the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue - Page 2

A new place………..

A hostel..at derhadun…………………

The windows are blowing……………..

A tom boy girl………………

Her name is misha..dobriyal

And another girl name priya……………………………………………………………………….

And kabir and others…………

And all asked for one name……..

Geet…………………………………

A beautiful girl………is shown playing with flowers……

She is sad as she cannot  attend her sister marriage………………………..

Her darling sister………………which is mother to her.

She cried.

Her friends try to cheer up.

So she took her to the mountains.

Meera and dev are happy……..

Meera used to speak to geet….on phone….

Even dev also……………………

After few months…………

Meera was pregnant……………………………….

She is very happy….

She is mother……………………

Geet jumped with joy………………

She is in graduation………

And her project is on the way.

She is very happy…………………………………….

And meera is very happy.

As she had delivery of twins.

One son and on e daughter.

Geet is very happy………..on seeing them.

She became massi……………………………….

And she also send photographs of her excerssion……………………………..to sister and jeeju……………….

Their marriage photos on her desktop………..

The next year………..she is leaving…

Her graduation last year…………and she is………………….preparing for her cat………….

She is busy.

But atlast……………………she got chance to.meet her sister..and jeeju and her……..sweet little kids………………

Rohan and pari……………………………..

She want to play with them….

She reached  home………………..

She felt the presence.

She hugged her father…………………………

And she is waiting.

 A tall and handsome person…..came into the room.

Looking shock a t the beautiful girl in presence of him..

The lovely almond shape  hazzle eyes……………………………

And lovely chin……and the soft lips………………………

She Is beautiful……………………….

And then.

Bachii…………….

She turned back….to find…………………meera her sister………….looking at her.

She gone and hug her..

And also the lovely dovely little rohan and pari..

She is smiling..playing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Like a kid…….

Yes she is a kid….

Meer ais very happy………………………………

As her family is complete…..at the night………..

Dev is waiting for meera…………………….

Meera enter the room.

Im thinking………..that bachii ke shaadi……..

Lekin,who mba karna chahetee hya……

Dev is not impressed………………but said…agar usko padnaa hay…..toh padne do na………….

Rishtee ke baremein………………………………..

Baad mein sochna………………………………….

Lekin……………….dev………………….

And in few days………………….

They are shifted to mumbai…….

Suddenly…………….

Problems are started………

There is a huge blast in handa factory……………..

And there is a loss…

The financial loss is more than…………………expected…….

And even the insurance is ……….also.not recovered………………

And the worst conditions…………………….is he need to sell the properties.

Dev came there………..

And he had paid all the debt……

And due to the health condition of mr handa…………………….

He took him to the………….mumbai.

And In few days there are shift to..mumbai………………

All are happy.and praised mr mohindar handa.for having such a dutiful and……………loving care……SIL………………………

And even everyone was very happy……………………..

She did not know what to do

She is busy for admission.

For some reasons.

She found………………….her sister meera is upset.

Her health is not permitted.

No cheerness…………………in her life

Geet is also busy………………..

On the other hand………….rohan and pari…………………near to geet….

They always with geet.

And geet used t o take care………………of the kids………………….

And also her father

As the financial loss………internally…………………………created a havoc in mohindar's health……….

He used to feel bad for the accident…………

One night…………………

She had given tablets to her father……………..and also……………..to the sister.

No body cannot knows what the disease is…………..

But she is indeed becoming weak…………………..

On fine morning…..when she is waiting.for the bus stop..

One person came and stand in front of her………………

He is saying something………..

But the geet could not understand a bit.

Suddenly dev came there…………

When the person saw dev………..the person ran from there…………………

Geet is surprised……………………..

Dev:geet chalo.mein tume university………………mein drop karunga……….

Chalo.

Geet sit in the car………………..

She is thinking a lot…

Dev manages to say that he loves her sister……………….

She is feeling bad about him…

One fine night .when everyone was sleeping…

Suddenly she felt someone in the room…….

She open the eyes to find………..dev……………

She jerked.

Dev:sorry geet mein ne tume daraya kya….woh bachoo ke yaad are rahi thi is liye….

She turned round to find…………rohan and pari….is sleeping with her almost hugging her………………..

Oh sorry……jeeju…………………

He want to took………………rohan and pari…………..but……………they didn't turn up.

So he left to his room……………

Geet………..felt bad for him…….

Next day.she went to mandir…………………………….

Hey babaji…..yeh sab kya hay.didi………………ki tabiyat aur upar se papa ke bhi tabiyat………

As she finishe dthe pooja…she find the same person at the bus stop……………..

He quickly put a paper……..in the hand……and he ran off…

Geet open the paper………………………….

Muje tumse baat karni hay,………….kya kal subha hum tumare ghar ke park mein mil sakthe hay kya…………………..

And she turned to find the person…………………….is not there.

Babaji yeh kya kar rahe hoo……………………………..

At the night……….geet cannot able to.sleep.

Who is the person…and what he is wanted to say………………………..and why….he wanted to meet me alone.

Did I say to jeeju.

No no……..already…………………….jeeju parisaan………….hay ismein problems mein unee nahii daldongi…..

With a firm decision.

And she drooze to sleep……..

Next day………………….

She gone to the park……………………………..but she find no one.

She waited for him..but no use….she thought somebody played a prank on her.

And she returned back to the studies………………

As she is…………..busy………in her semester exams………

She observed some changes in jeeju's behaviour.

He always busy in the work………………….

She always feel that he is neglecting……………the family………………………………..

And it is proving………………..

She went to the office.but found he is not there………….

She came back tofind dev is talking to  a person  on phone.

Dekho….agar dubara kisi ko mein uske pass dekha na…toh tumara khair nahii….samje….

She scared.

She never see dev In this roop..'

He is always calm ,,,,cool……..sweet spoken person….

His charm on the talks………………….

He is yelling but on whom…………………….

She is dumbstucked………………………………

And she is terrible………….

On the other hand……suddenly………….meera's health…………………is disturbing.she cannot breath properly……………….

And she drive her to the hospital………………………………….

The doctor examined her…

Before she could answer…….doctor…….dev enter the room with a worried face……………

The doctor ……………………………

And he cut the words.

And he ordered geet to take care of kids and also uncle………………

She remember that is the time that rohan and pari comes from school.

She rushed back to the school to pick them up………………

 

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Geet is worried.

As she didn't get phone call from………………..hospital………

On the other hand…..her father health Is also serious…………………..

She is terribly worried………………..

On the other hand…………

Pari………………is not feeling well..

She is with fever……………….

She turned to find meera……….

Didi aap apke tabiyat teek nahi naa………….aur aap yeha kaisa ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Pls didi……………batayana.

Meera:geet rohan aur pari ka khayal rakna……..aur apna aur papa bhi……..

Unee akhele mat chodna……………………………………………..

Ab muje jaana hoga….\beta bhool se bhi kisi par vishwas mat karna……..aur haa.pyar bhi mat karna….

Pyar dokha deta hay.

Mera pass jyada waqt nahii…….

Jaa vaha hoo bachii……apna khayal rakna……………

With that she suddenly disappears.

With wonder …….geet enter into the house

The house is so calm..

And in the middle there is meera body laid ……..

She is dead………………………

Geet unable to cry………..

No tears from her eyes……..

She is In shock………...

On the other hand……………………rohan and pari are worried about their mother

And dev………………………

Is laid………………..there…….

It appears he is in shock…

Mr mohindar………………………………….not crying.the shock made him to admit in hospital……………………

She Is I shock.

After few days..

Geet is completely engrossed in daily activities.

She used to prepare food for dev and others…

She used to take care of rohan and pari.

But due to some reasons….pari.never goes to her father…………

She always cling with geet……………………

And even geet too.

She know she never take the place of……………………meera.

That day is her best

She went to mandir………………………

Suddenly a baba appeared at the sight

Tujee kuch raaz jaana hay

Lekin aaj sab ka khulega…………………………..

And he left………………………….

But she is trying her best…

One day.when the servant is busy in cleaning the room………………………

On that day when meera leaved….dev never allowed anyone to enter into the room……………..

Geet on that day enter to clear the room………

She is taking her sister cloths…..

And she is remembering……………………………..old memories……………

Where her sister used to buy two dresses always.for her and one her lovely sister……………..

And she smiled the thoughts………………

On the other hand….dev is gone for conferene………………………in London………………………

And suddenly winds blow………….

And a letter…………..flow on her feet……….it is meera 's letter…………………….

I know my sweet bachi….tere bachpan ke adaat hay…………………….

Tere har janam din par…………………mere kamre mein akar……dhoodne ke adaat hay.

Yeh sirf tume aur muje pata hay……..kisi ke bhi nahii…………..

Lekin iss adaat aaj tere madad karegi mere bachii…………………………….

Haa……………………..

Mein jab bhi tujee dekhtee hoo…mere mann mein ek hi khayal hay….ki mere bachii ko koi raj kumar ayagaa……aur usse ghode pe bitakar…..lekar chala jayaga………………

Ek badi banglow……………………bahut ii ameer admi……..jiska dil bi utni badi hoo……………..

Mere iss sapne………..hamesha mere ankhoom mein………………………….reha gayee……………………………………

Lekin………………….

Jab mere zindagi mein pyar ayaa……….aur khoosiyaa layee…muje laga tere sapne bhi jaroor poore hojayege………………………………..

Isliye…………….

Mein hamesha…………khush hoot ere liya………..

Lekin waqt ek jaisa nahii hota…………………

Mein bhool gayee…..ki utna hi nadaan hoo………..jitna pehle thi…………………….

Haa mere bachii……..usee nadaan ke wajah se meinne tume Mumbai bhoolaya …………………

Pata nahii tha…….ki yeh mere zindagi sab se badi galthi hogi………………………..

Rohan aur pari se pehle tum mere bachii hoo...

Geet is shocked...

Jab se tune excersion ke pictures bejee thi...

Dev ke bartaav mein kuch badalaw ayaa………………….

Ekdin mein aur dev………………….project ke reports dekh rahii thi……………..

Us din.mein ne uske desktop mein tere excursion ka pictures dekhi hay.

Mein ne jab click kiya…………..toh…mere zindagi ka sab se bada jatka lagaa….

Haa……….geet…

Us mein sirf tera pictures they………………..nahi tumare dost ..naa tumare group photos…….sab ko alag karke sirf tum…………………

Aur photo ke nechee coments……………

Mein nahii dekh payee…………………..

Kuch dino ke baad….har baar muje aur bachoo ko force kar rahe they………………….ke hum………………..apne ghar jayee….

Uske intensions se mein tang karke ek din.mein ne usee confront kiya..

Aur usne kaha,….ki woh tumse…………………..

Tears……………

Woh tumse pyar kartha hay…………aur tumse shaadi karna chahtaa hay….

Dev ka badla roop……………uska pagal pan…..mein darke maare parishaan ho rahi thi……ek din jab woh chilla raha tha…..toh pari ne dekh liya…………….

Us din se pari usse nafrat karne lagii…………..hay

Mein ne tume rokhne ke bahut koshish ki...

Lekin papa ke finanicial  loss ke wajah se,,,,,,,,,,tum log ko…………….yeha anee pada…

Aur mere tabiyaat karab hone ke wajah se…………

Geet………….tuje……………….mein rokne ke liye.

Padosoon ke madad mange……lekin mere saari plans.fail hogayeee………..

Geet tume kabhi bhi……mere chinta mat karna

Bachoo aur...baba ko lekar yeha se chale janaa...

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Geet fall on the floor'.

In a shock'..

Then she identified the things ..

The younger boy who want to talk to her'.

Everything''''.

On the other hand''.

Dev is in London hotel room''

A photo in his hand'''.

U know geet''.when I saw u'..my heart lost'''.

Ur angel'''..how can I leave u''''''''''.

I cannot see u with any other one'''.

Ur photos''''..ur smile.mad eme crazy geet'''''''.

Meera is a normal girl'''''''but geet ur amazing'''''..

What I done'to get u geet''..

U know everytime I want u in my arms.

Even I planned fire accident in handa industry''''''''..

And also bribed the office people'''''..to''''..destroy the insurance papers'..so that no one can claim the Insurance'''.and the financial'''''.loss''''''.

So that I can get u in my house'''

I will give u every thing'''''''''

But my plan back fired'as ur dearest sister became hurdle to my way.

So I had no option to''''poison her''''''''

And the slow poison in to her body which makes her sick'so that I know u love ur sister.and do everything for her''

And even u will also become mother of the children''''''''''''

So baby''''few days after u will be mine'''''''''''.

Geet is shattered'''..

Next day.she need to do something fast..other wise'''..there is going to be trouble.

She ran to the hospital''

Where the doctor confirmed about the poision''''..

She donot want to waste the time''''

First she need to look after her father's health''''..

She call ed a number'''.

Deharadun''''.

Misha dobriyal'''''''..

Misha:yeh geet what s wrong no phone..i know ur busy with ur MBA but still'''''..

Geet:misha'''..

Misha:sweety there is something wrong'.

Without hestitating''.she explained everything''''''''''

Misha:don't worry that moron never get u''''''''u come to here''''

Geet:no''misha..if he found out I was missing the first thing'''..they will meet u'''.because he knew about u''''.so I cannot afford''''..

First I nee dto go for a place''.where.i can protect children and papaji from that monster'.

Misha:don't worry'..i have a cousin there'''''''..but right now she is staying at '''''''london''''wait a minute''''..

Oh I got''I dad friend son is staying there.they belong to middle class'..and working with some construction company I n delhi''and trust me no  one knows about him'..he is our family friend''''''''.i will do one thing.i will just phone''''''tohim and give the details''

I n mean time'''''..with the help of remaining buddies'.i will make sure that papaji shifted from Mumbai hospital to delhi'''..city hospitals'''''''''''

I will talk to di's best friend'''.her name is dr anjali''

Geet:thank u misha.but make sure'''u r information''..

Misha:donot worry.geet'''''''''I will manage.

We ll meet soon''''''''.

And just ran from the moron right now'''''

With in a day.with the help of dr anjali she managed to shift papaji to'''''''delhi city hospitals'''''.

And she also took all the necessary things'''''''''''and with'''''''rohan and pari''.she managed to enter the train'''.

Make sure she did not reserve the tickets'''''''''..

So that the person cannot track'''''.him'''..

She is sobbing''''''''''''.

She managed to find the address''.

Where a person.with broad shoulder''''and a spectacles'''''received her'''''''..

He took rohan'.into his hands.

And introduced'''''''..

Hello ithink ur geet''''.witha  astammering''''..

Hello im aditya''''''.varma''''''''..

Everyone call''.adi'''''''..

And he took them to his house'''''

That is double bed room flat''''''

And big'''''..

Geet make ur self comfortable''

And don't worry about u and ur kids they are safe here''''''''.

He amused that such a younger and good looking girl..facing problems at this smaller age'''

Geet mouthed him thanks..

And took''''..rohan and pari to the room,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I meantime.pari''''''''..wake from sleep'''''''.

And geet make her to sleep''''..

The new journey''''..

She phone to '''''''misha and other friends'..

And make sure for necessary ''''''''..documents'..

The friends'''.clear all her troubles''''

Dev enter into the house found empty'

No photo of meera'''''nor geet and kids'..

And also no signs of his father in law..

Wher e is geet'..

Did she know the truth.

He saw a letter''''''.

Geet:I know ur looking for me''''''..i never believed that  

The person who my sister gave the image'''''..of god.turn to b e evil''''''''''''

And im not that innocent when compared to'''my sister'''''''''and regarding children'''''''.now im  mother and father'..of them.and im enough capable to take care of my father''''''''..at this time'''''''

Mr dev shergil'''..i donot want to see ur face''''''''.

And I donot want u in our lives''''''''''

And donot waste time''''''

And good bye'..mr dev shergil

No geet u cannot''''''..leave me''''''''''.he broke the ''..vase'..in his hand.and even he destroyed all the furnaturee''''''.

He screamed geet'''''''''

On the other hand'''''''..geet open her eyes in the morning'''''''.

It is fresh morning'''''''''..

Few weaks'''''''.

She manage to got admission for rohan and pari'''''.

And she is in search of job'''''''

And she got a job''''''..as a receptionist at the hotel'''''.

Suddenly she got a call'''''''''

From the hospital''''''''..

So she ran towards the hospital'''.

Flash back end''''''''..

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 12 years ago

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