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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 18)

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Maan met the person at rock gardens…….

He gave some more information…………………….

With that he gave some more orders……………………………

And with that he return to office……………………….

He find geet is completely busy.

It is 7 0 clock

She want to leave……………………….

But then suddenly the lights off………………………………….

Geet got scared………………………………….

An she hug him tightly…………………

He know her scare of darkness..

He too hug her…………………………

Just then his phone rang.

It is dadimaa.

Maan kaha hay aap.mein ne apse kaha than a.ke mein araha hoo..toh…….

Muje……………airport mein pick karne kyon nahii ayaa hay aap.

Sorry dadimaa.mein bhool gaya tha.

Abi araha hoo..ghar……………………..

With that he drop geet to home………………….

And he gone to house…………………

The detective information……

Is mr handa is a business person.

And his income is also very good.he used to treat his daughter s like princess.

Suddenly there is a  severe losses in the business.due to this he lost………………….

Next day he is in office

Checking in geet cabin.

But she is not in office

Just then adi and sasha return from their trip………

He called the home.

Rohan pick up the phone:hello

Maan:rohan mf here.how are u and where is ur maasi…..

Rohan:maasi gone to the hospital…………………..

Maan tensed hospital

Yes.pari is not feeling well………..

Pari.is not feeling well.

He called adi to hold all his meetings….and he stromed to the hospital…………………………

Doctor is examining pari.

Geet is checking her forehead…………….

Doc darn eke baat nahii hay na

No miss geet…………………

It is ok.

She is tensed and scared………………..there is something which is disturbing her…………………

Doc will she will be ok na.

Just then maan enter there

Why didn't u inform me that pari is not well.

Im so tensed……….

Do chow is she.is she fine.

Geet is surprised to find him there

And the second thing his treatment………….

He Is behaving like some thing different………………

Its ok geet…….tell ur husband to not to worry ur daughter is fine…………………

Geet looked at maan…………………..

Maan smiled inwardly……………………..

Before she could protest…..

He hold her hand………………………..to stop.

Doc……….looked at them and smiled.

Take care of her u both and these are some of the medicines.

Doc I will take it..he took the prescription from her and walk towards the pharmacy store……………

Meantime pari is with geet……………………

Maan came out.

and they both drove back to home.

Pari is in maan's hand

And he is caressing her head.

What happened ………..friend………………howu got fever.is something worrying u…………………

No mf im fine………………………….

Geet got down…………………

Pari……….looked at him.

She looked disturbed……………………

She suddenly hugged him………………………

He looked at her and caressed her back…………….

U won't leave me na…..

Maan took.her hand and said…………………..no……….i won't leave u

But little angel.why ur scared.

She told in low voice

Of him…

Who………………………………………

He is evil.

He killed my mother

He does'nt……………..love anyone.

He is bad man……………..

Maan asked who………………………………………

My father………………………………

What.

Before she could say anything…………………

Geet called her.

And she left with them………………….

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great part...maan is so worried for pari...he is getting to little by little of geet's truth
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awsome yaar...loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Awesome part 
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awesome update
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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
so now maan knows a little more about dev
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nice story...please pm me

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