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Posted: 12 years ago

Next day

Morning………………..

Chandu and other head servants…are running…………….

As fast as they could.

It is time 8 0 clock………………..

And everyone was running……………..at that time……………

As it is time for the lion of the home to have his breakfast

But today he didn't come out of his room.

Dadimaa came out and shocked to find ……

That mr perfectionist is late…….

She hurriedly went to his room to find……his grandson still on his bed…………………………….

She went near to him…….to find shocked.to see the scene

His grand son is smiling……………………………

A cute smile………………

Such a cutee pie.she used to love it when he used to smile………

She felt like she is a 20 yrs teenager………………………….again..seeing his grandson smiling.

And noticed the phone…………………….which he is holding like a treasure donot want to leave it…

She try to took.but failed……………………

She smiled….there must be something on that phone which making his grand son….smile.

May be girl photo.she is in verge of doing typical bhangra.but  stopped…but god what ever the reason……………………………….

The person make my grandson.happy..if it is  agirl.make sure u make her my grandson…………….s wife……………………….my wish will be fulfilled………………

She is happy and she came out a dancing pose.

Which again shocked by servants…

Some on them literally fall on ground………………..

Maan woke up………………………..

He looked at the photo…………………………..and smiled again.

And jumped to look at the time

Mr msk late…………

Oh no…..

This girl driving him insane………………..

And went to washroom………………………………….

 Came out to find geet smiling……………………and serving him at the breakfast table….

Where he smiled……………….and lovingly looking at her……………………

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lag Raha Hai
Badle Badle Se Hum Hai
Hum Baithe Baithe Din Mein Sapne
Dekte Neendein Kam Hai,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
chandu shocked…………….to find his boss smiling

He wave his hand

Maan came back

And put his hand on his hair……………..

And he open the car door

To find geet in the car driver dress

Smiling at him……………………

He smiled again
Abhi Kuch Dino Se Main Sochta Hoon
Ki Dil Ki Thodi Si Sun Loon
Yaha Rehne Aayegi
Dil Saja Loon Mein Khwab Thode Se Boon Loon
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Tu Bekhabar , Ya Sab Khabar
Ek Din Zara Mere Masoom Dil Pe Gaur Kar
Pardon Mein Main Rakh Loon Tujhe
Ki Dil Tera Aa Na Jaaye Kahin Yeh Gair Par
he reached the office

Enter the reception

To find geet is giving file

She is in pinky dress……………………….
Hum Bhole Hai , Sharmile Hai
Hum Hai Zara Siddhe Masoom Itni Khair Kar
Jis Din Kabhi
Zidd Pe Ade
Hum Ayenge Aag Ka Tera Dariya Tair Kar

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Lage Mera Dil
Duth Ho Jaise Nashe Mein
Kyun Lad Khadaye Yeh Beheke Gaye
Hai Tere Har Raaste Pe
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,
and then he enter to find……….

Geet in sasha 's cabin……………………
Banke Shehar Chal Raat Bhar
Tu Aur Main Toh Musafir Bhatakte Hum Phire
Chal Raaste Jahan Le Chale
Sapnon Ke Phir Teri Aahon Mein Thak Ke Hum Gire
and he turned to look at the door…

Where geet enter with……………………..file……………………
Koi Pyaar Ki , Tarkeeb Ho
Nuskhe Koi Jo Sikhaye Toh Hum Bhi Seekh Le
Yeh Pyaar Hai Rehta Kaha
Koi Humse Kahe Us Se Jaa K Pooch Le
Mein Sambhaloon Pau Pisal Na Jau
Nayee Nayee Dosti Hai
Zara Dekh Bhal Sambhal Ke Chalna
Keh Rahi Zindagi Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

he again smiled………

The person shocked…………………
Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya,

Abhi Kuch Dino Se Suna Hai Dil Ka
Rob Hi Kuch Naya Hai
Koi Raaz Kambakht Hai Chupaye
Khuda Hi Jaane Ki Kya Hai
Hai Dil Pe Shaq Mera

Ise Pyaar Ho Gaya. . .
he turned to find the file

Are yeh to adi ke pass hay……aur tume isse kyon laya geet………

He turned to find .adi……

Adi :sir…..are u alright

He didn't believe………………….when pinky gave a shocking news that she saw smiling msk when she handover the service maintained file………………………..

He laughed and gave a pinky a look and then the same news from other people

He came for confirmation

Where he actually saw and he felt happy

He is still in his dream world.when the question arised

Where is geet

Adi where is geet………………………….

His smile changed to anger………………………….

Geet:pls come fast.other wise the smiling……………changes to danger action

But due to his luck.

Geet came to office

He looked at her…..like he is seeing her first time…………………………..

Geet looked at him …………………….

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
maan falling for her..
pl cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow he's getting mad in love...
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maan has already fallen for her...
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wow fabulous update
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He is looking as her seeing first time

Geet what happened to him.

Why he is looking at her………….

On the other hand she is worried as her cell is missing…………..

And she knows ……..it is important………………………………

She is searching from the morning.

Her face Is dull…………….confused.

Sir……..

Sir.

Maan came back to senses…………………….

He looked at her…..

Sir………

Who geet………bring me.mr mehta's file..

She looked at him.

He turned his chair………..

What's wrong with u.maan……………….why your seeing her like that ……………………..

Geet.get ready for presentation..we are working…on..

In 30 minutes.clients are coming………

Geet yes sir…..

Move into the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,

Meantime bumped with sasha……………………

Sorry maam..what's wrong with u miss handa………can't u see and walk……..and why are u doing moon walking……………..

Sorry maam………..as she is confused and dull from morning…………the things are going…………out of control.

In meantime…..presentation……………………..

What should I do now…….

She is still in her room.

It is past 15 minutes there is no sign of her,

He is restless……………………………………….

Out of frustutation………………………

He came to her cabin.

He enter the cabin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

To look the sight……..stopped at his tracks………

Hair locks on her face….

She is resting on her chair…………………….head throw back of the chair……

Eyes are closed…………………….

He just stared the beauty……………………………….

He observed the tears….on her face………………………….

Night……………

She came home………..

Find rohan and pari are sleeping at the couch itself.

She made them sleep on their bed………………………..

She changed………….

And want to call misha…..

But she find that her cell is missing,

With the thoughts she slept……………

A car reached her flat…

The door opened……..

Finally ifound u.

She open her eyes.to find……..the person which she does not want to see In her life time……

DEV SHERGIL.

She said …………………no don't come near to me.

No..

She quickly open her eyes………………….in sweat………………..

She cannot sleep throught out the night………………

Next day she quickly rushed to office………………………….

And then the thought…

Geet……………………………….

No don't come near to me…………………

There Is something…………………….

Again the same nightmare……………………………

Tears are flowing from the beautiful eyes…………….

He cannot see them.

Geet.

Unknowingly she hugged him……….

He return the hug……………………….

She is crying……………………………

She suddenly she realized that leave him and ran to her washroom…

Maan is super duper confused…………………….

He realized…….there is something wrong…

He put the cell on the table and moved into the room………………….

She came from the washroom………………………..

And looked at the cell.

She smiled…….happily…………………………

She open the photo.

Didi………………………pata hay .dar gayee.thi………………………..

Maan is looking her from the binds.

He smiled on looking the smile on her face………..

He will do anything for that…………………

Next 10 minutes the presentation started………….

Sasha and others are looking at her with weird faces………..

She started and finished……………………….the presentation……………………………

Where maan face is brightened………………….

On his thoughts………

He got a call from dadimaa……………………

He attent dadimaa call……..as she is going to visit her cousin……………..

He put the phone to look at adi.congratulating……………………….geet………………….

Adi is always very much protective to geet.

And pinky bubbly…………friend…………………..

Sharing sweet moments………………………..

His life will be filled with happiness.

But a thoughts stickon his mind.

Why is she is crying..

And who hurted like this…………………….

I need to findout……………

But how………………………………………

Next day………….morning…………

Adi went to Mumbai along with sasha …………for the project of highways………………….

And next………………

Pinky and rohan are getting………..ready for school….

Bell ring…………..

He checked…………...and ring again…………………………

To his surprise the door open by little girl………………….of the school………….

Pari open the door to find the same uncle……………….

She looked at him with questioning eyes..

Kaun hay pari……………………

Who school wala uncle maasi……………………….

Maasi……….maan chuckled………………feel something…………had removed from his heart.

He smiled looking at geet's little copy.

The same hazzle eyes……………………………………

In her pink uniform..

Then came rohan………………………..again the question look………

What's wrong withu both..

Ur getting late for ur school bus.

Rohan complete ur breakfast now……

And pari…………………….donot leave ur food………other wise……ur not going to get choclate cake at the evening…………..nor ur little Barbie doll…………………………….

And rohan..make sure she also does her home work at the time before go to bed..

Ok.

Now pack ur boxes……………

Get ready…………………….

As she is saying………………………

Shocked to find……………….

Msk at the door….

Looking at her

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Posted: 12 years ago
a super duper update...loved it
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FANTASTIC...PLEASE PM ME...PLS CONTINUE Edited by amita5 - 12 years ago
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supreb update.
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