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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 39)

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Nice..
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nice part...geet knows that dev is in delhi now
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Geet  hurriedly enter the out house

She locked the room.

She switched off the lights

She sat at the corner.

Where maan is reallyworried…..

Geet didn't picking her phone it cause  him more worry

He asked driver

He said she is worried………

Maan.that means she saw him……………………………

He came back to the house……………………

As he managed to find out the driver

As he informed that

He dropped her at the mansion………………

Maan got relif

And he banged the door

He open forcefully .to find geet curdled on the floor in the dark.

She is so scared……………………..

At that time………………………………..

Dev on the other hand…………………….saw geet but couldn't able to find her

He knows she is In delhi .and she is also in KC……as he had lot of ways

Finally he flirted with the chipku……………….arctectic…………….to get geet information

But no use

He got some idea regarding maan sing h khurana……………..

He is a tough man and no weakness…………………………..

Meddling with him.will be his loss.cannot approach through business…………………………..

As he iss the best In this…………………………..

On the other hand.he cannot find information……………………………..

He is frustuated………………………………

But he failed.at his steps

Geet u cannot hide from me

I will get u

Hearing the foot steps…….

Geet worried and start screamed.until someone hugged her

She know the person

His savior……………..

She felt relieved..

He is in delhi………………………………………..

Please sir

Mujse pyarr mat karo

Mein hamesha se bad luck hoo hamare family ke liye

He wanted…………………………….geet to tell her past

Geet is sobbing………………………

She started

Kismet……hamesha mere saath khel ne mein .bahut mazaa hay usko……………………….

Mein  paida hoti hii……………apne…………………….maa ko kodhi yaa mein ne………………………..

Didi mere maa bangayeee

Papa…aur di ne kabhi bhi kisi cheez ke liye mag thine se pehle hi poori ho jaati thi thi…………………

Jab di ke shaadi fix hogayee

Mein ne socha tha ki didi ke shaadi aur zindagi mein kabhi koi kamee nahii hona chaheyee……………………

Isliye babaji se hamesha unke khushi mainee rak thi thi.

Lekin mu je nahii pata hay kee……………………………

Mere wajah se rohan aur pari………………..apne maa ko khoya hay..

Kyonki…………mere jijaji………………….mujpar…………………

She could n't finished

Maan hands around .geet tightened.

Someone else eyes on his geet.

He will kill that person with his own eyes

His eyes changed to anger……………………

He already literally…………………murdered…..him.

He mentally thanked himself to take decisions against dev

He deserves that …………………………………………………….

Di had wrote letter to me.

I didn't have option

And I ringed to misha………………………..

As the only place which is didn't………………….reach is delhi……..

So I need to hide rohan and pari with me.

I took train ticket s but I feared may be he know the reservation status.

That is why.

I had exchanged the tickets with a  old lady with 2 kids………………………….

And………………………I managed to get the name and details of the lady…………

I need to lot of things inorder to escape from him.

Even I came to know he try to kiss the person who is trying to tell the truth regarding him…………………………

He is so evil……..

I know he will manage to get the kids he can get me…….because I will not leave kids at any cost.

He also too k property from us.

What if he do any harm to pari and rohan…………

I cannot see anything happen to him.

I will die maan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I will die……………………….

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