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FF: Nivren - Dosti aur Pyaar Chapter 12 Updated (Page 3)

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Awesome...just read ur character sketch and the two chapters...loved both the chapters...can't wait to read the next chapter...pls if possible give us nivren meeting soon...Big smile...thank u so much for this nice ff...!!Hug

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awesum yaar love it soo much plz continue anything with nivren are close to my heart plz continue sorry for late replyy.
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Wonderful ff dear...pls continue soon...wanna see nivren's first meeting!!
Loved te chapters very much...
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hey nice intro...
do continue waiting for next update
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lOVED yur FF.. sweetiie loolll,,,,,,, Carry on with it and Upload Chapter 2 
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lovely intro yaar Smile cant wait for nivren's meeting
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Thank you to everyone who commented. Seen as though you have all waited patiently here is part 3.

Part 3

Nivi walked it to the office and Viren had driven there. They both walked in at the same time at P.C Industries (their work place). Viren accidently bumped into Nivi and made her drop everything on the floor. Nivi bent down to collect her things, when Viren also went down and hit each other's head.

Viren said, "Sorry! I didn't see you come in!" While rubbing his head.

Nivi replied, "It's ok!" While rubbing her head as well.

Viren helped her collect her things, he turned to see her when he noticed how pretty she was. Nivi never realised that he was looking at her. He quickly turned back and gave her a hand up.

"Hi, I'm Viren." He said politely.  

"Hi, I'm Nivedita and I'm new here."

"Oh ok! Well that's a good thing that I bumped into you, I can show you the boss's office."

They started to walk to the boss's office.

KNOCK! KNOCK!

"Come in!"

"Sir, this is Nivedita. She's new and has started today." Viren said.

"Ok. Thank you."

Viren left and the boss explained everything to Nivi about the company.

"You will be working with our other creative designer, Viren."

Nivi was shocked to hear that Viren was the creative designer and was shy to work with him after this morning's incident. However, she managed to convince her mind that it was her job and everything would be fine.

Viren was daydreaming in his cabin about Nivi. He couldn't keep his eyes off her. He found her attractive. For the first time, he found a girl that didn't drool over him or get hyped about talking to him. He loved the fact that she wore a simple, pink salwar kameez unlike some other girls he saw in the office wearing short dresses. He knew that he was attracted to her. Her eyes pulled him towards her the most. They were a dark brown/black colour that glimmered and stood out.

KNOCK! KNOCK!

"Come in!" Viren shouted because someone had disturbed his beautiful dream!

Nivi walked and Viren was shocked because he was just thinking about her.

"Woh, Sir said that I have to work with you on any upcoming projects."

"So, are you the creative designer?" Viren asked.

"Yes. So what do we have to do?" Nivi replied.

Viren was happy on the inside but didn't show it. He explained the work and Nivi left for her office. She settled down and got straight down to work.

A while later

Nivi managed to finish the work quicker than she thought. She sat back thinking when her phone went off. It was Nisha.

"Hey Nivi, how's work?" she asked.

"Hi Nisha. Yeah everything's fine."

They talked a while until Viren came.

"Nisha, I'll see you at home."

Nivi ended the call and Viren said "I'm sorry if I disturbed you."

"No it's ok. Is there something you wanted?" Nivi asked.

Viren thought yeah to see you.

He actually came to see if she finished the work he gave her. Viren was amazed at what he saw. She made the best collage piece he has ever saw. He thought that it was beautiful and so was she. He admired her for the fact that she put so much effort in a simple task.

It was turning lunch time so Viren decided to take Nivi out.

RING! RING!

"Hello"

Viren loved hearing her voice, it was calming for him and made him feel relaxed.

"Hello?" said Nivi puzzled.

"Oh umm hi. It's me Viren. I was just wondering would you like to come out with me for lunch?"

"Um...ok." Nivi said not knowing what she actually said.

"Teek hai. Meet me in my cabin in 10 minutes."

Viren was ecstatic and was over the moon. This was the time to really get to know each other. Who knew what could happen from there?

Sorry guys if that dragged on a bit!!!! Let me know what you think!!

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