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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 3)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged

nice ...please continue

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
awesome update
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged

continue soon wants to  read more... dev to pakka devil hai... and who is that man who is following geet ... i m feeling he is maan... pm me tooo

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Geet is worried.

As she didn't get phone call from………………..hospital………

On the other hand…..her father health Is also serious…………………..

She is terribly worried………………..

On the other hand…………

Pari………………is not feeling well..

She is with fever……………….

She turned to find meera……….

Didi aap apke tabiyat teek nahi naa………….aur aap yeha kaisa ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Pls didi……………batayana.

Meera:geet rohan aur pari ka khayal rakna……..aur apna aur papa bhi……..

Unee akhele mat chodna……………………………………………..

Ab muje jaana hoga….\beta bhool se bhi kisi par vishwas mat karna……..aur haa.pyar bhi mat karna….

Pyar dokha deta hay.

Mera pass jyada waqt nahii…….

Jaa vaha hoo bachii……apna khayal rakna……………

With that she suddenly disappears.

With wonder …….geet enter into the house

The house is so calm..

And in the middle there is meera body laid ……..

She is dead………………………

Geet unable to cry………..

No tears from her eyes……..

She is In shock………...

On the other hand……………………rohan and pari are worried about their mother

And dev………………………

Is laid………………..there…….

It appears he is in shock…

Mr mohindar………………………………….not crying.the shock made him to admit in hospital……………………

She Is I shock.

After few days..

Geet is completely engrossed in daily activities.

She used to prepare food for dev and others…

She used to take care of rohan and pari.

But due to some reasons….pari.never goes to her father…………

She always cling with geet……………………

And even geet too.

She know she never take the place of……………………meera.

That day is her best

She went to mandir………………………

Suddenly a baba appeared at the sight

Tujee kuch raaz jaana hay

Lekin aaj sab ka khulega…………………………..

And he left………………………….

But she is trying her best…

One day.when the servant is busy in cleaning the room………………………

On that day when meera leaved….dev never allowed anyone to enter into the room……………..

Geet on that day enter to clear the room………

She is taking her sister cloths…..

And she is remembering……………………………..old memories……………

Where her sister used to buy two dresses always.for her and one her lovely sister……………..

And she smiled the thoughts………………

On the other hand….dev is gone for conferene………………………in London………………………

And suddenly winds blow………….

And a letter…………..flow on her feet……….it is meera 's letter…………………….

I know my sweet bachi….tere bachpan ke adaat hay…………………….

Tere har janam din par…………………mere kamre mein akar……dhoodne ke adaat hay.

Yeh sirf tume aur muje pata hay……..kisi ke bhi nahii…………..

Lekin iss adaat aaj tere madad karegi mere bachii…………………………….

Haa……………………..

Mein jab bhi tujee dekhtee hoo…mere mann mein ek hi khayal hay….ki mere bachii ko koi raj kumar ayagaa……aur usse ghode pe bitakar…..lekar chala jayaga………………

Ek badi banglow……………………bahut ii ameer admi……..jiska dil bi utni badi hoo……………..

Mere iss sapne………..hamesha mere ankhoom mein………………………….reha gayee……………………………………

Lekin………………….

Jab mere zindagi mein pyar ayaa……….aur khoosiyaa layee…muje laga tere sapne bhi jaroor poore hojayege………………………………..

Isliye…………….

Mein hamesha…………khush hoot ere liya………..

Lekin waqt ek jaisa nahii hota…………………

Mein bhool gayee…..ki utna hi nadaan hoo………..jitna pehle thi…………………….

Haa mere bachii……..usee nadaan ke wajah se meinne tume Mumbai bhoolaya …………………

Pata nahii tha…….ki yeh mere zindagi sab se badi galthi hogi………………………..

Rohan aur pari se pehle tum mere bachii hoo...

Geet is shocked...

Jab se tune excersion ke pictures bejee thi...

Dev ke bartaav mein kuch badalaw ayaa………………….

Ekdin mein aur dev………………….project ke reports dekh rahii thi……………..

Us din.mein ne uske desktop mein tere excursion ka pictures dekhi hay.

Mein ne jab click kiya…………..toh…mere zindagi ka sab se bada jatka lagaa….

Haa……….geet…

Us mein sirf tera pictures they………………..nahi tumare dost ..naa tumare group photos…….sab ko alag karke sirf tum…………………

Aur photo ke nechee coments……………

Mein nahii dekh payee…………………..

Kuch dino ke baad….har baar muje aur bachoo ko force kar rahe they………………….ke hum………………..apne ghar jayee….

Uske intensions se mein tang karke ek din.mein ne usee confront kiya..

Aur usne kaha,….ki woh tumse…………………..

Tears……………

Woh tumse pyar kartha hay…………aur tumse shaadi karna chahtaa hay….

Dev ka badla roop……………uska pagal pan…..mein darke maare parishaan ho rahi thi……ek din jab woh chilla raha tha…..toh pari ne dekh liya…………….

Us din se pari usse nafrat karne lagii…………..hay

Mein ne tume rokhne ke bahut koshish ki...

Lekin papa ke finanicial  loss ke wajah se,,,,,,,,,,tum log ko…………….yeha anee pada…

Aur mere tabiyaat karab hone ke wajah se…………

Geet………….tuje……………….mein rokne ke liye.

Padosoon ke madad mange……lekin mere saari plans.fail hogayeee………..

Geet tume kabhi bhi……mere chinta mat karna

Bachoo aur...baba ko lekar yeha se chale janaa...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
wow..supreb update.
poor merra...ugh..hate dev...
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Nice concept ... Like it
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Update soon..Pls if possible write in English...And PM me as well
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
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