Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer


Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer
Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer

FF The Bad Boy... Part 4 Page 3 (Page 3)

newfoundlove Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
hi priyo! Im really liking this ff, its a unique concept. Im wondering what's the mystery behind g&r's past. You can call me radha, btw.

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desisweetheart9 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
nice story. nice relationship between Maha and Runjhun. update as soon as you can. Smile

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MistiofMistz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Very different and I love it!

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munam_13 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged

Thankyou Thank you Thank you Guys for such encouraging comments.. love them all but right now cannot reply to them individually... So here is the next part..

Part 4

It was evening and Runjhun was in her room flipping through some notes when her eyes fell on the house opposite and she was again transported to the morning incident. She felt as though she has witnessed the same scenario previously. The sight of Guddu blasting those boys were flashing in front of her  eyes, the whole day and she was feeling very uneasy . She had a feeling that she had seen the same fury, the same rage, the same anger somewhere but she couldn't place where.

Runjhun 's head was throbbing like hell and she made her way to the terrace to get some fresh air.

The Prussian blue sky studded with the glistening stars have always been a sight that calmed Guddu's senses. He lay in the couch in his verandah and gazed at the sky. He recalled the way the day had proceeded . He never wanted to hurt those boys so badly, but it was Runjhun , to whom they were passing snide comments and couldn't control his anger. Vijay and Diamond , his best friends are concerned, he knows that but when it comes to Runjhun he is helpless.

Suddenly something pink flashed in front of his eyes and he snapped back to reality. It was Runjhun in her pink pajamas standing on the terrace gazing the moon. She looked beautiful but tired. Guddu's eyes flexed at that observation. He saw her knocking her temples with her knuckles and he sat up alert. He knew this action of hers, had witnessed it quite often and knew instantly she was having a throbbing headache.  Wasting no time, he pulled out his mobile phone and made a call, "Hello Vijay…."


Runjhun gazed the star studded sky to find solace but the headache was not letting her enjoy the peaceful night . She had even looked down towards Guddu's house and found him lying in a couch gazing up but today his sight was also not helping, she felt really sick and tired.  She didn't want to bother her Amma and everyone as she knew they will be really bothered and will spend the whole night taking care of her and therefore she kept mum.

"Runjhun…Runjhun", a girl ran towards her clad in a mint churidaar kameez and smile.

"Saanchi… you?? Kya hua?" Runjhun asked perplexed at her best friend's arrival.

"Nothing yaar.. was getting bored did I disturb you?"

"No never" she smiled.

"You don't look well Runjhun..kya hua?" she enquired

"Nothing.." Runjhun avoided.

"I don't believe it, your face is tired and your eyes look puffy, are you sick?"

"Nahi Saanchi."

"You are sick I can see it… wait I'll inform Mami and Amma", and Saanchi turned.

"Saanchi.. ruk", Runjhun stopped her. " Don't tell them, I am fine, bas thodi si headache hai, I'll be fine by tomorrow"

"Ok fine.. I wont tell them", Saanchi assured "..But I will give you a damn good Oil massage ok?"

"Saanchi.. don't bother really..", and she was interrupted.

"I wont listen to you… come will give you a nice head massage", she pulled her in and Runjhun followed her with a defeated smile.

Saanchi headed out of the Pandey Niwas and bumped into a person. The person straightened her from falling and grabbed her arm and dragged her.

"Please let me go" and the other one kept mum.

"Let me go Bhaiya, I am not a chota bachcha I can go home alone… Guddu Bhaiya are you listening?"

"Saanchi… I am not letting you go alone.", he stated as a matter of fact.

"Bhaiya my house is not far, I can go by myself really"

"Saanchi", he warned. " I am taking you home and that's final."

"I am going to complain Vijay dada about you… boht Ziddi ho gaye ho aap", she whined and he smiled.

"Trust me.. your Vijay dada will take your complain as compliment.", he winked.

"Hmph", she pouted.

"Lo aa gaya tumhara ghar… Good night Saanchi"

"Good Night Bhaiya", she turned only to be called back.

"Saanchi woh…", he stammered . "Woh…"

"Woh bhi both ziddi hai", Saanchi answered smiling knowingly " and no usne dawai nahi li… but I took care of the matter, gave her a nice oil massage and tucked her in her bed, she'll be fine bhaiya"

"Thanks a lot Saanchi", he sounded relieved.

"Mera commission?", Saanchi asked extending her palm and Guddu placed a chocolate bar. She smiled and ran inside the house.


"Bantu Beta  you look tired", Amma sat beside him caressing his hair.

"I am Amma, its been a tough day."

"Malum hai beta… any news?"

"None of the news are good news Amma", he answered gulping the water brought by Billo.

"What do you mean Bantu?", Billo enquired taking the seat beside him.

"I don't think we are going to get back our medical shop and dispensary  Billo, it's a tough fight"

"I know Bantu, but what I don't understand is how the tables got turned"

"Billo, when you are dealing with Guddu Shukla, anything is possible, he is not going make the matter easy."

"Magar beta, the whole fiasco costs a bomb, how did Guddu Shukla got hold of that much money?", Amma enquired.

"That's a mystery to me Amma.. That good for nothing, illiterate rogue must have looted or have done lots of illegal work to gain so much money, don't you see the house he bought 3 years back, it costs a bomb.", Bantu answered frustrated.

"Beta calm down", Amma tried soothing him.

"How can I Amma? That boy has some strong political connections and some loyal sets of anonymous friends to help him, it seems like he is hell bent on destroying us, Pandeys."

"Don't tell me that Bantu!", Billo sounded surprised.

"Main na kehta hoon… boht poucha hua Gunda hai… maybe he also has underworld connection, who knows.", Bantu answered.

"Are you people out of your mind?", Kukkan entered the room angrily.

"Kya hua Beta?" , Amma enquired.

"Runjhun ghar mein hai and you people are discussing about that Guddu Shukla?? We cant let her remember him."

"Runjhun  is Sleeping Kukkan, don't worry", Billo answered and he relaxed.

"Kukkan beta, you visited the hospital na? what happened?", Amma asked.

"Kuch nahi amma, Vishnu chacha is in the same condition, no change, no improvement", he announced.

That's it guys... do let me know how did you find the chapter...
Take care
PriyoBig smile 

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Ziva01 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Hi Priyo, awesome update very interesting.  Plzz solve this G mystery soon.
Update asap awaiting eagerly

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
hey priyo ...
awwwesum prt yaar
wat a mystry yaar faaabClap
updt sooon plezzz
eagerlyyy waiting

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nadeera Groupbie

Joined: 02 May 2011
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
what a nice story line!! i'm just sinking in it! update asap. we all are just waiting for the next update.

Take care 

p.s: r u a bangali? just popped up after reading ur name : prio

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newfoundlove Senior Member

Joined: 24 February 2011
Posts: 200

Posted: 25 May 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
really liked the update. Just reveal the mystery soon, please!

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