FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37) - Page 28

awww hun u ending ur ff...wel i hpe wen u gt time u start a new 1... gd 2 c the truth out n tasha starting life with a fresh note

ohhh choti...great part...but its the end :(

well u did end it well...i loved how she ran after him and they had such a cute moment there and of course without baaji ...can that ever be? ...KMH aagaya lol...so you end saying they start their life ...well done choti...great job...loved it

great part but end i am going to miss you

nice part...thank god rani ma got to know the truth about her darling daughter...u have ended this ff abruptly but its ok, i understand...family comes first...

great one rubal but i m going to miss this ff. sad it ended no problem u gave it a good ending but it was having more possibilities.thanks for pm and  update i m really going to miss it. 😊😭

Originally posted by: krishaa

great one rubal but i m going to miss this ff. sad it ended no problem u gave it a good ending but it was having more possibilities.thanks for pm and  update i m really going to miss it. 😊😭

i know krishaa,,this FF was going to have 20 chapters but my grandpaa here so i have to end it like this

hey rubal

beautiful ending 😊
🤗
i know that you have to end it because your grandpa is their now but still love the way you end nakku running after dutta to stop him and then dutta teasing  her lovely dear😳

sonali and suds plan fail great

love it😃

gonna miss my daily doze of ek update ke saath ek raaz free😆

thanks for pm🤗

Wow happy ending👏 Good Sonali is exposed. Naku decided to go with Datta & they lived happily lived everafter😊 Good FF, Thanks for this story.😊

thanks for reading this FF to all🤗

omg i cant beliv u finishd it!!! :O