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wow he's getting mad in love...
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maan has already fallen for her...
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He is looking as her seeing first time

Geet what happened to him.

Why he is looking at her………….

On the other hand she is worried as her cell is missing…………..

And she knows ……..it is important………………………………

She is searching from the morning.

Her face Is dull…………….confused.

Sir……..

Sir.

Maan came back to senses…………………….

He looked at her…..

Sir………

Who geet………bring me.mr mehta's file..

She looked at him.

He turned his chair………..

What's wrong with u.maan……………….why your seeing her like that ……………………..

Geet.get ready for presentation..we are working…on..

In 30 minutes.clients are coming………

Geet yes sir…..

Move into the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,

Meantime bumped with sasha……………………

Sorry maam..what's wrong with u miss handa………can't u see and walk……..and why are u doing moon walking……………..

Sorry maam………..as she is confused and dull from morning…………the things are going…………out of control.

In meantime…..presentation……………………..

What should I do now…….

She is still in her room.

It is past 15 minutes there is no sign of her,

He is restless……………………………………….

Out of frustutation………………………

He came to her cabin.

He enter the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

To look the sight……..stopped at his tracks………

Hair locks on her face….

She is resting on her chair…………………….head throw back of the chair……

Eyes are closed…………………….

He just stared the beauty……………………………….

He observed the tears….on her face………………………….

Night……………

She came home………..

Find rohan and pari are sleeping at the couch itself.

She made them sleep on their bed………………………..

She changed………….

And want to call misha…..

But she find that her cell is missing,

With the thoughts she slept……………

A car reached her flat…

The door opened……..

Finally ifound u.

She open her eyes.to find……..the person which she does not want to see In her life time……

DEV SHERGIL.

She said …………………no don't come near to me.

No..

She quickly open her eyes………………….in sweat………………..

She cannot sleep throught out the night………………

Next day she quickly rushed to office………………………….

And then the thought…

Geet……………………………….

No don't come near to me…………………

There Is something…………………….

Again the same nightmare……………………………

Tears are flowing from the beautiful eyes…………….

He cannot see them.

Geet.

Unknowingly she hugged him……….

He return the hug……………………….

She is crying……………………………

She suddenly she realized that leave him and ran to her washroom…

Maan is super duper confused…………………….

He realized…….there is something wrong…

He put the cell on the table and moved into the room………………….

She came from the washroom………………………..

And looked at the cell.

She smiled…….happily…………………………

She open the photo.

Didi………………………pata hay .dar gayee.thi………………………..

Maan is looking her from the binds.

He smiled on looking the smile on her face………..

He will do anything for that…………………

Next 10 minutes the presentation started………….

Sasha and others are looking at her with weird faces………..

She started and finished……………………….the presentation……………………………

Where maan face is brightened………………….

On his thoughts………

He got a call from dadimaa……………………

He attent dadimaa call……..as she is going to visit her cousin……………..

He put the phone to look at adi.congratulating……………………….geet………………….

Adi is always very much protective to geet.

And pinky bubbly…………friend…………………..

Sharing sweet moments………………………..

His life will be filled with happiness.

But a thoughts stickon his mind.

Why is she is crying..

And who hurted like this…………………….

I need to findout……………

But how………………………………………

Next day………….morning…………

Adi went to Mumbai along with sasha …………for the project of highways………………….

And next………………

Pinky and rohan are getting………..ready for school….

Bell ring…………..

He checked…………...and ring again…………………………

To his surprise the door open by little girl………………….of the school………….

Pari open the door to find the same uncle……………….

She looked at him with questioning eyes..

Kaun hay pari……………………

Who school wala uncle maasi……………………….

Maasi……….maan chuckled………………feel something…………had removed from his heart.

He smiled looking at geet's little copy.

The same hazzle eyes……………………………………

In her pink uniform..

Then came rohan………………………..again the question look………

What's wrong withu both..

Ur getting late for ur school bus.

Rohan complete ur breakfast now……

And pari…………………….donot leave ur food………other wise……ur not going to get choclate cake at the evening…………..nor ur little Barbie doll…………………………….

And rohan..make sure she also does her home work at the time before go to bed..

Ok.

Now pack ur boxes……………

Get ready…………………….

As she is saying………………………

Shocked to find……………….

Msk at the door….

Looking at her

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a super duper update...loved it
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FANTASTIC...PLEASE PM ME...PLS CONTINUE

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supreb update.
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