tight shut fear is on her face she clenched his shirt . her breathe tickling him. He is losing his control . all he saw her red lips parted due to fear . as he is about to close the distance they heard someone giggle . geet opens her eyes & turn away from him she is all red in face this is her first time she ever come that close to some male . maan comes on reality & look at geet who is embraced due to her act so he turn to anu who is laughing both of them

Maan- why r u laughing dear

Anu - look at maasima she is hell scared

Geet- shut up

Maan - it's ok ur maasi was scared because she is about to fall tell me when u fall u r scared or not

Anu- yes . But why is maasima is red

Maan- because she is scared

 

They can't continue their argument because daadi heard maan voice  calls him

Geet - anu come

Anu follows geet

Maan went to daadima & eat his lunch meanwhile daadi asked maan  do he has any problem if geet lived here & doing job in KC as his secretary .

Maan- no I have no problem infact it it the best idea if she accepted it I don't know if she liked it or not .

Daadi- don't worry I will talk to her about it

Maan- m leaving for office daadi thank you for sending dev in the office

Daadi- it's nothing  have a nice day .

 

 

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Geet is in her room while packing she is thinking about maan  how near him I lost my control  on myself wat is happing with me why I have longing to look into his eyes . anu cry take her into reality

Geet- wat happen now

Anu- I don't want to go anywhere I want to live with maan uncle

Geet- that's not possible

Daadi- that possible

Geet- daadima maan  na vasa hi hum par bahut ahsaan kiya hai a aura nahi

Daadi  isma ahsaan wali koi  baat nahi hai ahsaan to app ne hum par kiya hai maan ki muskaraht loota ka .

Daadi told geet the whole story of maan how he loved sameera how sameera betrayed him  . daadi took geet to maan's mother room where she lay in coma .

Daadi - geet yesterday is the 1st day maan couldn't come to meet her mother because of u & anvesha because he was very happy he forget all his worries . we saw 1st time simling maan after that incident in last 5 years . plz ...

She chocked

Geet- daadi plz ... I will do whatever in my strength .

Daadi- listen geet wherever u go u  have to find a place to live & for that u need a decent job .

Geet- umm

Daadi- I have both here for u we have a outhouse where u can live & maan need a secretary in his office .

Geet- but daadi what will maan think ki jab sa mili hu unhi sa chipki hui ho

Daadi - don't u worry about maan I talked to him already he agree with me .u take ur time & tell me .

 

 

 

 

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Maan in his office thinks about geet that how he felt differently when geet was close to him . he never think like that for any other girl nor even for sameera . why it is so different. His thought come into halt because of knock on the door.

Maan- come in

Sasha- mk today we schedule for the interview of ur secretary . the interview starts in an hour .

Maan- umm

As Sasha took her leave  maan pick up his cell & call daadi .

Daadi- hello

Maan- daadi I want to ask u

Daadi- what is geet answer

Maan- umm

Daadi- her answer is yes

Maan ' thanks daadi no I have to cancel the interview  bye daadi

Daadi- bye

Maan cuts the call & call sasha to cancel the interview

 

 

Sasha- what happen mk all sudden

Maan- I have already find my secretary so there is no need for interview

Sasha- what but who

Maan- tomorrow you will meet her with a simle touching his face

Sasha wonder mk smile who is she . mere her thought cause a smile on his face .

 

 

 

 

 

 

Precap- geet first day in the office .

 

 

 

Thanx for all beautiful comments it motivates me

Plz like & comment more  

With lots of love

      Sanul

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 6- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1690175&TPN=9

 



Edited by sanul - 18 June 2011 at 12:51pm

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
wow loved the update...
both getting affected by the close proximity...
maan ne jhat se ok keh diya...
so his past is sameera and his mom is in come...
even geet accepted the offer and she will b with maan in office...
ab dhekthey hain aagey kya hotha hain

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lovly upd...
lov it...

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awesome ...


thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

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awsoem update.

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Awesome.waiting 4 nxt update

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