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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 10)

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loved the update...
hope maan finds it out soon...
pl cont soon
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loved the update ..hope Maan finds it out soon 


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awesome,superb yaarrr
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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged

awsome update.

love it
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buddy im your regular story reader so do send pm add me as your buddy...plz...Embarrassed
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Next day

Morning………………..

Chandu and other head servants…are running…………….

As fast as they could.

It is time 8 0 clock………………..

And everyone was running……………..at that time……………

As it is time for the lion of the home to have his breakfast

But today he didn't come out of his room.

Dadimaa came out and shocked to find ……

That mr perfectionist is late…….

She hurriedly went to his room to find……his grandson still on his bed…………………………….

She went near to him…….to find shocked.to see the scene

His grand son is smiling……………………………

A cute smile………………

Such a cutee pie.she used to love it when he used to smile………

She felt like she is a 20 yrs teenager………………………….again..seeing his grandson smiling.

And noticed the phone…………………….which he is holding like a treasure donot want to leave it…

She try to took.but failed……………………

She smiled….there must be something on that phone which making his grand son….smile.

May be girl photo.she is in verge of doing typical bhangra.but  stopped…but god what ever the reason……………………………….

The person make my grandson.happy..if it is  agirl.make sure u make her my grandson…………….s wife……………………….my wish will be fulfilled………………

She is happy and she came out a dancing pose.

Which again shocked by servants…

Some on them literally fall on ground………………..

Maan woke up………………………..

He looked at the photo…………………………..and smiled again.

And jumped to look at the time

Mr msk late…………

Oh no…..

This girl driving him insane………………..

And went to washroom………………………………….

 Came out to find geet smiling……………………and serving him at the breakfast table….

Where he smiled……………….and lovingly looking at her……………………

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
chandu shocked…………….to find his boss smiling

He wave his hand

Maan came back

And put his hand on his hair……………..

And he open the car door

To find geet in the car driver dress

Smiling at him……………………

He smiled again
Abhi Kuch Dino Se Main Sochta Hoon
Ki Dil Ki Thodi Si Sun Loon
Yaha Rehne Aayegi
Dil Saja Loon Mein Khwab Thode Se Boon Loon
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Tu Bekhabar , Ya Sab Khabar
Ek Din Zara Mere Masoom Dil Pe Gaur Kar
Pardon Mein Main Rakh Loon Tujhe
Ki Dil Tera Aa Na Jaaye Kahin Yeh Gair Par
he reached the office

Enter the reception

To find geet is giving file

She is in pinky dress……………………….
Hum Bhole Hai , Sharmile Hai
Hum Hai Zara Siddhe Masoom Itni Khair Kar
Jis Din Kabhi
Zidd Pe Ade
Hum Ayenge Aag Ka Tera Dariya Tair Kar

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lage Mera Dil
Duth Ho Jaise Nashe Mein
Kyun Lad Khadaye Yeh Beheke Gaye
Hai Tere Har Raaste Pe
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
and then he enter to find……….

Geet in sasha 's cabin……………………
Banke Shehar Chal Raat Bhar
Tu Aur Main Toh Musafir Bhatakte Hum Phire
Chal Raaste Jahan Le Chale
Sapnon Ke Phir Teri Aahon Mein Thak Ke Hum Gire
and he turned to look at the door…

Where geet enter with……………………..file……………………
Koi Pyaar Ki , Tarkeeb Ho
Nuskhe Koi Jo Sikhaye Toh Hum Bhi Seekh Le
Yeh Pyaar Hai Rehta Kaha
Koi Humse Kahe Us Se Jaa K Pooch Le
Mein Sambhaloon Pau Pisal Na Jau
Nayee Nayee Dosti Hai
Zara Dekh Bhal Sambhal Ke Chalna
Keh Rahi Zindagi Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

he again smiled………

The person shocked…………………
Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya. . .
he turned to find the file

Are yeh to adi ke pass hay……aur tume isse kyon laya geet………

He turned to find .adi……

Adi :sir…..are u alright

He didn't believe………………….when pinky gave a shocking news that she saw smiling msk when she handover the service maintained file………………………..

He laughed and gave a pinky a look and then the same news from other people

He came for confirmation

Where he actually saw and he felt happy

He is still in his dream world.when the question arised

Where is geet

Adi where is geet………………………….

His smile changed to anger………………………….

Geet:pls come fast.other wise the smiling……………changes to danger action

But due to his luck.

Geet came to office

He looked at her…..like he is seeing her first time…………………………..

Geet looked at him …………………….

 

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
maan falling for her..
pl cont soon

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