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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
wow awsome start yaar...loved it !!!continue soon pls ...do add me to ur pm list

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18 yrs back

 

A hospital……………………………

A woman is wincing in pain

A person…………………..is so tensed…………

On the other hand…..a 6 yr old girl…………………….looking at the person so tensed……………..

She is crying.

Suddenly a baby cry……………………

Suddenly a nurse came out………

He said only one person can survive……………..we can save the baby but cannot save the mother.

He cried a lot……….

She has lesser time…………………..

The girl went to the lady which is looking pale……………like blood lost.

She touched the girl………

My darling……………give me a promise that u will take care of ur sister……………….because she is small than u..and u will save her from all the evil forces……….

The girl nodded her head..

She looked at her husband.

Which cry on his face……….

She smiled and took the promise that he will see their daughters……………….and…love them to the end……………………………..

He promised.

The lady showed him the cuddle..

There is a cute baby sleeping………..her face and feature.the prettiest girl………………in the world……

The lady kiss the baby and the girl.and she drossed off.

The machines stopped…………..

And she is no more

She is rano.handa………………….

The girl came out ……..and asked the nurse…..

She took the baby into her arms………………………….

And after some days…….

The person called the girl……………..

Meera……………………………..

Ha papa………………..

And the second .baby is ………geet……

Geet handa………………..

Meera is more than a mother for geet……………..

After few years.

Geet utoo…..school ke liye deer horahe hay..late hone hay kya

The cute little girl……………..di.sone do na…….and she covered her self with her pink duvet……………..

Meera:geet………yesee nahii,,,,,,,,,,,bachii.chalo………….utoo…..

I need to drop u the school…………….and should take lunch to papa.lot of work.

Their father is owner of handa group of industries…………….

They are well settled……………………..

Geet brought them wealth…………………….

Due to his promise to his wife.he works harder to get good life to his two princes…………..

As meera is more responsible…………………….where as geet is pampered by both father and sister…………………….

But she is smart…………………..at the studies…..

She used to be topper in the school…………..

And want to be complete her higher education………………

She is too intelligent……………………..

Meer a is innocent…..but yet she used to manage.the things well……………………………..

Years passed……………………….

Mohindar handa business run very well.

Meera in her graduation.

Where as geet is completing her………….10th

Due to her studies…….

Even though…………..

It is tough for both meera and mohindar.

They sent geet to boarding school for higher studies………………………..

In mean time….

Fate has expected…….the other……..side…………

When lot of marriage proposals..for meera………………….

Even mohindar wanted meera to settle……………………

But meera had finished her education and doing a job…………………..

She applied for job of accountant ……….in .shergil industries..

Shergil industries…….MD is Mr DEV SHERGIL………

He is the only son …….he stays.alone……..

His parents died in accident……………………lot of property.he is the richest person…………………………..

He liked the simple and innocent meera on first sight……

Meera never used to fall for his charm….

Even though he is tall….6 feet……………charmed looks………………………

Meera always used to concentrate on her work…………….

One fine night….there is lot of pending work.

Even though dev know that she has father and a little sister…………..who is doing her…………10th…………..he never

Saw her…………….

As she is staying at boarding…………………

And meera father is also business man………………..

But meera never shown in her work……………

Dev.offered her the lift.

But she simply refused.

But while returning…some goons……………followed.her.

And dev helped them…………..

And meera dressed him…………….

He came to house.

As mohindar…………………….bussiness….he always on traveling………………….

She took him to the room..

There was a pictures..of a cute…girl………and meera child hood pictures………………..

He impressed how………………….meera take care of her sister……

He liked……her………….

And suddenly one day…

He told that he loves her….

Meera didn't reply……………………..

She is in mess…..

A top business man.handsome…………and also………………..good looking………why he is after her…………

She is in thoughts.

Finally she talked to her father.

First mohindar surprised….

But later he also agreed…………………………

Their marriage is happened….

But due to some reasons…..

Geet cannot attend the ……………….marriage…………………..

As her exams ar esheduled.

Meera cried.

But dev consoled her………………

Even he want to see his saali saiba……………

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A new place………..

A hostel..at derhadun…………………

The windows are blowing……………..

A tom boy girl………………

Her name is misha..dobriyal

And another girl name priya……………………………………………………………………….

And kabir and others…………

And all asked for one name……..

Geet…………………………………

A beautiful girl………is shown playing with flowers……

She is sad as she cannot  attend her sister marriage………………………..

Her darling sister………………which is mother to her.

She cried.

Her friends try to cheer up.

So she took her to the mountains.

Meera and dev are happy……..

Meera used to speak to geet….on phone….

Even dev also……………………

After few months…………

Meera was pregnant……………………………….

She is very happy….

She is mother……………………

Geet jumped with joy………………

She is in graduation………

And her project is on the way.

She is very happy…………………………………….

And meera is very happy.

As she had delivery of twins.

One son and on e daughter.

Geet is very happy………..on seeing them.

She became massi……………………………….

And she also send photographs of her excerssion……………………………..to sister and jeeju……………….

Their marriage photos on her desktop………..

The next year………..she is leaving…

Her graduation last year…………and she is………………….preparing for her cat………….

She is busy.

But atlast……………………she got chance to.meet her sister..and jeeju and her……..sweet little kids………………

Rohan and pari……………………………..

She want to play with them….

She reached  home………………..

She felt the presence.

She hugged her father…………………………

And she is waiting.

 A tall and handsome person…..came into the room.

Looking shock a t the beautiful girl in presence of him..

The lovely almond shape  hazzle eyes……………………………

And lovely chin……and the soft lips………………………

She Is beautiful……………………….

And then.

Bachii…………….

She turned back….to find…………………meera her sister………….looking at her.

She gone and hug her..

And also the lovely dovely little rohan and pari..

She is smiling..playing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Like a kid…….

Yes she is a kid….

Meer ais very happy………………………………

As her family is complete…..at the night………..

Dev is waiting for meera…………………….

Meera enter the room.

Im thinking………..that bachii ke shaadi……..

Lekin,who mba karna chahetee hya……

Dev is not impressed………………but said…agar usko padnaa hay…..toh padne do na………….

Rishtee ke baremein………………………………..

Baad mein sochna………………………………….

Lekin……………….dev………………….

And in few days………………….

They are shifted to mumbai…….

Suddenly…………….

Problems are started………

There is a huge blast in handa factory……………..

And there is a loss…

The financial loss is more than…………………expected…….

And even the insurance is ……….also.not recovered………………

And the worst conditions…………………….is he need to sell the properties.

Dev came there………..

And he had paid all the debt……

And due to the health condition of mr handa…………………….

He took him to the………….mumbai.

And In few days there are shift to..mumbai………………

All are happy.and praised mr mohindar handa.for having such a dutiful and……………loving care……SIL………………………

And even everyone was very happy……………………..

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nice updates 

btw .. plzz make the index ,,. it will get easier to locate the updates 

continue soon 

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She did not know what to do

She is busy for admission.

For some reasons.

She found………………….her sister meera is upset.

Her health is not permitted.

No cheerness…………………in her life

Geet is also busy………………..

On the other hand………….rohan and pari…………………near to geet….

They always with geet.

And geet used t o take care………………of the kids………………….

And also her father

As the financial loss………internally…………………………created a havoc in mohindar's health……….

He used to feel bad for the accident…………

One night…………………

She had given tablets to her father……………..and also……………..to the sister.

No body cannot knows what the disease is…………..

But she is indeed becoming weak…………………..

On fine morning…..when she is waiting.for the bus stop..

One person came and stand in front of her………………

He is saying something………..

But the geet could not understand a bit.

Suddenly dev came there…………

When the person saw dev………..the person ran from there…………………

Geet is surprised……………………..

Dev:geet chalo.mein tume university………………mein drop karunga……….

Chalo.

Geet sit in the car………………..

She is thinking a lot…

Dev manages to say that he loves her sister……………….

She is feeling bad about him…

One fine night .when everyone was sleeping…

Suddenly she felt someone in the room…….

She open the eyes to find………..dev……………

She jerked.

Dev:sorry geet mein ne tume daraya kya….woh bachoo ke yaad are rahi thi is liye….

She turned round to find…………rohan and pari….is sleeping with her almost hugging her………………..

Oh sorry……jeeju…………………

He want to took………………rohan and pari…………..but……………they didn't turn up.

So he left to his room……………

Geet………..felt bad for him…….

Next day.she went to mandir…………………………….

Hey babaji…..yeh sab kya hay.didi………………ki tabiyat aur upar se papa ke bhi tabiyat………

As she finishe dthe pooja…she find the same person at the bus stop……………..

He quickly put a paper……..in the hand……and he ran off…

Geet open the paper………………………….

Muje tumse baat karni hay,………….kya kal subha hum tumare ghar ke park mein mil sakthe hay kya…………………..

And she turned to find the person…………………….is not there.

Babaji yeh kya kar rahe hoo……………………………..

At the night……….geet cannot able to.sleep.

Who is the person…and what he is wanted to say………………………..and why….he wanted to meet me alone.

Did I say to jeeju.

No no……..already…………………….jeeju parisaan………….hay ismein problems mein unee nahii daldongi…..

With a firm decision.

And she drooze to sleep……..

Next day………………….

She gone to the park……………………………..but she find no one.

She waited for him..but no use….she thought somebody played a prank on her.

And she returned back to the studies………………

As she is…………..busy………in her semester exams………

She observed some changes in jeeju's behaviour.

He always busy in the work………………….

She always feel that he is neglecting……………the family………………………………..

And it is proving………………..

She went to the office.but found he is not there………….

She came back tofind dev is talking to  a person  on phone.

Dekho….agar dubara kisi ko mein uske pass dekha na…toh tumara khair nahii….samje….

She scared.

She never see dev In this roop..'

He is always calm ,,,,cool……..sweet spoken person….

His charm on the talks………………….

He is yelling but on whom…………………….

She is dumbstucked………………………………

And she is terrible………….

On the other hand……suddenly………….meera's health…………………is disturbing.she cannot breath properly……………….

And she drive her to the hospital………………………………….

The doctor examined her…

Before she could answer…….doctor…….dev enter the room with a worried face……………

The doctor ……………………………

And he cut the words.

And he ordered geet to take care of kids and also uncle………………

She remember that is the time that rohan and pari comes from school.

She rushed back to the school to pick them up………………

 

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