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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 9)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
loved the update...
pl cont soon
when will maan get to know the truth

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nice part...hope dev doesn't find her soon...when will maan know the truth about geet ?
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Awesome part 
loved it
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awesome updates 
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He drove the car silently

He saw her

Geet:what 's wrong with u

As she about to reply

There are lot of people………………………at the construction site

Two people are fighting…………….

He parked the car.

On e is the site manage rand other person is a union person.

Regarding working hours……………

As maan………………..stepped in.

The union person start screaming loud………………………

Maan gave his famous arroagant look at the person..

Geet in the mean time……………………….looking at the people.

She has no idea why maan brought her to this place

She wanted to run away from the office.

As she listened regarding……………………Mumbai..

She is terrified.

She cannot go back to the place…………………………….

As she is need to be diverted….she looked  at the crowd…………..

The union person:oh mr king maker…………………..had finally arrived look what ur manager.is trying to do with our innocent workers…….

He is over –working them…………..

She is surprised with the person 's wide mouth he is talking to Maan singh khurana in that voice.

She can see ,,,,,,,,,,,maan arms and jaws are tightened…………

He looked at the manager…….

Manager:no sir..the person is trying to divert our workers attention……………..

Listen I don't want any mess here…………………..

I want the problem to be solved………with in 15 minutes

And now I don't any conversation nor from the manager nor from the union …………..manager……………………

I want from the workers……………….

Geet shocked to listen the maan's words.

She never thought he is so sensible……

One of workers.told that they are manipulated…

And they will not be any problem right now……….

And another instance………………..and one more things

Even Im revised all the wages ……to double.

with this he took next step…………………………..

towards the car….

He drove back…………to his office……………………..

He want to ask……….geet regarding the upset.matter………………….

But she is disturbed………

His mind lingering…………on the thoughts.

Suddenly the car broke down……………

She came out of the thoughts and looked at him,,,,,,,,,,,

I think the car broke u sit here..i will see to it.

He quickly got down.and check for the radiator………….

It is so hot……………………………….he looked for th e bottle…….

He asked.geet get the bottle……..

Geet handover the bottle..

He open his coat. And folded his sleeves.

She looked at his broad shoulders…………………………..

She looked at him……how many faces this person has..

With out knowing she put hand on the bonnaat……….and winced in pain due to heat.

Geet where is your mind……………………………

And he took his hanky and tie in her hand………and tied up there……………

She looked at the person

An authorative voice when he speaks with his workers………….

A firm when he go for work……………………

She is still looking at him…………….

On the other hand……………………..

Maan is worried about geet's behaiour

But his instinct told that there is something weird happened In Mumbai…………..so that the reason………………….

He is in thoughts……………………………………..

At that time he dropped her to the bus stop……………………………………….

As he returned to his mansion…………………

He turned to find cell…………it is geet's\

He took into his hand.to find wallpaper picture of a man and two girls……………………………

One is geet.and other is………………….a girl is simple beautiful………and the man is like father of both………………………………….

He smiled.and took it to his room…………………..

As it is wall paper setting……………………..

The second picuture is the lady with two kids.

He remembered the two kids at the DPS………………..

And another change………………………

Geet with the two kids………………………………………

He smiled.as the boy resembles the lady in the snap……………………………….

He smiled and place It on the table.

Every body shocked to find his boss smiling seeing at the phone…………………

He went to change

As he put the cell on table.

It slipped…………..and button clicked………….

It is the phone gifted  by misha and group…………….…

He checked for recent calls………..

It is voice mail box

At that time…………a call……………………it is from misha

M:hai..geet baby how are u ………….everything is fine………….

And haa………I just call u totell uon e thing .that moron…had  arranged some detectives for u………………

And even they came to our college…….and don't worry I priya and kabir managed…here……….and ………………………..haa…………u know na they didn't have that brain to catch me…………..ok.how ar e ur prince and princess…….are they fine………………………………even I want to come delhi yaar……….but not possible…………………….i need to look after the detective group which is after u…………

And don't worry ur in safe place……………sharma family are very good…………….accchee types………………….

And don't worry angel…………….i will catch u later..my dumbo sister is waiting for me.u know na…….my sis panchi.changes her boy friends as her dresses……….and sometimes they mess………..with her…….and being a devil sister I need to rescue her…………………………….

And haa.what about ur hot boss………………………..don't say he even look at u…………u know na…ur the such a beauty……that no ever cannot take eyes from u…………………….

And one more thing………..i learned about ur boss….he is hot DD….

He smiled to the teenager comment……… I know yaar ur still thinking about ur moron……………………leave it yaar……….first concentrate on ……………your boss right now……..bye………………

If any competitor…..just give me  a call.i will come and set right that witch…………………………………………

Ok I will catch u later……………………….

He smiled…….

And cut the phone….

Geet what a circle………

Who is this moron

I think geet is sure in problem.what it is

Nee dto find out fast

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged
great part...hope maan learns about dev fast then only he can help her
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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
wow wonderful part 
loved it
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awsome update.
love it

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