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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 15)

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
loved the update...
waiting for maan to know the truth
pl cont soon

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nice story..pls updte soon and pm me

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He is n his room…

Where he got a phone……………………………….

Ok……

Listen to me…

I need to meet delhi's top detective agency…………………….

He turned and move to her room.

Geet is sleeping in his bed.

He smiled……………………..

He reached the bed.

Geet is sleeping like a baby

The innocent face……………sweet smile………………………………

Hair locks covering her eyes…………………………………….

He open the blinds sunlight touches the face…………………….

She open her eyes…………………….

She got terrified………………………….

And she quickly got off from the bed felt dizziness…………..as she about to fall………………

Maan quickly…………..caught her.

Eye lock moment….

Geet tumare tabiyat teek nahii hay……………………….

Please araam karo………………..

And then…………………..

He called servants……………………….

And ordered them for breakfast

Just then……………………

Geet came into senses……………………….

She remembered kids

Rohan and pari….

They will create problem when they find her …………………

Oh god…..

She started running

And bumped.with maan.

What 's wrong with u……..geet…and why the hell are u running………….

Sir.i need to go..other wise pari starts crying

Neither pinky nor rohan can control her……

I need to go.

Please sir.thanks for help…………

Geet…………………

She starts running.

Wait……..

Geet ruko………

Just wait ………..i will drop u

And please give me 10 minutes

10 minutes please

All the servants gasps……………

Please………from the great MSK……….

And for girl…………………………………………

This is something……………..different…………………

And he walked to his room….

He dressed……………………..in simple casual wear…………………

Oh this girl drives me crazy…………………………………

And he took the car and drive to her house……..

On opening the door……………

Pari cam e running and hug her..

Sorry maasi ….mein darr.gayee thi between sobs…………

She hugged her…..

Don't worry………………….princess………………apki maasi yeh na……………………….

And rohan come s there and hugs……………………….geet..

At that time………………..

Pinky said bye and ran to her home………………

And geet make……………..rohan and pari…………………

To get ready

She enter sinto washroom.

She remembers maan

Their dance

Something in his eyes

And she also fills

She misses him

When ever he is not in the office

His helping nature

Concern , care……………………………..

And his feelings

Her thoughts filled with him.

No……………………..

Kya jarorat hay geet apne bhavanoo mein……………….

Kyon behek gayee………

Bhool gayee kitna dard diya ek rishte ne………

Jisko tum aur tumara parivaar bagwaan maana……….usne tujse tere sab kuch cheena hay………………………………………………..

Aur bauji……………..hospital hay….

Pari aur rohan.tere zimadari hay…….is mein

U need to take decision

To stay away from………..u……………..

With that thoughts

She enter the office

Where as maan is restless

It is 10 0 clock………………

And she is not at office

He is keep on looking at her empty cabin ………………..

And he even angered on tasha for bringing file…………………

He is bashing his staff………………….

Unknown the fact that geet is already In his office…….and she is working in someother work………………….

After 1 hour..

She came out….

And took file from tasha…………………..

And enter into her cabin………..

And as she is busy in her work.that already a person is waiting for her……………………………

Suddenly she felt him…………

He pinned her to the nearest wall……………..

And looking into her eyes.

Samjate kya hay apne apko

Kitna parishaan hoot ere liye…………………

Aur tum.

Mazak bana rahe hoo kya

Geet confused why he is behaving like this….

She is shocked

 

 

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hope maan finds out about geet soon then only geet will be able to relax and maan will be able to understand her behaviour...great part
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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
awesome update
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Sir………chodiyee muje……………..

Please…it hurts……………

Just then there is a knock in the cabin…………………….

He leaves her……………………………….

Come in

Tasha enter s with a  weird looks……………………………..

What is the matter tasha

Sir……….clients want to talk to u…………………

He gave a last look to her and leave the room.

Geet came back to the room……..with tears……….

No babaji………….

Mein apne parishaani mein….maan sir ko nahii keech saktha …….

Who nahii jante hay mein kiss chakvruuh..mein hoo………………………..

Mere zindagi itne seedi nahii hay…..aur who bahut acchee insaan hay………………..

Mere jaan bachayaa hay…..lekin who dev ke baremein kuch nahii janta ……………

Mein unee…apne liyee parishaan nahii hone de sakthe …………………..

Babaji mere madad karna………………………….

With the thoughts………..

She looked at the watch to find……………………..

It is  7 0 clock

She looked at his cabin.

He is still there……….

She enter into the cabin……………….

He is not there………………………..

He is not in office…………………where is he……………………………….

She turned to the side…………………………

She came out side…..she looked at the sight………………..

May be he is gone…………..

Suddenly she felt a tug……turned to find.him..striaght looking into her eyes……………………………..

What's wrong geet…….didn't expect me ………..

Sir………….woh….she is fumbled with words.

Actually im sorry for morning………

Im waiting for u geet….

Im worried for ur health………….when I didn't find u….i felt something is missing………..i don't know why……………..

I felt strange feeling………………….i cannot control my emotional…..but wheni saw u I bursted out.

Im really sorry……………..

She felt bad.

Sorry sir…I can understand sorry for troubling u………….

Ok…………….

Can I ask u one question…………geet

Sir…….

Sorry personal…………

Why did u came to delhi………………………………………..

She is just staring into his eyes…………………..how can she answer this question.

No geet u can't ………………….

But she knows he is a stubborn person and not leave until answering his question………..

For my father's treatment sir……………………………..

Ok can I meet ur father……..

sir

its ok

it is 2 weeks

everything is normal...

geet and maan are behaving like freinds

as he used to drop geet home.when they are late

and even...pari and rohan also maintains a comfortable with maan...

he brought choclates and video games to rohan.

and she cannot refuse

bcause he is maan singh khurana

the mumbai projec tis still on...

and it is extended...

Its ok……anyways Sunday I had a date……….

He said with a unusual smile……

Date…………..

Msk date…………………..

She brushed out the thoughts……..

As least to know that next day is Sunday

She felt relived.

But the thought of date is disturbing her………..

Next day……..usual Sunday……….

Maan is getting ready

Suprising everyone……..

He got ready in his casuals…………………..

Mean time geet got up.

To find pari…is at mirror checking her frok….

She smiled………………

After long time..pari is becoming normal……………………….

She is smiling……………her little angel………………………….

She look at time…………..

Kaha jaarahi hay hamere princess…….

Uffo maasi………………….ek I mportant kaam hay…………………….

My freind is coming home...

So im waiting for him.

Him……………..

Looking .

Where rohan is busy with his video game……………………………

Just then door bell rings………

Geet gone to open the door her eyes snap open………..

Maan is in casuals……………

White shirt with two buttons open and blue jeans………………………….with black goggles…………….looking hot………………………..

He looked at her

She is in night dress………………………..her hair is messed up………but freshness is there

He wanted to hug her……

But control his thoughts

Sir………..aap.actually I Came for date…………………

With a shock…………………………….

Pari came and hug……………….saying MF……………………….

MF>>>>>>>>geet questions '.

MAAN FRIEND…………………..

FB:

Pari.hello.why are u here

Maan:Im alone no one is there for me……………….

Pari:im there ..treat me as ur friend but one problem

M:what

Pari:how can I call ur elder so I cannot call u with name other wise maasi will get angry………………………………….

Maan:ok I have a plan…called me maan friend

Pari:but it is too long

Ok MF……

They both smiled…………….

Hi…….rohan came and said ok I will also call MF……………………..

MF.

Geet smiled…………………….

Maan lost in her smile……………………………………..

She never felt rohan and pari comfortable with a stranger…………………………………….

 weekend again……………………………..

Rohan and pari…are playing with maan……………………….

And one week they also went to hospital……………………………

Yeh kya hora hay…..

Babaji mein maan sir ko innsab se door rakneeke koshish kar rahi hoo……………….

Lekin…………………..

Pari.wishpering in his ears

Do u like maasi………….

Seeing to geet……………….

Mmmyes……………………………………….

Maan:yes……………………………………..

Pari:I know………..

Maasi is very nice and also beautiful………………..

Maan staring at her………………yaa…very pretty…………………………………….

Pari giggled……………………..

More than me……………..

He turned and said.

Both maasi and her princess are so cute

She smiled………………………………

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