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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 38)

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update..

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oh no Dev is in Delhi Angry
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Geet felt she could exactly hear her ……………heasudrtbeats……….

Geet what 's wrong is everything ok he asked huskily…………………..

Geet.shivered……………………….

She nodded her head.as if she is in trance…………………………..

As they both lost in one another's eyes

They hear d asound a the living room.

Geet baby …we ar ehome

He felt.bad for the wrong timing of misha

And anee enter with…………..pari and rohan………………………………..

They all settled at the dinner table

Maan came out…………………….

And they all seated……………………….

Geet made pari and rohan…………………..eat the food.

And they seated a the dinner tab le

Anee open the dishes..to find lasangna……………and italian pasta……………….

Alla re maan favourites

I think someone…………..made special arrangements.for special………………….

Misha wi nked a tmaan……………

Where anee looking a tgeet……………………

Geet blushed.and she open other dishes as they are some other items also.

They………………eat the dinner

Maan eated the dinner with satisfaction.and muttered thanks……………

He felt if he is……………..alone then he could say thanks to geet in his smile.

But he also want…………….to say thanks

He came out and made a few calls.

Ar eu sure adi.

Yes…………………..sir

He cut the call to get a call from askhay

Yes askhay

Sir I got complete information of mr mehra….he has many cases and I sure………….he done ….lot of crimes………….i will make sure he will suffer for his sins……………………………….

At the night…………………………………….

Geet came out………………….as she is making her ways for outhouse………………then suddenly she felt a pull……………

She surprised to find maan is looking  at her lovingly…………………………

Geet….he said huskily………………..

Geet lost in his world…..not noticing that something had tied to her eyes and he is taking her to somewhere…………………

After some time she felt she is in air.

As maan is carrying her……………..

After some time she felt her legs touched the ground…………………..

She open th e eyes to find……………………the whole terrace…………………is filled with flowers and candles…………….so beautifully arranged………………….and suddenly her eyes ar e twilled with tears

He felt a tear dropped on his hand.

He surprised and lifted her head with chin.and saw tears in her almond eyes…….

Geet.suddenly there start raining…………………………

She hugged him tight

Geet remember we met on a rainy day…………………………..when u came to my car……..from that day I just lost in your eyes

In found lot of pain…………..i just want to remove pain in ur eyes.

And I will make sure for that

She hugged him and he held her tighter…

Anee and misha……smiled at them,

And misha called Vicky

Hey Vicky everything is under place when ur coming

I think someone is terribly missing…………

Shut up vicky………………….

She smiled……………

Pagal……………………………

And they cut the phone.

On the other han d.anee is talking to her boy friend………………………

She dialed a number

A handsome hunk answered the call.

Hai sweetheart kaise hoo tume ne apned bhai se baat ke hya..

Nahii arjun.thoda aur intezaar…………………Vicky ko bhi anedoo……………………

Next day

Morning

Geet went to hospital…………………..

She met her father

She sa id everything…………………

Mohindar find twinkle in her eyes

His heart felt very happy

He feared for the …………………….the monster……………………..

Geet looked a this direction………………………..

Aftersome time she returned

Suddenly she saw a mall……………….

She enter into the mall

She enter the men section

And she saw a shirt and she smiled imagining him in that shirt

His broad shoulders…….

But how can I know his size

Did I ask him………………………………

No what will she think of him……………………….

She dropped the idea of his shirt

Suddenly she saw watches………..

And she selected one

As she pay the amount

Her eyes froze on seeing the person Inf ron t of her

She shivered and she start sweating…………she felt her whole world is crushing

He is her ein delhi

What if he finds us.

What if he harm us…………………………..

Without a turning back she ran towards the car but forgot that

 Car is waiting for her

She ran and hire the cab………………………

And enter into it…………………………………..

The driver quickly called maan

Part ends

What geet is missing…………………………….

 

 

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it wh did u stopped at this moment
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
awesome update...Geet saw Dev and ran...I hope Maan will find her soon
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Thnx 4 pm 


poor geet ...


I am sure maan will find her  


Update soon !!!


Edited by zunaiba5 - 29 September 2011 at 4:37am
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
loved the update...
oh no wat next...
pl cont soon
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Awasome update
Continue soon

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