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FF: Nivren - Dosti aur Pyaar Chapter 12 Updated (Page 10)

Alphabet26 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
loved it ... so nivi also started feeling for viren... hope b4 he tell her his love, nisha tells shruthi or viren about nivi's feeling...

roops82 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
It was good Nivren are in love..Day Dreaming
chandmeinchupi Goldie

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
very nice dear continue soon
dyhardfan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Wow Nivi loves Viren too:) can't wait for the next chapter... Thanks dear.
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Superb dear, please update soon.
Faj10 Groupbie

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Hey guys! I'm sooo sorry that I have took this long to post up another part!!!!!! I have had exams and am going to be having more exams in the coming weeks so it is going to be hard to post up parts but I will try. As you all know that CCBM has ended and I am sad about that but I am going to carry on my FF if you guys want. So here is the next part!

Part 9
Shruti's wedding day had arrived. Everyone was busy checking everything, making sure nothing was wrong or put out of place. Shruti was nervous and needed Nivi by her side.

"VIREN!" Shruti shouted.

"Ha Di!" Viren said coming into the room.

"Phone Nivi and tell her to come over now." She said.

"Ok." He replied not knowing why she wanted her to come over.

He immediately called Nivi after.

"Hello, ha Viren bolo."

"Di wants you to come over now!"


"Ha pata nahi kyu."

"Teek hai mein abhi aati hoon. Bye."

When Nivi arrived, everyone was busy that they didn't notice her by the door.

Even Viren passed her without looking!

Kamya was rushing past when Nivi grabbed her arm, "Tayiji slow down!"

"Arre Nivi beta, tum kab aayi?" she asked.

"Bas abhi" she replied "Di kaha hai?"

Kamya said that she was in her room so Nivi made her way up. When she went in she saw Shruti pacing up and down the room. Shruti stopped when she saw Nivi. She went up to her and dragged her into the room.

"What's wrong Di, why did you want me to come over now?" Nivi asked concerned.

Shruti said nothing and to wait there. Nivi was growing even more confused.

Shruti came back and gifted Nivi with a beautiful blue saree.

"Yeh kya? Di I can't..."

Shruti interrupted, "Yes you can! You accepted me as your sister right?"

Nivi accepted defeat and took the present. Shruti smiled and hugged Nivi.

"Actually I did call you for something else. I'm so nervous, I hope everything goes right." Shruti said.

Nivi reassured her and said everything would be fine.

Everyone was ready including Shruti. Nivi had put the final touches on her and looked at her.

"You look gorgeous Di!" Nivi said.

Shruti thanked her and said that it was because of her of that she was looking stunning today.

It was time. Nivi took Shruti downstairs, everyone turned to see Shruti. Viren saw everyone turning but didn't know why. He turned around and saw the two standing at the top making their way down. Viren was thinking, when did Nivi come, I didn't see her? He looked at her and she looked remarkable in the saree given to her by Shruti. Her hair was curled and left out. Viren couldn't stop staring at her.

They had been separated when the ceremony was happening. Nivi actually couldn't see Viren at all. A little while later, it was time for Shruti to leave.

Kamya had tears in her eyes and so did Shruti, she couldn't keep them in. She was sobbing really badly. When she went to Viren, she hugged him and whispered in his ears, "Make sure you tell!"

She went over to Nivi and hugged her as well saying, "Look after Tayiji and Viren please!"

Nivi replied in a whisper saying, "Of course I will."

They dropped her of outside and waved her off. It was time for the guests to go as well. Nivi and Viren were speaking to some of them when Nivi felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around to see her old friend Ayaan. She hugged him straight away. From a distance, Viren watched this and felt both sad and angry. Nivi and Ayaan were talking about the old times and caught up with what was happening. Viren stormed up to Nivi and said to Ayaan, "Hi, I need to speak to Nivedita." With a smile on his face it soon wiped off when he turned his back.

He grabbed Nivi by the wrist and pulled her away from everyone outside so no one would see them.

"Viren, what's wrong?" Nivi asked confused by his actions.

"What's wrong? Who was he?" he asked angrily.

"Just a friend."

"Just a friend? He seemed like more!" he was fuming now.

Nivi was shocked at what he was saying. But before she could say anything, he said, " I can't believe you didn't me! I thought we were friends!"

"We are!" Nivi said quietly.

"Then why didn't you tell me? If you had then I probably wouldn't have..." Viren stopped when he realised what he was going to say in his anger.

Nivi herself was getting annoyed at Viren because he wasn't giving her a chance to talk.

"Wouldn't have what Viren? You know what forget that! Why don't you listen to me? Don't answer that! Now listen up! The person you saw me with is a friend of mine, just a friend and nothing more!" she shouted at him.

Viren was still not convinced said, "Yeah right!"

Nivi heard that and shouted again, "I don't know why you're not believing me! You want to know the truth, then listen! I don't like him, I love you!"

Viren stood there shocked as to what he was hearing. The girl he loved since he met her had just claimed her love for him while he was there accusing her of liking someone else. Viren felt really bad, "Usko nahi?" he asked in a calmer tone.

"Nahi, mein tumse..." Nivi started when she felt Viren pull her and kiss her on the lips.

Nivi responded back by turning the kiss into a passionate one. Viren's right hand slid up her back and into her hair while his other hand rested on her waist. Nivi wrapped her arms around his neck. A small drop of rain fell on Nivi's cheek and they parted. They both smiled at each other and looked up to see the drops begin to turn into heavy rain. Viren with a mischievous smile took this opportunity to romance more with Nivi. They both were drenched completely. Nivi looked back at Viren and saw him smiling at her. She saw his eyes move, looking at her lips. But before he could make a move, Nivi had already put her lips on his. Viren was taken aback by her but was enjoying the kiss. He went in deeper. When they parted they put their foreheads together and Viren said, "I love you Nivedita!"

Nivi replied, "I love you too Viren!"

Nivi started to shiver a bit because of the rain and Viren noticed. He said for them to go inside and Nivi agreed. When they went inside, Kamya noticed them being very wet and said, "When it rained why didn't you come inside?"

Viren and Nivi smiled at each other. Kamya said for both of them to go upstairs and get changed. So they did. Nivi went to the guest room and Kamya came and gave her a suit. Nivi got changed and thought back to what had happened outside. Viren was in his room also thinking about what happened. He smiled at the thought. He finally told her what he felt! I have to tell Di! But he wanted to wait till tomorrow because well, it was her wedding day after all!

Viren was already downstairs and saw Nivi come downstairs. He loved they way she looked when she had wet hair. He was looking at her but was interrupted when Kamya said, "Viren, tumhe kya hua?"

"Kuch nahi Tayiji." Viren replied hoping she never noticed him looking at Nivi.

Nivi came and sat beside Kamya. "Tayiji, mujhe buk lagi hai. Can you make me something please?" Viren asked as he wanted to be alone with Nivi.

"Teek hai, Nivi mein tere liye kuch bana ti hoon." Kamya said.

Nivi said ok. Viren thought his plan was working that is until Nivi got up to help Kamya. Nivi was feeling shy on staying with Viren alone. He tried to make her stay but all his efforts were vain. Kamya also tried to make her stay because she had worked all day for the wedding but Nivi wouldn't take no for an answer.

In the kitchen Kamya was talking to Nivi. "Nivi, I've never asked you this. Where did you meet Viren?"

Nivi replied saying at the office and recalls the day of what happened and the lunch. Kamya was happy on hearing this. But she needed to find out about Nivi's marriage life. "So, have your parents thought about marriage for you?"

Nivi answered yes but how she wasn't interested in any of the guys. This made Kamya think. "Viren, tumhe kaise laga?"

Nivi was drinking water and nearly choked on it when she heard that question. "Kya? Mera matlab hai ki acha hai lekin kyu?" Nivi said worried, thinking what if Tayiji saw them two before.

"Nahi, bas puch rahi thi. Waise mein bhi uski liye koi dhoond rahi hoon. Tumhe pata hai ki uski type kya hai?" Kamya asked.

"Nahi." Nivi answered plain and simple.

"It doesn't matter, I think the girl I've chosen for him is perfect!" Kamya said.

Nivi looked shocked and sad. She didn't know what to say. Nivi thought about all the moments they shared with Viren. The kiss she remembered and now she regretted doing that. He was going to get married soon for his Tayiji. She couldn't stop that. All this was running through her head when she heard Kamya say that the food was ready and they should go. Nivi nodded and left.
All through out dinner, she hadn't spoken a work. Viren was just admiring her across table.

After they had finished, Nivi said she had to go because she had some important work at home left to do. She lied! She didn't really, she just didn't want to be around Viren. But had to anyway because he was dropping her off.

In the car, Nivi acted normal as if nothing ever happened. There was silence but that was filled with radio playing. Eventually when they arrived at Nivi's house she was about to get out when Viren said cheekily, "Aren't you forgetting something?"

Nivi replied with a smile, "I don't think so." And left.

Viren smiled back and drove off.

Nivi was walking in the house with a sad face thinking back to what Kamya had said. What should I do?

Sorry guys this is long! I am going to try and post up a part tomorrow but don't be surprised if I don't because I have an exam as well. But I hope you liked this part and please do comment!Smilexxx

Edited by Faj10 - 20 June 2011 at 1:18am

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Faj... lovely and romantic chapter... hope kamya was thinking nivi in her mind for viren...Embarrassed... pls continue soon dear...

Edited by Alphabet26 - 20 June 2011 at 1:44am

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Its awesome dear..pls continue..hope thaiyiji thought of Nivi only

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