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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 74)

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
thanx for the update...go on...

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
wow .. this is just amazing... I read your ff in one go... and it was mind blowing... please could you add me to you pm list.. I would love to read it further without missing any more parts .. thankyouSmile

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
wow!! nice FFBig smile continue soon

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
awsome yaar...lovded it so much

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
wating for maan manaofyi geet

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Hi All,
 
Thank you so so much for liking and commenting on my updates...
 
Wow...all of you inspired me to give this update just within 24hrs...I need to congratulate myself for this...
 
Simi Dear on your request and inspired by piya...I will try to give english transaltion from my next update...I promise
 
Please bear with my this update without transaltion...but it has simple hindi...
 
To Madhusk... Dear I don't know how to include songs and make VMs...I will request roopali for this when I think a scene needs a songs
 
Roopali Dear...can you help me with this when I need...
 
Thanks,
Anu
 
Part 23
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Geet was all set to meet Maan...she was just waiting for him...when she got a call from

Dadima...

Geet:"Dadima aapp...kaisee hain...pata hai main aaj kitnee khush hoon...aapkoo pata bhi nahi Maan ne mujhe kya diya..."

Dadima:"Geet...itnee khush hone kee jaroorat nahi hai...Maan abhi aapse milne aa rahe hai...aapp unse nahi milengeen samjhee aapp..."

Geet:"dadima...muhje pata hai...Maan mujhse milne ayenge hain aajj...per aap unse milne mana kyun ker rahee hain...unhone khat likhker mujhse kitne acche se mafi mangee hai..."

Dadima:"achcha ek khat se mafee mang lee aur aap khush hain...aur koi tohfa bhi diya hoga aap ko behlane ke liye...kyun"

Geet:"nahi dadima...tohfe ke kya jaroorat hai...unka khat hee bhoot hai...jo likha hai unhone..."

Dadima:"Ek tohfa tak nahi diya unhone...sirf ek khat se mana liya...nahi Geet aapp itnee jaldi bilkul maaf nahi karengee Maan ko...jo pareshan unhone aapko kiya hai uske saaza milne chahiye unhe...aur yeh kya...sharam nahi aayee unhe...itnee badee galtee ke liye bass aise mafi maang lee...aappne aajj Maan ko itnee jaldi Maaf ker diya to Maan jindagee bhar pareshan karenge aapko...samjhee aap..."

Geet:"per Dadima..."

dadima:"Geet...Maan is a very shrewd bussiness man hain...unhe apne samne waloon ke kamzooree acche se pata hotee hai aur woh usee ka istemal kerte hain...yeh unkee khoobee hai...app bhole bhali hain...Maan ko pata hai...woh ek chalak loomree hain...aur aapp ek shidhi shadhi shikaar...isliye itna pareshan kerte hain woh aapko...lekin abb nahi...unhe unkee galtee ke saaza dijiye...unse sharteen manwaiye...Maaf nahi karengee aajj aap unhe..."

Dadima:"aapp khud sochiye...ek khat ke alwa Maan ne aisa kya ker diya jo aapp unhe itnee jaldi Maaf kerdengee...jo takleef uthaiyee hai aapne unke karwe behaviour se...unhe apne aapp ko shabit kerne dijiye...sirf mithi boli se kaam chalana chate hain...nahi ker ke dikhane boliye...bass abb age aapp samjhdar hain..."

call cut...Geet is now confused...

Geet(ST):"yeh abhi main kitnee khush thee aur yeh Dadima ne to mujhe confuse ker diya...per dadima galat bhi tou nahi keh raheen hain...kahin Maan ne mujhe bachee ke taraf phusla to nahi diya...nahi nahi nahi...unhone likha to hai...meri saree saza sir ankhoon pe...Maan ne aisa likha mujhe biswas he nahi ho raha hai...

nahi Geet...dadi ma theek kehtee hain...yeh Maan ko pata hai...unke do mithe bool ke liye main diwanee hoon...aur nahi to kya...koi achcha sa tohfa hee late mere liye...lekin nahi...baas ek khat likh diya..."

Geet thinks for a while

Geet(ST):"khat me unhone itnee vadee vadee baat ke hai...dekhon tou kuch kerte bhi hain ya nahi mere liye...aaj main unse miloongee nahi...babaji...pls help me to ignore Maan today...yeh main kaise ker paoongee..."

Geet decides not to go out of her room ...she asks for her breakfast in her room only...

She is sometimes Making plan for Maan and sometimes starts reading his letter...

Geet(ST):"yeh letter hata tu Geet...yeh tujhe kamzoor ker dega..."

Geet(calls her mom):"Mom...Maan ayenge niche to bol dijiyega main unse milna nahi chatee"

Mrs H:"aabb to ladai bada kyun rahee hai..."

Geet:"koi bada nahi rahee...aapp bass unse bol dijiyega"

Then Maan arrives and looks for Geet...and mrs Handa says that Geet is still upset with him and don't want to meet him

Maan(ST):"Geet abhi bhi upset hai...how is that possible...uss khat ke baad Geet mujhse milna na chahe aisa ho nahi sakta...Geet ko itna to janta hoon main...yeh kisi aur ka dimag hai...Geet...main mann he nahi sakta...kaun ho sakta hai..."

He thinks for a while...

Maan(ST):"yeh baat aur kise pata hai...mere, Geet aur Dadima ke alawa...ek mint ek mint...to yeh Dadima ka dima hai..."

Then he remembers how dadima had talked to him in the morning... "Maan hame pata hai aapp kaha ja rahe hain...I hope aapkee koshish kamyab hoo..."

Maan(ST):hnnn tou Dadima...Geet ko tou aaj main kisis bhi haal me mana ker hee rahoonga..."

Maan:"aunty Geet mujhse naraz hai...abbmujhe use manana parega...main jaoon..."

Mrs H:"Maan singh khurana...kisi ko manayega...chaloo yeh to hum bhi dekhenge...jaiye jaiye uper jaiye" she laughs

he goes upsatirs towards Geet room

Maan:"Geet...main Maan...derwaza kholo...mujhe tumse kuch baat kernee hai"

Geet:"Mom ne aapko bataya nahi...main apse milna nahi chatee...jaiye yahan se app"

Geet(ST):"Babaji...inhe jaldi yahan se bhej dijiye nahi to apne aapp ko rrok nahi paaoongee..."

Maan:"Geet...mujhe pata hai tum mujhse naraz nahi ho...aabb bachpana chodo aur darwaza kholo..."

Geet:"kyun aapp koi bhagwan hain...jo aapse aapka koi bhakt naraz nahi ho sakta...jaiye yaha se abb mujhe aapse nahi milna..."

Maan:"Geet main jane wala nahi...mujhe aapnee galtee ka ehsas hai...tum derwaza to kholo...main tumse baat kiye begair jaoonga nahi"

Geet(ST):"abb yeh jayenge nahi to main hee kahin bahar chale jatee hoon...itne pass rahenge yeh to main bilkul khud ko rook nahi paoongee"

Geet gets dressed up and opens to door to get out...Maan thinks Geet has opened the door for him...Geet asks him move aside...

Geet:"Can you give me the way...I need to go out...i am feeling suffocated here"

she runs downstairs and Maan suddenly shouts

Maan:"Nandu...Darwaza Band karo...aur Main gate bhi band kerwaoo...Geet ke tabyat theek nahi hai...woh bahar nahi jani chahiye"

Geet is shocked by this...

Geet:"Nandu...mei tabyat bilkul theek hai...tum derwaza kholo..."

Nando goes and closes the door

Nando:"per Maan sab band kerne ko keh rahe hain..."

Geet:"yeh ghar kiska hai"

Nando:"ji Daarji ka..."

Geet:"aur main unkee potee hoon...isliye main jo boltee hoon woh karoo...darwaza kholo"

Maan shows his scary eyes to Nandu and Nandu didn't open the door...

Geet:"sabko apne iss darawnii ankhoo se darate rehte hai...Nandu i will see you...(turns to Maan) you want to talk to me...right then sit down"


Maan sits down and when he settles down happily that they are gonna talk Geet runs upsairs and closes her room's door...Maan is surprised to see this...

Maan(ST):"achcha...abb to tum bachee aajj Geet..." he gives some signal to Mrs H...who

is smilling at their fight and she is enjoying Maan's new avatar...

Its very quite for 1 hr and Geet thinks that it has been a while and no sound from so

long...she is sure that Maan has atlast Gone...then she decides to come out...The moment she opens the door and come out, Maan grabs her with one hand...places his

other hand on her mouth and pull her to her room with him and closes the door...

Before Geet could realize what he is doing...he places her on the wall, puts both her

hand up on the wall and pins them with his own hand...he does it all so fast that it takes awhile to understand what he is doing

Maan:"aabb bolo kahan jaoogee...hmmm"

Geet:"Yeh theek nahii kiya aapne...this is not fair at all"

Maan:"you don't understand the fair way...so...sorry baby..." he blinks his one eye which teases her more

First of all Maan's this much closeness and his talks and acts...Geet is finding hard to resist him...but she is not ready to give up...

Geet:"choriye mujhe...i don't want to talk to you..."

Maan:"Geet you want to talk to me...I know...it's betwn you and me...just listen to your heart"

Maan is making Geet weak...it's getting tough for her...he doesn't move away..instead comes close to her...he is smilling...and he knows he is making Geet weak...Geet is getting weak on her knees with Maan's such closeness... his lips smilling...his eyes starring at her face...reading all her...she could not bear... she closes her eyes to hide her weakness...But Maan understands what he needs to understand...

Maan(softly):"chordon tumhe...kya Geet...bolo dur chala jaoon"

Geet who is getting a bumps and tinkling feeling in her belly...in her heart and everywhere... says nothing...just turns her face...


Next to be continued:

precap:

Maan:"tou main tumhe bharosa kaise dilwaoon...kya karoon jisse tum kahogee kee tumhe meri baatoon pe bharoosa hai...jo bhi tum kaho Geet"

Geet:"Bharosa aappko dilana hain...tareeka bhi aap hee dhondiye...mujhse bulwa dijiye ke mujhe aapp per bharosa hai"

 
 
 
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Thx,
Anu


Edited by tellyme - 30 June 2011 at 7:17am

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awesome part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
very nice Anu...amazing update...Maan will surely manaofy Geet...koi shaq...love this Dadi...buddhu Geet...Vicky ki jagah pehle hi Daadi se keh deti to ab tak engagement ho jaati uski

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