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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 44)

preethia IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
wow that was a long update...
finally geet won geet won so happy that she cud change maan's mood and made him promise that he wont ignore her...
loved the way maan took care of her and the way he started to feel for her...man he is falling for our geet...
so wats geet upto with this romantic song in the camp...
finally maan giving into his heart...
pl cont soon

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tellyme

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
wonderful update...
Thnx for pm

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
awesome,mindblowing...continue...
i like these lines amazing...
Clap
she feels Maan's arm on her leg...her hands on his neck...her face near hir chest...she can feel his sweat...smell his body...she is
all lost...doesn't know what world she is in...shiver is going thru all her body...
 
Maan is trying hard to concentrate on his path but all in vain...
his heart has completely overpowered his mind...
 
the sensation that he is feeling by Geet's closeness...
of how she is completely dependent on him...in his arm...so close to him...he can smell her perfume...her curves touching his chest...
 
he suddenly looks at Geet and Geet is continously looking at his face...trying to understand his emotion...is he going thru same as her????..Smile.
 
Maan and Geet's eyes meet and Maan stops and Keep looking at Geet's eyes for few second...
 maan:"Geet...agar mujhe aisee chot lagtee to kya tumhe apnee takleef ka kyaal rehta"Smile

eet:"woh maine socha...aise pare pare time nahi waste kerna chahiye...to socha kuch finding ker loon...pata ker rahee thi ke iske andar sachmuch dil hai ya patthar...I was just trying to clear my doubts..."Big smile
 
Maan:"pata ker liya na...aur abb agar tumne ek bhi aise harkat kee to main abhi kiya hua apna sara promise bhul jaoonga...samjhee tum...hum late ho rahe hain...kuch samajh aata hai  tumhe"Smile
 

 


Edited by Madhusk - 11 June 2011 at 3:28am

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
why did you keep us in cliff hanger
do con't soon

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tellyme

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
LOVED IT...ITS AWSUM...MAAN IS JUST FALLING FOR GEET...AMAZINGGG...

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Sorry for late commenting
Awesome updates
loved it
cont soon

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tellyme

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
please update soon...

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tellyme

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhusk

awesome,mindblowing...continue...
i like these lines amazing...
Clap
she feels Maan's arm on her leg...her hands on his neck...her face near hir chest...she can feel his sweat...smell his body...she is
all lost...doesn't know what world she is in...shiver is going thru all her body...
 
Maan is trying hard to concentrate on his path but all in vain...
his heart has completely overpowered his mind...
 
the sensation that he is feeling by Geet's closeness...
of how she is completely dependent on him...in his arm...so close to him...he can smell her perfume...her curves touching his chest...
 
he suddenly looks at Geet and Geet is continously looking at his face...trying to understand his emotion...is he going thru same as her????..Smile.
 
Maan and Geet's eyes meet and Maan stops and Keep looking at Geet's eyes for few second...
 maan:"Geet...agar mujhe aisee chot lagtee to kya tumhe apnee takleef ka kyaal rehta"Smile

eet:"woh maine socha...aise pare pare time nahi waste kerna chahiye...to socha kuch finding ker loon...pata ker rahee thi ke iske andar sachmuch dil hai ya patthar...I was just trying to clear my doubts..."Big smile
 
Maan:"pata ker liya na...aur abb agar tumne ek bhi aise harkat kee to main abhi kiya hua apna sara promise bhul jaoonga...samjhee tum...hum late ho rahe hain...kuch samajh aata hai  tumhe"Smile
 

 
Thank you so much for analysing it so nicely...line by line...

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