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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue

srilu_123 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 January 2009
Posts: 3645

Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged

Hey guys


Here is my new FF

 Maneet ofcourse''''''''..

Name will be'''..soon'''''''''''.




 A person is in his car'''..a heavily rain''..the driver is driving in concentration'as due to the weather'''''''.he is.getting late'

And the person'sitting in back''''''.is a person in temper'''''''''..he can shot you.within''''''seconds.and he never waste''''..time.

Time is money''''..handles lot of business''''''.utmost business man in India''''..4 times awarded best business man'''''..hates woman'''''for some reasons''''''''''''.never believe in love'''''..

But always life changes'..

He is busy in laptop trying to get signal..trying his best''''' concentrate on his work.but the rain is .distracting him''''..

\suddenly the driver stopped'''..

The person look at the anger.if

it got power then surely he will get burnt''''''.

He looked at the driver''''''''..

He is 30 yr old'''''''.ramesh''''''''..

He always terror the person''but ''''.the person likes him.

He is going round..suddenly he felt''''.a girl Is asking for lift''as the driver feared that''the girl came in front of the car'''.wearing in  a white self print chudidar'''''''..

Fully drenched..but seems she is not paying any attention'''''''''''''..

She is in hurry''.

The person looked at the driver.and the driver pointed the direction.

With in a seconds'.the girl came in front of the car.

Before the person'yelled''..

The sweet vvoice''''interrupt'''''

Pls sir''.it is emergency'I need to rush to hospital'.pls''''.can u give me lift to City Hospitals''''..

Pls sir.

The driver'.i a mess'''''he turned back.

He thought ramesh ur dead today.

But a voice'it is ok''''''

Let herin'''..

The driver shocked'''''..

And on the other hand'''''''

She came and open the other side of the door.

The girl enter.

He is still busy in the laptop''''''

The girl is not in apposition to look at him''''''''..

He is busy in his laptop.

He is irrated''' he heard a sobs'.he hate that '''he always feel that tears.are for loosers'''

And he hate loosers''''''.

He turn his head irritation.

But the sight'''''.changed his expression'

The girl I n eighteen or nineteen'''''

Hair is full over on her face'.the creamy white skin of her matching her dress color''''''''white'..completely messed up.but looking beautifull''.tears are rolling down.

Suddenly a bump'''

And she came towards''''..the person,face to face.

Then he saw her.

The dark brown hazzle eyes''filled with tears''

Sucha pretty eyes'..he never seen'''''''''..

The petty nose''''''''''and the beautifull'''..lumpy kissable lips''''''..which gives a extra

He cannot say she is beautifull.she is awesome'''''''''

And she looked the person who caught her hand'''''''

The person.dark brown intense eyes'..make anyone to follow his rules''''''.

A mustache and beard'''.

Long jaws.tightened'''..

She cannot say he is just handsome'''

He is terrific'''''.handsome is a least''''name for him'''''..

He is the best.

The car came to the destination.

He leave hand''''..

First time'''''''he felt something is going away from him'..

As on the othe r hand.

The girl realized and ran to the hospital'''.

He looked at the hospital.

And shook his head.

The girl ran to the ward.

The reception.

I need to meet'.mr'.mohindar handa'''''''''..

And who u r.

Im his daughter geet handa'''''''''''''.

Room no 442

She ran towards the lift'''''.with fiddling her dupatta''''..

The person came out of the world'''''.he answered'''.

Mk the meeting is held tomorrow 10 0clock..

Ok the person answered with attitude''''''''.

His assistant sasha Mehta''.informed'.0

She sighed and cut the phone''''...

He turned.back''

He is the most hot '.eligible' business man in India'''''''''''''


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Hey guys hope u enjoy'''..

Give comments''''''''.

Edited by srilu_123 - 06 November 2011 at 11:45am

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
love it

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Chelsha Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
I can not say your story is nice, its excellent yaar. When will you continue?

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khushimuskaan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
do count dear..its awsomeBig smile
amita5 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged

do continue
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
nice start ..
plzz add me to the pm list and continue soon
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