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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 87)

tellyme IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Thank you every one for liking my posts and supporting me...
Sorry i was not available on India forums on weekend so there is so much delay in this update...
This is a short update but I will post next update tommorow... so bear with this short one...
Part 25

When Geet came down Maan could not move his eyes from her... Even In a simple sleveless salwar suit with light blue and pink shade... she looked ravishing and beautful... When Geet saw Maan waiting for her downstairs she just wanted to be in his arm always... her physical desire knew now boundaries when Maan was concerned... but she had to control her feelings


Geet:"Hnnn" she held his arms tightly with both her hands and they started walking

Maan(smiles):"abhi tumne mujhse kaha...keep distance... aur yeh kya"

Geet didn't know what to say... she can't stay away from him but she herself told him to stay away

Geet:"Maine yeh kaha...aap mujhse dur rahiye.. maine khud ko apse dur rehne nahi kaha..."

Maan:"wah yeh kya baat hai..."

Geet:"Baat yeh hai kee this is your 1st punishment... I can come near you whenever I feel... you canot... jab tak main aapko maaf nahi kertee..."

Maan:"sochlo...loss tumhara hee hoga..."

Geet:"hnnn...soch liya..."

Then they are driving to resturant...

Maan:"tou yehi punishment hai tumhare..."

Geet:"ji nahi...abhi aur hain... I am not letting  you go that easily... got it.."

Maan:"Tou woh sab bhi bata hee do..."

Geet:"Haha ha... woh tou main aapko lunch ke waqt hee bataoongee...itnee jaldi bhi kya hai... I want to see you face when you hear that...lunch ka maza bhi ayega...aapkee wajah se mujhe uss Dev ke saath..."

with this Maan's mind went on Dev..."from where did this came up suddenly... why also after so much insult from Geet he wanted to marry Geet..." so many Q came to his mind... "I have to find out what's the matter with this Dev... why was he so much interested in Geet..."

after a while

Maan:"Geet... when you used to go with  Dev ...what was his behaviour... I mean somthg about him"

Geet:"aapp abhi bhi mujhper saq ker rahe hain na Maan... mujhe uss Dev se koi lena dena nahi hai... Uskee baat karenge na aapp tou main aapke saath kahi nahi jaoongee..."

Maan:"Geet...main tumper shak nahi ker raha... but I want to know intention of Dev... I am just wondering why was he so inclined to marry you even when you were insulting him..."

Geet:"Maan please... I am not at all interested in his intentions... so will you stop discussing Dev btwn us... Itne dino ke baad apke saath bahar ja rahee hoon...I don't want to hear that Dev's name now... pls"

Maan understood it was of no use to enquire about Dev with Geet... he has to find some other way... he didn't want to spoil her mood...

And Geet on other side wanted to cherish each moment spent with Maan today so she did not want to hear Dev's name with whom she had to compulsury meet so many days...

He takes her to her Fav resturant... It was geet who ordered the menu and drink... Maan was just enjoying pampering her... she had faced lot of trouble due to him...

While they are having lunch

Geet:"hmmm... tou Maan your 2nd punishment... You are being on leave for 7 days and no office work for this seven Days..."

Maan just chocked his food hearing this...

Maan:"Geet... yeh kya hai... you are teasing me right????"

Geet:"No I am not... and that's what you are doing... understand... this office of urs made you forget about me so for  days U R going to forget your office... and that's it..."

Maan:"Geet isme office kee kya galtee hai... meri galtee hai...tou office pe kaisa gussa...  there are lots of work pending... pls I can't do this... "

Geet:"then don't do... do as you wish... I am leaving"

She really gets furious that he is not ready to leave his office for just 7 days for her... She starts getting up Maan hold her wrist and singnals her to sit

Maan:"aabb yeh naraz hoker jane wali kya baat hai... main mana kahan ker raha hoon... accha theek hai jaisa tum kahogee waisa hee hoga... but what will I do without office for 7 days..."

Geet:"nothing... just learn to live life... what you are leaving now is not a human life... it's robotic... I want you to get out of it... and pls no arguing now..."

Maan said nothing... he had no other option than to agree with her... this was a real punishment for him...

Maan(ST):"itna sara impt meetings and discussions scheduled hai... kaise hoga sab... I will have to reschedule all... I will have to manage any ways"

Maan:"baas abb khush tum...ya abhi kuch aur bhi bakee hai"

Geet:"jii haan... abhi ek aur baaki hai..."

Maan was now scared of what she is going to say next

Geet:"you have to make me feel special... aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya apne... baas ek khat likh dee aur ho gaya... NY se kuch layee bhi nahi mere liye... pata hai mujhe..."

Maan was feeling guilty... his anger had overpowered him so much that time tha he didn't even think of bringing anything for Geet .

Maan:"woh...NY me aisa kuch khass milta bhi kaha hai... I love things over here... waise you are so special to me... you know that right..."

Geet:"Baten mat banaiye... you have to do smthg very very special for me... jisse mujhe lage main kitnee khash hoon"

Maan could do nothing other than smile on her childishness but he knew it was all because see was so metally relaxed after so many days and she knew Maan was there now to take care of all her worries...

Maan:"Ok... so be ready for lots of surprises in coming Days...baas abb tou sab ho gaya na...ya kuch aur bhi bakee hai..."

Geet:"Abhi ke liye itna hee... baad me kuch yaad aya to bata doongee..."

After lunch

Maan:"Geet tumhe main Dadima ke paas chor deta hoon... Uske baad mujhe office jana hai ek khas kaam keliye..."

Geet:"nahi kahin nahi jayenge aapp... maine kaha na aapko office nahi jayenge Aapp"

Maan:"Geet main office koi kaam se nahi ek personal issue solve kerne jaa raha hoon... I

promise I won't deal any office stuff there... mujhe kisis se abhi milna hai... pls let me.."

geet made baby sad face...

Geet:"OK... per jaldi ayenge aapp..."

Maan left her to dadima at his home and headed for office... he needed to do this work today itself

Next to be continued...

Precap: who did Maan meet at office????

Maan:"Geet ko iss baat ka bilkul pata nahi chalna chahiye..."

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged

yay i am first

so maan 's gonna meet someone intersting
thanx for pm
continue soon

Edited by ssch - 04 July 2011 at 11:49am

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aamirkhanfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
awesome that's a real punishment for maan, without his office work...hope maan finds the real intention of dev and his father very soon

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rupzloveu IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
great part...
loved it...

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sunshine94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
yaar cliffhanger...
nice update...thanks for PM

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lalitha.. Goldie

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
nice part...all d conditions geet placed 4 maan is very nice...waiting 4 dat personal issue dat is going 2 b solved by maan...cont soon...thanks 4 pm...

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vrsharma IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Nice part.
Waiting to Know more about Maan personal work

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ana56 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
brilliant update dear
waiting anxiously to know 
maan geet se kya chupana chahta hai

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