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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 5)

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
loved the update...
so they meet again and maan is attracted to her...
pl cont soon

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Geet is busy in work…………

She didn't pay any attention to the time…..

And suddenly she got the call………

Haa bhaiyaa.party hay hotel mein isliye………………….

Jab party katam hojayagee then I will come

Ok bhaiyaa I will take care and bye.

As she proceed…….

Some one try to grab her and pinned her to the wall………

Strong alchol………………scent.

As the person come to near her

She felt there is a pull……………

She felt numb to find………….the person is getting beat by the person who gave the lift…………..

He is beating the person in angry tha the person had touched most precious thing of his…………

Maan is looking for girl……..

But suddenly she didn't find..instead she saw a person following her…he is completely drunk………………….

He sensed the danger……………………………………

He followed the guy…………on the other hand…………..he saw the guy who is trying to strangling her…

He got angry…………………………..

An he beat the person to the blues…………………….

And made him to fall on the floor.

He saw fury in the beautiful,hazzle eyes…………………..

She ran from there…….

And reached the home to find…………………….rohan and pari are sleeping.

She looked at her…………she felt disgusting……………….

Always me why babaji.

On the other hand.

How can be so nave……………….her beauty is the enemy for her

I need to find out about her…………….

And make sure she is protective………………………

The next day is Sunday………….

As usual..geet visited hospital with rohan and pari….

And after that she taken them to the water park.near by.they enjoyed a lot…….slowly pari is coming back…………..

She felt happy……………….

Rohan is always protective towards his sister….just like his mother………..

Geet remembers meera………………

On the other hand………dev is going insane to ……….findout for geet..

He is getting mad and wild……………

He hired detectives but no use.

As misha is very clever……she had cleared all the evidences…that connected with………geet…………………..

Even her friends……………….

Next day……………………..geet took rohan and pari to the temple………………

Suddenly rohan bumped with a  olderly lady………

She took the hand of the boy………the blue eyed boy looked her and said sorry………..auntijii………….

She took back…….

Then shee saw a agirl………same of the boy age.called bhaiyaa.

Chaliyaa na….maasi hame doond rahi hay.

Then she looked at a girl of her 18 -19 yrs.searching for them.

Both hugged her………she looked at the olderlylady

Sorry maam….hope kids had not trouble u………………..

The lady looked at her In awe.beta mera naam savitridevi.hay

Aur tum

Jii mein geet……………………………

Kya baat hay auntyjee.aap parishaan hoo

Pehle beta tum muje antuyjee nahii balki dadi bolo

Jee dadi………………..

Haa beta mere pothe ke shaadi ke baremein soch rahi hoo

Lekin pata nahii.kuch ho nahii raha hay

Geet:dadi……ismein parishaani ke baat kya hay…………………didi hamesha kehtee hay………..hame kuch baatee unpar chod na chaheyee……….wahi kuch na kuch hal nikal denge..aur babaji ko hamere parishaani ke baaremein kabar hoti hay

Jab waqt ayaga tab…….babaji koi koi chakkar chalakar………………………saar I problems solve kar denge……………….

Aap bas babaji par barosha rakhna……………………….

At that time

Pari came and called maasi…..

Haa pari………princess…………………..

And rohan comes to her

And she hugs them both

Aur ayee bachee…….

Mere didi ki……………………………………

Im the care taker………..of them…………………

She bid farewell to her……..

Why I feel im so attached to her.

So beautiful and nave……and innocent……………………………and she is so good………..and what ever she said this is so nice

I think I need not worry………..

Oh god…

If u send any girl in my pota 's life

Make sure some good girl.

Or else pls make sure………..this is the same girl……

That is why she cleared

She smiled……………at her thought….

She got a call from the home………………….

And she drew away……..hoping to meet her next time.

So simple….and…………….yet beautiful……….she felt happy………………..

After long time…………….she felt very happy………………………..

As maan is getting ready for his camp………………as it is necessary for him……………………..as he need to get away from the girl's thoughts………………….

He is setting………………the thoughts…………………

He listened to the car…….he knows it is dadimaa……………….

He knows she again comes up with the proposal.no ways.before she comes u need togo.

As he is going…..

He came across with dadi…………………

Oh dadi.

Maan hame aap se kuch jarori baat kari ni hay

No ways dadi.pls donot force me…..im not interested.and pls never try to emotional black mail me……………..

Dadi smiled………..no beta.im just want to say…………..now today onwards im not going to force u for any thing……….and I will not ever try also.

Maan looked at her…………….

Oh god suddenly what happened to hisdadi……………I remember she went to mandir………

Unknowingly she thought…………………

By the way………the person who changed her dadi.should be…helpful……………….

I really thankfull to the person.

Iss epehle dadi ka mood badla.let us go from here.

And with a excuse……………….

And he leave his mansion,…….for his campaign……………………………………….

He is far away from the place..

In the jungle……………………..

On the other hand…….

Geet is very much busy……………….for searching…………..for new job……………….

 

 

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
oh maan claiming her as his...
yet he wants to run away from her...
lets c wat happens next
pl cont soon
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
awesome story...loving the way it is going...plz continue soon
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As usual.

He came back….from the campaign…………….

He felt good………..

At the morning………………………….

He is droving…..suddenly a dog came infront of him…………

As he about to hit…

A small girl came and interrupted……………………

He looked at the girl…….

The girl looked into the eyes………..

It is the same hazzle eyes…………which is making him restless………………….

Dekh kar nahii chal sakthe agar isse kuch ho sakthe to.

A boy interrupted pari……..

Tum rukho bhaiyaa…………………………..

Itne bade admi hokar……itne chotte janwar ke jaan le jana chahtee oo

Sharam nahii atti hay

He lookeda thte girl.bare of 5 yrs……the girl braveness……………….she is speaking attitude with msk…………………..

He liked her and bend to her and ask her the name

She told pari.princess………………………..

Oh im rohan……………….

Rohan came before………..

He look at them.

He gone to shop and buy chocolates………….

And offered them,…

Both refused.

Maasi ne kaha..ki koi bhi strangers say……………kabhi kuch bhi lena nahii chaiyee………….samjee aap…………..

And they run to the school.

It is delhi public school…………

He smiled.

First the girl made him smile and now….these children……

Lot of things happening to u mr maan singh khurana.\but her eyes exactly like her……………………

Yes pari is same as geet………….

Rohan resemble meera In all the aspects

Pari is always geet……………………………….

(donot think guys…….bcause I practically resemble….my maasi……….her naugthiness,loving,care and intelligent like her

That is why)

He enter into his mansion

He observed his dadimaa…………………..expressions.

She is often visiting temple………………………………

He try to ask but he knows …she never.but he could see something fishy is going around……………..

Rohan and pari completely forgot about Mumbai………they never think of father……………………….

As geet…………..is always for them…….

There are only for her maasi and nanu…………………..which is in hospital………….

She is wandering to the jobs.

In mean time….she saw adi cut the phone…and pull his hair……

Geet:go near him.

What happened bhaiya…..

Geet……………………………my boss is coming back from his campaign.

He is strict person…………………..

He always want to be perfect.no one could stand him.

He is an angry person…..

But good at heart……..never mind to helping others………………

But he cannot stand mistakes………………..

And already he fired 20 secretarys…………

20………………..

Yes……no can stand her fear………………………….

Today morning one more secretary…..and knowing of his anger..nobody could dare to join………………………………….

If that is the case and how far all thes e join………

I learn that ur company is best construction company in delhi…

Yes geet everytime………………..every girl dies to work with him

Actually he is gorgeous handsome……………………

Geet what…………..

Yes……………………………..

I donot may today is the last day…of my office.

H my babaji.pls save my bhaiyaa from the dust danav MD from them………

He got a call.

And he shivered like he is not holding phone but time bomb.

With few minutes he answered and he ran like  a marathon…………..

Geet smiled at his brother.

God was really wondered andthanked god lot of times………as……….she had blessed with sucha good fun……….nice hearted……..person…………………as bhaiyaa in her life………………..

As she finished her prayer………..

A sight got her attention….

As her bhaiyaa…….forgot his tiffin……..box……………

Oh no…………

So she decided…to deliver the tiffin..as she need to attend the interview……….which is on the way…………………………to his office.

And she try to remember his office address.

Yes…….

KC……………….

She rushed out side………………….

And she took the taxi and reached the place……………………….

She enter the office greeted by ………..a chirpy bubbly girl with a packet of chips in her hand..

She look a t her attire………….\as she is in simple blue salwar.with tiffin bag and file in he r hand.

Jee …………main geet hoo.muje mr aditya .sharma se milna hay..

Aditya sharma………………………………….

Oh adi sir………..

He is in the cabin ….go straight and turn left……..first cabin…………..

And she took the details of her to enter the register…………………..

As in the last coloumn she mentioned as interview……………………………

On the other hand………..adi is aware of geet arrival…….as he is busy……………………..in tension………..

Geet…………………….is going to enter.she bumped with a a short skirt girl……

She looke d her like a garbage………………..and shooed away.

Geet gave a look.but made her way to the cabin.

The girl goes to the reception…….

And straight enter into the adi cabin…………………….

Before he could answer….

Mr aditya………..sharma….i think ur last day in the office..

How dare u appoint this type of behenjii in this office as

MK secretary…………..

I know MK had given the responsibility…………………….

Now get ready to loose the job……..

And with that she took the file of geet and rushed out…………..

Before all understand the intensity………….

The siren alarmed…for the entry of the boss MSK……………………………..

He enter in his elegant style…………….suddenly felt the same flower fragnance from adi 's cabin……….

He enter the cabin to call for adi….

As adi enter ………….

Oh adi where is the secretary………………..an d he looked the file…………………………

He browed his eyes…………………

Geet handa……………….age 19 yrs………………

Qualifications:degree…………….

It is optimum……….he called the girl for the interview;

Geet or maan sir ke secretary……………………………….but what can I do..now this sasha had made this mess………………………..

How can geet………………….

As fulfill the questions…………….

Geet enter the cabin……………………………………….

At that time………………..

Sasha with his assistant tasha…want to…..remove adi from the office…as he is the first person……..to visit KM……and he always near to MK………………………….happy ending……………

And adi took geet to the corner.

Geet there is a misunderstanding…………………….

Before he could say.it s ok bhaiyaa don't worry I will manage…………………………….

Pls ur boss is calling…………and one more thing ..bhaiyaa just treat me……………………….as a person coming to the interview.

As soon as she enter the cabin.

The person is facing his back………………………..looking at her file…………………

As he turned back to find…..her

It is her.

It is him

 

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
wow..awsome.
cant wait for the nxt update.
thx
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
wow loved the update...
pl cont soon
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awesome update...loved it

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