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part 2

after reaching delhi maan takes geet to st. mary government girls hostel. When they reached hostel maan stopped the car with halt geet comes out from her thoughts & look confusedly at maan . geet this is not your home this is my car & in front of u is a government girls hostel go & get booked urself there this is a safe place for a girl like u. geet nodded & says thank u to maan & come out with anvesha in her lap & with her bag .when she enters the building maan stars the car & moves on his way to home . maan keeps thinking of geet how he saved her to her own brother brij & his frnds who wants to take life of geet & little anvesha but why? Then he goes to police station to complain the whole episode with geet how the officer is looking at geet with hungry eyes he wants to beat that bas**** with his bare hands maan thought comes to halt at the ringing of his phone .he stopped the car & saw the number he don't want to pick up but seeing the time he was sure it's the emergence.

Maan- hello

Dev-hi bro it's dev here

Maan-hmm

Dev- actually I want to ask u where r u

Maan-I reached delhi will be at home in an hour

Dev- give me a favor I placed the order for cake at caf @9 for daadi today her birthday u remember plz collect that at yr way back

Maan- ok sure & thanks for reminding me

Dev- thanks bro bye see u in hour

On the other hand when geet enter the premises she saw a lady with very strict face .

Geet- hello mam I m geet I want to enroll myself in ur hostel

Lady is now looking at anvesha with question

Geet- oh she is anvesha my si'. My daughter

Lady- but children r not allowed in our hostel so u have to go somewhere else

Geet-but it is too late can u let us stay one night plz

Lady- no dear rule is rule but I know a place where u can stay a night without any difficulty it's on karolbag near at the [email protected] there is daramshala named deshmuki dharamshala take a cab from here u will be there in 10 min.

Geet- thanks

Then she waited for a cab for 5 min. & found one give the address to the driver  .

Maan & geet reached there at the same time but both have their backs towards each other so can't see each other as maan goes to [email protected] to collect the cake & geet goes to dharamshala  as she enters the dharamshala she smells sumthing fishy there so all she do asked for rooms rent & says sorry to the reception man & comes out she stands outside the building & was in deep thinking  she heard anvesha called maan uncle maan uncle

Geet want to stop her but it's to late maan saw them & rushed towards them

 

Maan- wat r u doing here when I drop u at hostel?

Geet ' they said children r not allowed in hostel so they tell me for that place

Maan- & u came here without thinking that wat typed placed is this now tell me where u want to go I would drop u do u have any relative in the city

Geet- no but my childhood frnd lived here but I don't know her address & I can't call her now as it is already late.

Maan thinks for a moment & suggested that she stayed in his house for one night

Geet wildly look him & says sorry

Maan ' I lived with my family so don't take it otherwise as u already tell me it's late & u don't know the address of ur frnd  so come with me & stay one night at my home in morning my driver will drop u & anvesha  wherever u want.

Precap- wat say geet agree with maan or not.

 

 

 

 

Part 3-

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Edited by sanul - 18 June 2011 at 12:57pm

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lovly...
i thk she wil agree as she hs no place 2 go
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thanx 4 d update.
Its realy nice.
I think Geet will agree.
Cont soon.

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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

does she hv a choice ...

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awesome update she will agree for sure thank you for update and pm
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interesting storyline...
sent u buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list...
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Part 3-

 

Maan ' I lived with my family so don't take it otherwise as u already tell me it's late & u don't know the address of ur frnd  so come with me & stay one night at my home in morning my driver will drop u & anvesha  wherever u want.

Geet look at him with open mouth & thinks what kind of man he is . he saved her life from brij veerji then snapped on police officer on looking at her with desiring eyes then get brij veerji arrested because of him after hearing his name PO did full attention to their report then dropped her delhi girls hostel & know he offer her to stay in his house as a guest .

Maan saw that geet is looking him with open mouth there r various emotions come & go in geet face maan can't fully able to understand that wat she thinks.

Maan- geet geet

Geet came out in her thoughts & stares blankly at him

Maan 'so what u decided

Geet ' I don't know

Maan ' now listen to me very carefully u have to go with me

Geet- but wat about ur family members wat they all think when they saw me & anu with u

Maan- nobody thinks nothing

With that maan forcefully take her hand lead  her towards his car . geet shockingly look at maan & he snapped her ' shut ur mouth with that anu giggles but geet's one angry stare make her stop in midway.

After 15 min. they reached at KM .geet jaw drop at the sight of KM . maan leads her to drawing room where daadi & dev waiting for him .he bade daadi happy birthday & give the cake to nakul who goes to the kitchen & comes with cake candle & knife . in between daadi  inquiry for geet to maan

Maan ' daadi she is geet & little princess is anvesha they were neighbor of munshiji in HP she wants to come delhi so I dropped her girls hostel but they refused to booked her  because of princess so I offer them to stay at our place as guest .

Daadi ' maan ye appna bahut aacha kiya vasa bhi itna time ho gaya tha ye akali kaha jaati come beta come don't be shy  . she extend her hand towards geet . make her sit comfortably with them

Anu- maasima can I go & sit with maan uncle

Before geet answers her, maan ' yes my princess come

Anvesha run towards maan & sit in his lap very comfortably & plays with his hand & maan simle widely. Daadi & dev exchage their look & geet looks lost at maan .

Maan- daadi cake is here plz cut it my princess & me r starving so we can eat it

Anu- yes daadi plz

Geet ' anvesha

Maan & daadi- leave her geet she is only child

After eating cake dev daadi  maan geet & anvesha have their dinner . at dinner anvesha made maan to feed her with his plate all looked at maan very happily . after finishing their dinner they all went to their respective room for sleep .

 

 

 

Precap- anvesha missing QuestionQuestionQuestion

 

Thanx for all beautiful comments it motivates me

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With lots of love

      Sanul



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