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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 12)

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Edited by aziza_ahmed - 16 June 2011 at 5:37am
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loved the update...
hope soon msk finds the truth...
pl cont soon
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Sir………………

Aap………..sir

Both rohan and pari looked at their maasi……………………..

She turned…..to them………

Just then…………..bus horn……………………

Oh no bus horn……..

They both ran…giving sweet kiss on their maasi.and ran to the bus…………………………….

Geet waved them…………..

Bye maasi.

Bye school wala uncle………………………

He looked at them…………….

He then returned to geet…………

She is in her night suit…some flour on her fore head…….

Messy hair.but still look cute………….

Sir aap yeha

She is scared what happens that he know that she is adi sister………….

She is still in thoughts

Not seeing that he is actually checking her out……………..

The baby pink night suit.

At that time………there…..is a phone call….

She lifted the phone.

Are geet.mein adi …

Jee bhayya………

Mein puch gayee….mein 2 din ke baad ate hoo.telephone bill barawa lena.bhool gayya tha

Don't worry bhayya.mein bar dungi…………..

Teek ay….

The phone line gone……………….

She turned to maan………………….

Sir aap ne bata ya nahii………………………ke aap yeha kya kar rahi hay.

Maan confused and fumbled with words.

Who mein,…….woh…………………

He is still fumbling…………………….with words..

Who paani..

Kya aap paani peen eke liye itne door mere ghar aye hay……

She is going on.

Least noticed that he came near to her……………………..

He is looking at her …….her  eyes while talking becoming big and her twisted lips……..and the baby face…………….he is admiring not paying any attention to her words………………….

Just then she stopped as he is staring at her……………………

Tum kaun ho geet……………………………

She became shocked…………..for the question

And why are u crying……………………..

And why u are scared on listening to the word Mumbai……………….

And why u hugged me on that day like that………………………………

And where…are rohan and pari's parents……………………….

And why are u staying alone………….

He is asking questions.

Not realizing that he is coming forward………………

And ……………geet is going backward.

She is to the wall…………………and………….he came dangerously forward……….and she is now cornered………………………………

Sir…….her voice is not came out of the throat…….

She just looked at him..

The maroon office attire……………………

Broad shoulders.

The perfect jaw line and M Shaped lips……………..

And most important hypnotic dark intense eyes……………………..

He is perfect handsome………………dhak dhak boss..

As the office staff murmers………………

So near ……………………..

She is trembling………………

Where maan is completely lost in the hazzle eyes which is looking at fear………………………………

The small pettiee nose………………………….

And the forehead………….witha a eye lock………………………

He sees the most beautiful face infront of him…………..

They lost in their eyes…………

Suddenly…………………..the bell rang.

And he moved.

And she open the door……to find………………….the milk boy,

Are didi……………….bill…………..milk ka…………………………..

Jee…………bhayya……………….

And then.she moved into her room…….for get money…

He look around the house.

Three rooms….

One room is like  a person

And a photograph of rohan pari and meera 's photo

And also geet photo

She looked lovely………………

And she paid the milk boy ……………..

Sir 9 0 clock office we ar egetting late

With that she ran into her room………….

She came on peach color salwar

Hair is open..

She is drying her hair………………

Water droplets.

He is loosing.

Hey ladki muje pagal karke nahii chodege……………………….

She is extremely beautiful……..

she turned to find.

Are yeha maan sir.\

And why he came here……………………………………

And why he is asking questions…………………………..

She came out

Sir..cofee…………..

He just want to see her through out his life…………………………….

Sir….cofee….

No thanks……..

Then they drove to the office…………

Just then………..

Misha's phone.

Ha misha bolo……

Kya baat hay baby……tuu teek toh hay na………tu ne mere messages ka bhi jawab nahii diya don't worry is everything alright……..

Ha mishu mein teek hoo.

Who mera cell mera pass  nahi tha..office mein thoda busy.

Hey I need to talk to u regarding ur boss…..

What.

Chill maar yaar.

He is a nice guy……………………he has a affair at his college.and she left him for money………………………that day onwards.hearet broken...so don't worry……………..

And his family only dadi……and don't worry his family.is also good…

And by the way….he is the most eligible hot bachelor of delhi.

U can try him………….

She winks.

Shut up misha.

As maan is observing……and the name mishu………funny girl.

And what the hell she told…………………….and why geet is blushing…………………..

He smiled……..

Ok mishu I will call u later…………………………………………

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Sir………………

Aap………..sir

Both rohan and pari looked at their maasi……………………..

She turned…..to them………

Just then…………..bus horn……………………

Oh no bus horn……..

They both ran…giving sweet kiss on their maasi.and ran to the bus…………………………….

Geet waved them…………..

Bye maasi.

Bye school wala uncle………………………

He looked at them…………….

He then returned to geet…………

She is in her night suit…some flour on her fore head…….

Messy hair.but still look cute………….

Sir aap yeha

She is scared what happens that he know that she is adi sister………….

She is still in thoughts

Not seeing that he is actually checking her out……………..

The baby pink night suit.

At that time………there…..is a phone call….

She lifted the phone.

Are geet.mein adi …

Jee bhayya………

Mein puch gayee….mein 2 din ke baad ate hoo.telephone bill barawa lena.bhool gayya tha

Don't worry bhayya.mein bar dungi…………..

Teek ay….

The phone line gone……………….

She turned to maan………………….

Sir aap ne bata ya nahii………………………ke aap yeha kya kar rahi hay.

Maan confused and fumbled with words.

Who mein,…….woh…………………

He is still fumbling…………………….with words..

Who paani..

Kya aap paani peen eke liye itne door mere ghar aye hay……

She is going on.

Least noticed that he came near to her……………………..

He is looking at her …….her  eyes while talking becoming big and her twisted lips……..and the baby face…………….he is admiring not paying any attention to her words………………….

Just then she stopped as he is staring at her……………………

Tum kaun ho geet……………………………

She became shocked…………..for the question

And why are u crying……………………..

And why u are scared on listening to the word Mumbai……………….

And why u hugged me on that day like that………………………………

And where…are rohan and pari's parents……………………….

And why are u staying alone………….

He is asking questions.

Not realizing that he is coming forward………………

And ……………geet is going backward.

She is to the wall…………………and………….he came dangerously forward……….and she is now cornered………………………………

Sir…….her voice is not came out of the throat…….

She just looked at him..

The maroon office attire……………………

Broad shoulders.

The perfect jaw line and M Shaped lips……………..

And most important hypnotic dark intense eyes……………………..

He is perfect handsome………………dhak dhak boss..

As the office staff murmers………………

So near ……………………..

She is trembling………………

Where maan is completely lost in the hazzle eyes which is looking at fear………………………………

The small pettiee nose………………………….

And the forehead………….witha a eye lock………………………

He sees the most beautiful face infront of him…………..

They lost in their eyes…………

Suddenly…………………..the bell rang.

And he moved.

And she open the door……to find………………….the milk boy,

Are didi……………….bill…………..milk ka…………………………..

Jee…………bhayya……………….

And then.she moved into her room…….for get money…

He look around the house.

Three rooms….

One room is like  a person

And a photograph of rohan pari and meera 's photo

And also geet photo

She looked lovely………………

And she paid the milk boy ……………..

Sir 9 0 clock office we ar egetting late

With that she ran into her room………….

She came on peach color salwar

Hair is open..

She is drying her hair………………

Water droplets.

He is loosing.

Hey ladki muje pagal karke nahii chodege……………………….

She is extremely beautiful……..

she turned to find.

Are yeha maan sir.\

And why he came here……………………………………

And why he is asking questions…………………………..

She came out

Sir..cofee…………..

He just want to see her through out his life…………………………….

Sir….cofee….

No thanks……..

Then they drove to the office…………

Just then………..

Misha's phone.

Ha misha bolo……

Kya baat hay baby……tuu teek toh hay na………tu ne mere messages ka bhi jawab nahii diya don't worry is everything alright……..

Ha mishu mein teek hoo.

Who mera cell mera pass  nahi tha..office mein thoda busy.

Hey I need to talk to u regarding ur boss…..

What.

Chill maar yaar.

He is a nice guy……………………he has a affair at his college.and she left him for money………………………that day onwards.hearet broken...so don't worry……………..

And his family only dadi……and don't worry his family.is also good…

And by the way….he is the most eligible hot bachelor of delhi.

U can try him………….

She winks.

Shut up misha.

As maan is observing……and the name mishu………funny girl.

And what the hell she told…………………….and why geet is blushing…………………..

He smiled……..

Ok mishu I will call u later…………………………………………

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maan is very eager to know about geet...nice part
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awsome i loved it !! 

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