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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 29)

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
loved the update...
maan confessed his feeling...
waiting for her response...

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Geet is still drenching

Suddenly she got the memories how she and meera used to drench in rain……………

Their playing………..

How her dream was shattered………………..

And remembering her father and all………………………………..

Suddenly she start crying………………….

Maan looked at the changed expressions…………felt bad…………

And she hugged him……..

Pata hay sir….

Di ko bearish bahut pasand thi..lekin hamesha muje kehetee hi ke chutki………….too bearish mein bachee ba n jaate hay………….

Aur muje……………………rokh ne ke liye aye toh mein……………………….mein usnee bhi nbheeek ne keliye majboor karthi

Aur bauji ko bhi

She stopped……………..and tears in her ears………………………

 

Maan hugged her

They both sooth their pain

And in order to bring ger back………….suddenly……

He spoke .waise geet…….tum answer please jaldi batane ke koshish karna …….woh kya hay na dadimaa mere shaadi ke kuch jya da hi jaldi hay.pata nahii abhi bhi.kaun se ladki mere baat karvane ke planning karte ho gi……….and it is difficult for me to think of new plans to run away ….from the girls……….

U know msk's charm………………………………..

Some of them………..even ready to…………..

Geet just looked at him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Her expression is changed…………………..into anger.it is like she cheerfully murder the girls..who are near to them.

Maan gave a smile seeing the jealousy in her eyes……………………

Try to leave……………………..

Who kya hay na…………………………..

Muje bhi thoda jaldi…hay.everytime I cannot barg into adi's house to see u…………………………..

She started blushing……………………smiling at the ideas he is using to cheer up her……..

They move into the tent………..

He gave her towel……….

She started .

He saw it once again lost in her world………………………..

She looked at him this time……………

The intense look.made her week at her knees………………..

Is he really know the look causes to any girl mad over him…………………………….

He is gazing her…………………………

His eyes lowered to the eyes………….which are twinkling in the dark…the petty  nose some water stayed at there .like teasing him to the core.and to the lips……..the lips drove his sleep from him long back…urge to move in and take them.he stopped……..he don't want to describe further cursed his heart to stop other wise his selfcontrol lessions will be driven away……………………………………………………

Her tender neck.stop maan.control……….his mind screamed……………………………….where heart goes on.

On the other hand it is difficult togeeet also

As he removed the coat the shirt dripped in water exposing his long biceps ……………………………and shoulders………his body oh too ho.t…….she remembered how sasha and group……………..used to comment his gorgeous body…which drive insane……………………….water dripping from his head to his intense eyes………………………………….

Trying to control her emotions to not to look at them and touch them……………

She is controlling harder……………..

How the strong arms held her in his embrace..she always feel protected..

For the first time int eh office to the end ..

She never felt any kind of tension…………………….infront of him,,

Her past had given a strong urge to not to believe …………………..any men ..but….his presence……always  feel secure.his eyes.his warmness………….she always feel strange how can a stranger…..be a part of life…..and took her all pain……….

He just remember the prince ………whom  her sister used totell when she was young………….

A tall handsome……………………strong prince………………….which will come…………………and take u to the different world………………….

She is still in thoughts…………..

They came back to the world.when geet phone ring.

She saw the number

It is misha

Misha:yeh geet how is the date.she said I mean   meeting.

She looked at maan.

Maan smiled………………..

And he dropped her the hotel……………

As she is going to her room……………………

He took her hand…………..

And said don't take too long to answer

Even u take…………..long time………………….

Then………..

Geet looked at him shock………………………

Then she asked in fury…

He dragged and cornered her to the near wall…………….(
luckily it is night there is no one at the corridor)

And wishpered……………….into ear…..

Then I will have only one option……………………..

She looked at him questioning eyes………………………

He answered with a  slight mischief :to kidnap u………..and marry u………………….secretly……………………………………

She smiled.and ran away from him.

He smiled…………………….

And ente r into his room……………………….

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
awesome update
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
wow awesome update dear

i loved ur update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged

awasome update!!

continue soon
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
nice one...
still she didnt give the answer
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged

Geet enter into the room

Where misha looked at her

What maan singh khurana had done………….that my sweet friend is blushing like a newly wed bride after her SR……………………………..

The last line struck geet…………along with maan sir words………………………

She ran to the bath room.

Yeh geet ke babaji…….ur too fast. Thank u so much.

I don't know mr msk is so romantic………………………………

Hey babaji how will I face him…..and how can I answer him……………………

And she remember dev……………………

And what about that monster……………..what if he come back………………..

Comeback for kids.

He has right…………………..

What can I do now………………………….

Is it ok to put maansir into this troubles………………….

Why……………………………..

He is a very good…………….he helped me lot.he needs a very perfect girl without any horrible past like me……..

She is thinking………………..

Just then her phone rang.

It is him……………………………………

She looked a the phone

On the otherb hadn maa n is worried……………………………..

Why she is not picking the phone…

Just then…….there is a knock on the door.

Misha open to find maan.

Are maan……………….aap yeha.

Who geet ko phone try………………kar raha hoo.par uta nahii rahe.hay.

Who teek ho na.

Aree maan singh jee who teek hay

Wash room mei n ah

Just the n geet came from the wash room to find maan at the door……….

She was shocked………………………….

He just wished good night and leave from there

He saw her eyes

Geet why she is cryi ng.

Did I force on her the decision I need to suggest………………..

I need to talk………………………………………….

To her……he is hell worried………….

Next day morning he got a call.

Adi………….. I want to talk to……………….mr akshay………………………………immediately………..sms me his number.

Yes sir.

Mr akshay sharma.famous criminal laywer…….

Maan sir college friend he will anything for him..as he is the sponser for his college…………

And his record he never fail an y case………………

And he is the top student from scholar ship of khurana foundation………………………………………..

Within a few minutes maan got the number

And he called the number

Akshay I need to meet u

Sir………im coming 2 morrow…….

I will be there

No im  not in delhi.

Meet me in goa…….

Ok sir…………….write down the address.

And haa avoid the media it is a personal work……………

Don't worry.sir I will manage.

 

Akshay sharma. Famous criminal lawyer……………………………a  person with moral principles……………………………..and never loose any case.

Strong opponent……………………………

He will any thing for MSK

As he is his idol……………..

Askhay is the solution of this problem.

I need to plan stragtey for mr dev shergil………….

Ready for my attack.

This is going to be tough for u…………………………………

I m ready for u

Before u reach geet and kids need to face me………….

Maan Singh Khurana……………………………..

Next day.

A tall gu y with spects enter goa international airport……

He straightly took the cab and enter into the hotel..

And he met the place………………

Where maan is waiting for him.

He hugged maan.

Sir…..u need to order and I will do anything for u……………………….

Don't worry

And he explained.

Sir we need to proceed……………..legally

First we need to secure geet a nd kids………………………….

How…

Sir I have aplan…………………….

And he explain the plan.

Don't worry…….i will manage………..

But before that we need some signatures of geet madam and also urs………

And two more signatures……………………

I will calla di

And he called adi to come to goa immediately………………….

And he called misha

First the plan shocked misha then she knows there is no alternative.as dev had already reached………………………delhi……………………..

And he will claim …..

The plan is perfect.

And he ordered askhay to do the required …………………….papers…………………..

He smiled…………

Sir………………………….

One last question

Yes.

Can I meet mrs maan singh khurana……………

Maan smiled sure……akshay

U will meet directly at the office……………………………………

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awesome update hope nothng goes wrng

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