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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 27)

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Posted: 30 July 2011 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 30 July 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Lovely update
thnk god adi saved the day
waiting for next part
update regularly dont be late ok
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Posted: 31 July 2011 at 12:32am | IP Logged
oh god dev reached kc...thank god adi was there nahin toh yeh sasha kuch bhi keh dethi...
hope maan is planning everything...
pl cont soon
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Just then..maan on the phone.

Mr dixit aap jaldi kuch karna hoga.

Hamere dictectives ne apko sab kuch information diya

Aur kya chaheyee apko.dekhiyee.samay beeta chala……………….

Aur who insaan ab hamara office tak pounch  gayaa.

Sir..we need to some thing before proceedings………………………..

Yes.what is it.

He told something..ok.make all the papers ready…………and send directly to me.i will make sure everything….under confidential………………..

Yes sir.

He called adi.and told something.then he saw geet is coming towards him he cut the call…………………………..

They finished the dinner……….

Geet I need to talk u something..

Yes sir.

Actually I know we are on holyday…….but there is a work,,and u know we  cannot neglect work…………………….

Geet answered yes sir.

She thought…………inno ne hame…………………yeha holiday par…………layayee hamere madad karne ke liye……………………..

Teek hay sir.

Ok muje dadimaa ko phone karna hay………..tum jaavo.mein aaata hoo.

He called dadimaa.

Hello dadimaa…………

Maan.kya apne geet se apne dil ke baat ke……….

Nahii…………..dadimaa.

Beta kab tak.

Hame jaldi se apke aur geet ke shaadi ke tarayii karne hay

Maan blushed

Kya baat hay mera pota blushing.not bad………….geet ne apko kya se kya banadiya

Dadimaa pehle aap batayeye….apne medicines leliye apna sehat………………ka khayal rakna hay na

Haa maan beta hamera khusi apki haat mein hay jaldi se geet aur bachoo ko hamere ghar mein…………………………….layee………….phir hum jat se teek hojayenge……………………….

He again smiled……………………..

Waise jaldi mujse jyada apko hay………………………..

He smiled and cut the phone to make some important arrangements…………………………..

On the other hand….dev life is none other than hell.

His business is under crisis as he is not paying any attention.

And he is in simla.for finding geet………………

But he don't know that………………maan singh khurana plan……………..

Geet got ready.but she is worried as she didn't have nothing for work.

She told misha.to take care of rohan and pari.and surprised as they are sleeping due to their day out they are literally tired and they both are very happy……………..

She smiled on seeing them happy.after long time…………………….

And misha signaled to go.

Where are u going,

Sir ne bhulaya hay kuch important office work.

Office work.so yeh bahana hay.

Aur tum inn kapodmein jayegee……………….

Geet looked at her dress

Are kya karabi iss dress mein aur waise too yesa baat karrahe hay

Ke mein maan sir ke saath office meeting pe nahii balki date par jaarahi hoo…

Yeh toh date hi hay misha mumbled.

Are yaar tum log goa mein hay.aur yeha pe log date kar ne keliye toh aata hay lekin agar tum apne hot boss ke saath jarahoo……….kamse kam apne kapodo pe toh thoda dyan do.

Warna tum waha……………………kisi aur ka nazar tumara hot boss pade toh.

As misha……………………..hit the right chord……….as it is evident from geet behavior she felt a prang of jealous when she saw the group of girls surrounding maan……………

She felt suffocated…………and she turned to misha and took the dress from misha.

It is sleeve less kurtha…………………………with khurti…………….

And her hair is open……making her hair flows…………………

And her white complexion.with little changes by misha……………………….

Looking her more extra attractive…………

And thinks……..

Lets us wait.

Today maan will.loose completely and fall for u…………….it took lot of efforts forhim to control.

And please geet ke babaji……….let us hope he confess his love to her as she needed the most………………..

With that she left for his room……………

At the room maan is restless he is looking dashing hand some.in his black and white suit…………….

But tensed.

Maa n singh khurana is worrying…………

He had rehalsed lot of things before.took 2 hours for practice.but still worrying……………………

He is completely lost.

Geet came out.and find a message from him.that he is waiting for ____________place….

She enter the car.and driver left her..

Maan is impatiently at the place and looking repetedly at watch and also the entrance door…is

The picture look like this

Sample…………………..ha

 

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
awesome update...MSK nervous, well that's a surprise...is he going to propose now to geet?
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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
awesome ... loved d last 3  updates... continue soon ...

Edited by maaneetsangel - 04 August 2011 at 4:57am
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awesome so maan is nervous continue soon

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