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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 25)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
omg omg...
Awesome yar...
Waiting for next...

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
awesome part yar...
Hope dono jaldi short-out ker le...

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by geet06

awesome part yar...
Hope dono jaldi short-out ker le...
 
Thanks dear...i hope so too
 
---Anu
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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged
nice part
 so Maaneet  feels each other
good going
waiting for the next
thanks for pm


Edited by abina03 - 02 June 2011 at 2:06am

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awsome yaar...i loved it 

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
geet has tarted falling for maan
n is unaware of her feelings

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Hi All of you...Thank you again for your support...Please keep reading...Click the Like button if you like it and do write comments for encouragement...That means a lot to me...
 
 
Here I am with next part
 
---Anu
 
Part 11
 
Next morning at 9:00 in KH Construction..
Maan completly involed in his work..he is busy like hell and that is making all his staff running on their toes..Pinky busy with phone and files for Maan's all scheduled meeting for the day...Shasha Adi getting ready for their meeting for Mr.Sharma's Gurgaon project...Tasha and Romeo preparing for the presentation for the next client...he is in
complete MSK mode...
 
he is aware he has meeting with Geet at 10:00 but that is not in his mind at this time at all...He is completely different Maan from the one he was previous night
 
Geet who is generally never on time...but today comes office sharp at 9:45 am to meet Maan...
 
Geet(ST):"thorda pehle hi ana accha hai..you never know him...thorda der hogayee to bolenge...abb main busy hoon...per mujhe to aaj Maan se baat kernee hee hai..."
 
10:00 am...Maan still in his meeting...the discussion in the meeting is going on and as it's very important Maan cannot leave it...he sees his watch...it was 10:00 and he have given time to Geet(see he never forgets appointment with anyone....)..he takes excuse and call
Geet..
 
Maan:"Geet..tum aa gayee ho kya office me..."
 
Geet:"haan...main 15mints se aapke he cabin me hoon..."
 
Maan:"Geet..meeting is in very critical condition...we are discussing some serious issue here...can you wait..yaa phir shaam me aakar miloon main tumhe..."
 
Geet(ST):"nahi..main tou milker he jaoongee..."
 
Geet:"Ok..main wait karoonge..."
 
Geet is waiting and waiting...but Maan is not getting free...she tries to talk to Pinky but pinky is too busy too...geet thinks that she has taken a very wise decision of not working in this office...
everyone is crazy here
 
at 11:40 Maan comes to his cabin...sees Geet waiting for him.. he has next meeting at 12:00
 
Maan:"Geet tum abhi tak yaha wait ker rahee hoo...maine kaha tha na sham ko milta hoon tumhe.."
 
Geet:"Nahi mujhe abhi aapse baat kernee hai..."
 
Maan:"accha...tou jaldi jaldi baat ker lete hain...mere pass 15 mints to hai.."
 
geet(st):"1hr 30 mints wait kerwa ke 15 mint de rahen hain mujhe..."
 
geet:"yeh kya baat hai...15 mint me kya baat kerenge..."
 
Maan thinks and then picks the phone...
 
Maan:"pnky 12:00..jo meeting hai usme Tasha aur romeo ko start kerne ka info de do..main 15mints late aoonga..."
 
cuts the phone...
 
Maan:"abb theek hai??..adha ghanta..." he signals her to sit down
 
geet:"haan..accha tou main yeh bool rahi thee..."
she is thinking how to start...then Maan speaks up
 
maan:"geet...mujhse galti hui hai bhoot badi...maine tumhara insult kiya...dayere se bahar jaa raha tha main..."
 
geet gets irritated by his guilty feeling
 
geet:"abb baas bhi kijiye Maan...pls..."
 
she changes herself in teasing mood...she really wants him to feel normal..
 
geet:"aur waise bhi...meri jaisee khoobsurat ladki agar kisi ke itne kareeb..."
 
she stops in btwn ...feels a little hesitant that she is going too far
 
maan:"nahi bolo bolo...aur bolo...ruk kyun gayee...kabhi dimag se soch ker bhi boltee ho tum"
 
geet(she gets defensive):"woh...kya galat kaha maine..kya main khubsoorat nahi hoon...kahir chordiye..."
 

geet:"waise kal yeh to proove ho gaya...hum dono normal beings hain..."(OMG...what is she trying to tell )

maan:"kya???????proove ho gaya hum dono normal hain...abb yeh kya bakwaas hai..."
 
geet:"aur nahi to kya...aap jitne abnormal dikte hai...utne bhi nahi hain...aapke iss robotic body mein kahin to dill hai Maan..aap manege nahi...
 
aur main...itne sare BF mere...kisi ke saath kuch feel hee nahi huaa kabhi...mujhe lagta tha kee mujhme koi problem hai...per kaal mujhe pata chal gaya kee main normal hee hoon...tou prove ho gaya naa...
 
aur haan...main kitnee khush hoon ke mujhme yeh ehsash hai...aur aap sorry sorry keh ker mera sara mood kharab ker rahe hain..."
 
maan:"geet...mujhe lagta hai naa ke mujhme koi problem hai..."
 
geet(very eager):"kya maan..."
 
Maan:"yehi ke mera dimag kharab hai...main apni impt meeting ko chore ker tumse yeh bakwas sun raha hoon..."
 
she ignores his seriousness
 
Geet:"waise mare pass aapke liye bhi ek compliment hai ...agar main ek khubsoorat pari hoon naa...to aap bhi kaphi handsome hain...aise thorde na aapke office ke ladkiya aapko DD-dhak dhak boltee hain...aur tabhi tou main ...woh..."
 
she again stops in btwn
 
Maan now loosing his patience...he can't belive he is listening to Geet's bakwaas for so long time while impt meeting is going on the other side...
 
Maan:"geet bhoot ho gaya...abb tum jaoo..mujhe meeting me jana hai...tumhare baatoon ka na start point hai..na end point..."
 
then only he receives a phone call...
 
pinky:"sir aapke liye advocate garg ka phone hai..."
 
maan:"abhi??...accha connect karo..."
 
Maan(on phone):"hello...Mr. garg...kaise hain aap..kya baat hai..."
 
maan(still on phone):"kya dimag kahrab hai uska...ek baar me samjh nahi aaya use kee mujhse ulajhne ka kaisa anjam hota hai..."
 
Geet(st):"abb kiski shamat aayee...sabke dimag mein inhe problem kyun dikhta hai.."
 
Maan(still on phone):"main kisis se nahi milna chata...accha theek hai...6:00 pm app aur main milte hai..." he cuts the phone...
 
Maan:"tum gayee nahi abb tak...pata nahi saree musibat mere sar hee kyun parti hai..."
 
Geet:"pehle aap boliye..app normal feel ker rahen hain"
 
maan(clinching his teeth):"geeet...i am feeling more than normal...now only if you can excuse me..."
 
he takes his stuff and goes to the meeting...
 
geet(st):"chalo mera kaam to ho gaya...abb viccky se mil leti hoon...kaal bechare ka party spoil ker diya maine..."
 
On the other side in KM..vicky in dadima's room
 
Viccky:"dadima..kaisee hain aap...main apse kuch baat kerna chata hoon..woh...geet aur bro ke baare mein..."
 
dadima:"bete in dono ke kal kee ladai...aajkal aur bhi badh gayee hai...per aap pareshan nahi hoo..yeh aap he suljha lenge..."
 
viccky:"nahi dadima...woh baat nahi hai...mujhe kaal kuch aur he laga...matlab...bro ekdum se chale gaye...geet roo rahi thi...aur phir usne saree galtee apne upar le lii...kuch tou aur baat hai...kya pata nahi..."
 
dadima:"bete hum aapkee baat acche se samajh rahe hain...per beta...inkee iss ladai ko aise he bachpane me rehne dena accha hai...Maan apni jindagee me sab kuch se muh moore chuke
hai...buree tarah chot khayee hue hain woh...unme ehsaas jagana namumkin hai...
 
aur geet bhi...unke liye koi bhi ehsas se door hee rahe to accha ahi uske liye..."
 
Viccky:"per dadima...Bro jiss tarah se apne life ke saath ker rahen hain...kya woh theek hai...kya kisi aur kee galtee ke liye Bro ko apnee jindagee jina chor dena chahiye...apne jajbatoon ko marr dena chahiye..."
 
Dadima:"bete...yeh to hum saab bhi maante hain...per Maan ne abb apne dil ka darwaza puri tarah se band ker liya hai..."
 
Viccky:"dadima...applog unhe unkee manmani kerne den...per main apne bhai ko aise nahi dekh sakta..."
 
Dadima:"per geet ko issme naa hee dale...woh bhoot masoom hai..."
 
Viccky:"main kyun apne bhai ke liye geet ko use karoonga dadima...lekin agar woh iske liye meri madad mangegee to main uska saath doonga..."
 
dadima:"main tou yehi kahoongee maat pariye isme...per app sab abb bade ho gaye hain...kijiye...ek Maan hain... jo kisi kee nahi sunte...abb aap bhi..."
 
viccky:"Dadima...ek baat puchoon...agar bro ko isme se nikalne ke liye mujhe aapkee madad ke jaroorat pari to kya aap meri help karengee"
 
dadima:"sach to yeh hai beta...maan ko main aise nahi dekh saktee...tou madad to karoongee aapka...per sab itna asan nahi hoga...yeh samajh lijiye aap..."
 
Geet comes to KM and is shouting for Viccky
 
Geet:"nakul...viccky kahan hai...uske kamre me nahi hai..."
 
Nakul:"jee woh to dadima ke kamre me hain..."
 
Geet sees viccky coming...they wave at each other...they settle down on sofa
 
Geet:"viccky sorry yaar...kal maine jo behave kiya aur tumharee welcome party bhi spoil kerdi...I am sorry..."
 
Viccky:"it's ok...per mujhe saach saach bataoo kal aisa kya hua..."(imagine he want to know what Maaneet did behind the door)
 
Geet:"wohi jo maine bola...sorry nahi bola maine aur woh naraz ho gaye...per main Maan se milne gayee thi aaj...unhone mujhe maaf ker diya"
viccky:"nahi...geet...I saw somthg different in your eyes when Bro was leaving...it was very diffrent than what you normally are..."
 
geet distarcts him...they both go to his room and they have long chat...mostly about London...
 
It's evening 7:00pm...Geet and Viccky come out...they are going to hall...while on their way they cross Maan's room...they see Maan sitting on his bed..his mother standing beside him..he is holding his mom by her waist...he is very depressed...she is stroking his hair...Viccky and Geet are both shocked to see this... they sneak and come close...they hear
 
Maan:"Mom...abb main kya karoon...abb phir se yeh sab...Mr garg se mil ker aa raha hoon"
 
He leaves his Mom and turn his head back so as to see the ceiling...he looks completetely brocken...small tears at the corner of his eyes...
 
Geet have never seen Maan in this state...for her he is a strong pillar for his family and somewhere for her too...she is completely shocked...seeing Maan in this state...she feels her heart is breaking...tears start coming thru her eyes...she steps ahead to reach Maan...but viccky stops her...Maan is restless...
 
Maan:"Mom I need your strenght for this..." he is talking like a hurt kid to his Mom...
 
Geet can see no more...she can't bear to see Maan in this state...she is not even reasoning as to why she is feeling so...it's too much for her and she leaves from there...Viccky on the other hand is very worried about his brother...but he also notices Geets state...

-----next to be continued   Part 12 link
 


Edited by tellyme - 04 June 2011 at 11:14pm

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