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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 20)

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

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continue soon ...

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so finlly maan coming to know about dev now he can do nothing to geet and the kids because geet wold be always there with them
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brilliant update
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aawweesome storryyy

loved it :)))))))))))))))))))))
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happy that maan finally knows the truth but not yet that he is after geet yet...
loving all of their bondings...
pl cont soon
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great part...plzz add me to ur pm list...
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Wow superb. So finally maan came to know about dev. Now dadima wil do plans to bring maan & geet close
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The next day adi came back from the tour.

\he greeted geet and kids………………………………

She is happy……..

But she is worried……………………………she know s that adi had a fear of his boss…………………..

She don't want to create problem for adi………

He is such a  nice person…………………..

Adi came and asked…………..geet.are u alright……….

Any problem.

No nothing………

As theyabout to come……………………………

A car enter into the place

Geet shocked to find the car driver

The driver open the car and said that dadimaa wants to meet her…………………..so she..send him the driver…………….

Adi surprised dadimaa…………….

Then geet explained ofcourse not maneet moments…………………..

His thought………….dadimaa.and geet.she is such a good lady……….and geet ur good…………………………and always be…………………

He woke up from the bed.smiled he is goingto office he could see her…..

He is so happy.

He came down in happy mood………………

Smiling…

The servant shocked……………the other

As dadimaa knows what is going on.

She smiled……………………………

Chalo plan A………………….

 Dadi:Maan beta…………………

Maan is in his lala.land…………………

Dadi :Maan beta..


Maan: Je dadimaa…………

Dadi:Kaha ko gayee hay aap…………………….

M:Jee dadimaa kuch nahii woh nayee Project ke baaremein Soc. Raha hoo

Project ha life Project…….he already imagined..geet in bridal dress and he in sherwani…………………………………

Dadimaa………………beta…actually muje apke ghaadi ke jarorat hay..aap aaj kuch aur ghaadi mein office chale jaana….

Maan in his dream world………imagining his shaadi mandap.and all……………

Said yes.without listening to her………………………..

She smiled……………………

And he brushed and went to his office………….

He sit in the car

To find geet in driver dress…………….

He smiled….

Ramesh got dumb strucked…………………….

He turned…………

Maan came back…………………

He enter the office…………………………

He surprised as the day is different for him.

Her smile………………………

Her fragnance……………

He saw her at pinky table.

Forget to breathe to find her in white dress……………………..smiling and greeting………….good morning sir.

Good morning geet………………

Turned to find pinky..

As pinky got heart attack.to find his DD.smiling ather…………………….

She felt like a dream.

Pinky:tune aaj breakfast mein kya khayaa….kuch jyada khayaa.is liye………ajeeb ajeeb sapna dekh rahee hay……………………..

He crossed……………….

She saw.her setting flowers………..giving to him.

It is adi.giving him file………………………………

He took with a smile…………

Flowers

Sir.file…………

Ha ha ha..his trade mark style……………………………

He got angry.

And he enter the cabin.to find geet.in maroon………setting.flowers………………………………….

na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai

tum se hi din hota hai, surmaiye shaam aati, tumse hi, tumse hi

har ghadi saans aati hai, zindagi kehlati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi

na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai

aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri

mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya

baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri

kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya

main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi

shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi

aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi

jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka

chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi

jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi

raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi

na hai yeh paana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai

he smiled

yeh ladki muje pagal kardegeee.

Yeh sach much mein already pagal hogayaa hoo.

Geet yeh kya kiya hay tum ne……………

Na dekhu toh chain nahii.

He looked at her cabin find her empty………………………………..

On the other hand.

Geet met dadimaa.

She took her to shopping.

Geet is worried.

As she didn't informed him..

What if he gets angry………………..

Oh no his mood.

Yeh babaji badi mushkil say aaj kal unka mood gussa se badal gayaa.

Aur yeh dadimaa……………….koinkaar bhi nahii kar sakthe………ab mein kya karoon

Dadimaa watching geet restlessness.

First I need to find out what is going on between maan and geet………………..

I know this time my grand son biting his nails in furious.or banging at everyone…………or sitting idle in his seat………..in frustuation………….or else pulling his hair…………………

Aur yeha geet bhi……………………………….nervous hay………………………..

If he scold geet…………………………………..i need to think plan b

If he didn't scold…………that means.he loves geet…….my plan a works………..

Weldone savitri.ur the best………………………………..

She smiled…………………………..

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