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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice one
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
mindblowin update
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Next day morning…………………….

He woke up and reach the window……………..

He heard gigglingsounds……………….

It is pari……………………she is a t the lawn chair

He saw her

Tying shoe laces to pari.which is busy in eating………….and giggling.wher e rohan is doing…………………………….some home work.

Just then driver came there.

And she said bye to pari and rohan.

Roha n kissed her cheek.saying bye………………maasi…….

Where as pari gone a nd came back and kissed her cheek sayi ng bye sweety………………

Geet looked at her ………………………..

She is becoming naughty………….sab inke wajah se…she remember maan how naughty he was.

She blushed.

Dekh geet jhalli ho gayee hay din mein sapne dekh rahi

She turn back and bumped with solid rock chest……

She fumbling

Sambalke geet dyan kaha hay tumara…………….

He is looking at her the thought of me making u blush what I had done geet.

He said in husky voice shakin g geet……………to corehe turned his face ………….and went back to the room to bump with anee…..

Anee surprised to find his brother in just vest and pants………………………….in his world……………………

Bhai.kaha kho gayee hoo aap……aur itnee subha subha out house.

Who pari aur rohan ko dekhne ke liya ayaa tha.woh school ka time hogayaa na……………………

lekin driver kojaake nbahut waqt lagee naa…………..

uffo anee……………………itne sawaal kyon pooch rahee hoo………………………….

He smack his head.and we nt to his room for getting readyh for office………………

Anee came down.

And suddenly she screamed.misha…………………………….

And misha too screamed anee…………

They hugged each other…..

I thoug ht only one bhabi here two..

Misha shut up.maan veerji hamere baaremein kuch nahii pataa…………………………..we are just friends.

Aur geet kobhi.lnahii.infact geet ko uyeh nahii pata hay ke……………………Vicky naam ka devil koi hay ya nahii…………………….

Ok.relax.

Aur haa maan bhai ko shaq nahii huwa naa……

Naa.dont worry yesterday broke out.but somehow managed saying daadi………………….

Ok………….now listen…………………………………..

After 3 days geets birthday…………….

As maan is going out…………….

He listened geet birthday………oh god.what I supposedto do now.

I need to do some special arrangements……………………………

But he didn't listened to the next convo.

But geet did n't celebrate.as it is athe death day of her mother

She always feel s she is responble for the death of her mother…………………so………………………….

Ok.lets us plan somethingdifferent….

She need to come out of this shell……………….

Yaa………………………………….

But geet is worried why maa n is not allowing to come to office……………………..

He then thought

Andcalled adi.

Adi:make sure geet doesn't come to office and I want special cameras……………………………in out house……………….

And one morething..mak e some necessary arrangements that geet can work fro m home……….

And whaat about the detective information

Sir.everything onplace,

Just then thereisa knock on the door………………………………

Hefind sasha …….he fumed in anger but controlled……………………………………….

He is waiting for right time……………

She should not escape…………………………….

He will deal with later……………………………………

Just few more days sasha then I will show ur right place ……………………..and rightposition………………

And his thoughts went to his misty.

The way she take care of rohan an d pari…….

He smiled.

The only person makes him smile……………………………..

At the evening……………….

Geet is busy in  kictchen..

Anee and misha went to shopping with kids…………………………………..

And geet left alone as she need to do some office work.

As she is busy in kitchen.

When maan enter into themansion.

He smiled seeing her in kitchen.

And quickly went to his room……………

Got ready and reach downstairs…….

He saw nakul signaled togo away……………..

Where geet is busy in workland mummering.

Heybabaji unee anee se pehle muje saari kaam katam karna chaheye…………………….haa.

she heard chukled and sourrounded by a fresh air.she inhaled why im feeling his presence here……………………..

she turned to find .the greek god…..in his formals…………legs crossed.first two buttons open.fresh……………water dripping from his head.

Magnificent and attractive and the killer and piecing look as he is going to eat her alive…………………………………….

She shocked and her breathingbecam eheavy suddenly

He smiled the effecton her

 


precap

i saw him...

he is in  delhi...

oh my god he is in delhi

he came too...

tears flowing on her eyes...

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg
it was an awesome update

looking forward to the next update

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg awasome update

waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
wats maan planning...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm