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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter14

Raj mahal

At the dinnig table.

Everyone gathereed there,at the dinnig table ,took their seats.Sonali asking Nakku aboutr her in-laws.Sethji getting irritated with Sonali's chat ,asked her to stop.

Sonali making stupid face says"sethji tujhe mauka mil gaya na nakku se baat karne ko ab meri baari hai,tu mujhe mat rok

Rani maa:sonali,khaane ke samme baatein nahi karte,sethji sahi bol raha hai

Sonali makes an unnhappy face and orders nakku that they will talk later

Nakku asks sonali about sudarshan's whereabout?

Sonali smiles and answers that he has gone out for some work.

Patil Niwas

SRP reading some news in very concentration and says " aajkal kitna buura zamana hai"

Aayi sahib hands tea cup to SRP" kyun kya hua?"

after takinng a small sip,says "mumbai mein drugs aur duplicate chemical bechne waali factory par raid pari thi.angeenat logon ki jaan gayi is ek company ki wajah se"

suddenly dutta enters and shouts " maa .aap chahti hai kya"

Aayi sahib gets up from the sofa and asks " kya hua dutta,kyun chila rahe ho?"

Dutta:chilaun na to kya karoon , kal raat sahil aapke kamre mein tha"

SRP: dutta wo hamar naati hai ,aur hame poora haq use pyaar karne ka,tum hame nahi rok sakte

Aayi sahib going near to Dutta" tujhe yeh kisne bataya, madhu ne?wo ladki tere dil mein hamare liye zeher ghol rahi hai aur tu uski baat maan kar humse jhagda kar raha hai,,kya ho gaya hai hamare parivaar ko dutta "

Dutta replies back" aap kabhi samajh hi nahi payi,,nahi apne parivaar ko nahi madhu ko,,,mujhe nadhu ne nahi bataya,,sahil ne bataya,,,aap use gifts de kar apni aur khich rahe hai ,,,par main aisa nahi hone doon ga

Dutta going outside from the room but stops and says" aur aap meri patni ke baare main kya bol rahe the daayi ma se??"

Aayi sahib:maine kuch boora nahi bola dutta,,,wo hamari bahu hai aur abhi tak aashirwaad lene nahi aayi"

Dutta:wo meri patni hai aur waisa hi karegi jaisa main chahoon ga,,,,,,agar mera aapse koi rishta nahi hai toh uska bhi aapse koi rishat nahi hai" with saying this dutta went out from the room.

Raj Mahal

Sonali and nakku sitting in nakku's room.

Sonali starts with nervousness on her face"nakku wo main tujhe kuch important batana chahti thi"

Nakku listening ,wants to ask sonali about that whole marriage fiasco but didn't say anything, sonali continues " nakku mujhe nahi pata maine sahi kiya ya galat,par tera yeh jan na zaroori hai"

"kya jaan na zaroori hai dil" asked nakku curiously

Getting up from the bed sonali says:main tujhe kaise bataon mujhse kitni badi galti ho chuki hai

Nakku confused ,if sonali is going to tell her the truth,walks to sonali "dii kahin aap is shaadi ke baare mein toh nahi bol rahi"

Sonali puts her hand on nakku's right shoulder " haan nakku , main tujhse isi baare mein baat karna chahti hoon"

Nakku listening carefully to sonali , doesn't tells that she already knows this from her Husband " nakku ,,,wo main actually sab pehle se jaanti thi,,,,,wo main sudarshan ko pyaar karti thi,mujhme itni himmat nahi thi ke main Rani maa ko jaakar sach bolun isliye yeh sabb,,,,,,,,,huya...mera koi iraada nahi tha tujhe dukh dene ka par yeh sab ,,,,,,wo shaddi se ek raat pehle dutta aur sudarshan dono yaha aaye the,,,mahal mein,,,,,,us waqt maine dutta ka chehra nahi dekha tha ,kaafi andhera tha,,,,,,usne sudarshan ko 2 crore diye the ,,,,,,,,mujhe sach mein nahi pata tha ,ki ghar waale tumhari shaadi dutta se karwa denge,,,,i m raelly sorry nakku ,mujhe maaf kardo,,please nakku "

Nakku looking at Sonali "apko dii...aapko pehle maa ko sab batana chahiye tha"

"nakku main jaant hoon jo maine kiya wo galat tha par mere paas aur koi raasta nahi tha ,,,tumhe kya lagta hai agar main rani maa ke paas jati aur unhe sach bolti ,,to wo kya sudarshan aur meri shaadi ke raazi ho jaati ...nahi nakku wo kabhi raazi nahi hoti ,,,tab maine wohi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aur mujhe kya pata tha teri shaadi dutta se ho jayegi...par nakku log sach bolte hai jhoot bolne ki saza ek na ek din milti hi hai,,dekh na nakku 2 crore mile hame yeh sab karne ke ,,par ab hum khaali haath hai

Nakku moves near to window and remember Dutta's word,in thoughts" wo sahi bol rahe the ,par mujhe kyun itna waqt laga unki baat maan ne ko meravishwaas itna kamzor kyun hai" nakku come to reality when sonali says" tu meri madad karegi na nakku"

" ji" nakku not understanding Sonali what sonali meant.

" haan nakku ab tu hi meri madad kar sakti hai ,,,ghar walon ko main bata nahi sakti,,,dutta ne hame jo paise diye the wo sudarshan ne apne pita ki factory mein laga diya,,,,,,nakku wo factory band ho chuki hai,,,,,,,,,,,,pata nahi kya huya ,,,,,,,,,,factory mein kal aag lag gayi thi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sudarshan ke paas ab kuch bhi nahi hai,main itne dino se yahan par hoon,,,,, maa bhi yehi soch rahi hongi ke apne sasural kab jaungi,,,,,par main kya karoon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sudarshan din raat bhaag dod kar rahe hai ta ke hame koi saste mein rehne ki jagah mil jaye,,,,,,,,,,,ab toh hamare paas ek phooti kodi bhi nahi bacchi ,,,,,,,maine sudarshan ko bola tha ke main papa se baat karti hoon par nahi unhone mana kar diya,,,kyunki agar main papa ko batati hoon to unhe sach bhi batana padega,,,,,,,,,,,,,tu meri madad karegi na nakku?"

" kaisi madad dii ,,apko ,,,,,,mujhe samajh nahi aa raha"

Sonali:nakku agar tu kuch paiso ki madad kar sakti hai to accha hoga,,,,,,,,,,,dekh main jaanti hoon yeh sab kitna mushkil hai,,,,,,,,,par meri is waqt tere ilawa koi aur madad nahi kar sakta"

dii kahin aap mujhse paison ki baat karna chahti hai,,says nakku slowly
Sonali: haan nakku tera pati ameer hai wo hamari madad kar sakta hai"
Nakku:dii main inse kuch nahi maang sakti ,,,ye sahi nahi ho ga
Sonali:nakku dutta tera pati uska jo bhi hai wo tera bhi hai,tu maangne ki zaroorat nahi hai
Nakku:aap kehna kya chahti hai
Sonali:nakku ,,,,tere paas itne gehne hai hum unme se kuch bech kar paise aa sakte hai
Nakku:nahi dii main aisa nahi sakti
to be continued...
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Posted: 12 years ago
are yaar is sonali ka kuch  karo😡 ye to tasha ke piche hi pad gayi😈 yaar ab ise story se out karo 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rrs1391

are yaar is sonali ka kuch  karo😡 ye to tasha ke piche hi pad gayi😈 yaar ab ise story se out karo 🤢

she will be out in next 3-4 chapters
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very nice updt... good to read that sonali will be out soon... but hate her to core to even bear hher fr 3-4 parts... plzzz try to get rid of her sooon... nakku is so naive... Dutta is stern in his stand... luving the flow of ur story... updt sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear

but now me only want tasha moments
yeh kya kabhi sonali aa jati hai kabhi AS and SRP aa jata hai
sonali toh ja rahi hai saath mein sab ko bhej do

next part should have tasha moments its warning
😈

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Posted: 12 years ago

good one now u have made a stage for tasha romance to start and hope it will begin soon,please make sonali,suds,srp and aayi ,move out of picture soon and let tasha spend some private moments with eachother and hope nakku ab koi bewakoofi na kare sonali ki baaton mein aa kar,oh read that we have to read about this sonali for 3-4 updates more impossible please try to make it soon.thanks for pm.please update soon as it is impossible to wait for tasha romance.update soon or regularly if possible.😊

Edited by krishaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Good update👏 Naku will not give  Sonali her jewellery, she won't lie to Datta😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
yuck man her sister is so ghiri hui!!! hate her..she is so selfish!! no wonder pehle woh itni achi ban rahi thi [post marriage]
 
 
i rely hope naku either tells dutta about this or dsnt help sona...definatly not behind duttas bak!! i rely dnt want any kind of DHOKA b/n tasha lol
 
 
thnx 4 pm
 
 
pls cont soon.x
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Posted: 12 years ago
good update choti...

I hate this Sonali...get rid of her asap lol

ab start the romance ...and no i am not telling my choti to do anything bad just cute ...moments...lol

update next soon :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear Choti🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm🤗awesome ...
Arrgh i so hate sonali 😡she needs to leave ASAP ...i can"t stand her ...pls make her disappear ...
Pls start the tasha romance ...me waiting ...Lovely sweet moments 😉,,,,
Thanx choti ...u take care and see ya around
Love and hugs
suhana🤗