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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rrs1391

when will you update rubal tell me please

this weekend sat or sun day
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi girls there is nothing much in this chapter agar skip karna chaho to kar sakte ho

chapter12
 

Patil niwas

 
Nakku:madhu madhu darwaza kholo
 

Madhu:ji bhabhi,aapne bulaya

 
Nakku:tum theek toh ho na
 

Madhu:ji bhabhi main theek hoon mujhe kya huya hai

 
Nakku:tume dukh ho raha hai
 

Madhu:aise baatein sun kar khush kaun ho sakta

 
Nakku:tum,,,,,,,,,,,,wo sahil ,,,,,,,,meri madad karogi mujhe nahi pata sahil kya khata hai,,,,,,,,,,wo bhuka hoga
 

Madhu:are haan,,,, main is sab mein bhool hi gayi sahil ke baare mein

 
Nakku:to chalo kitchen mein chalte hai
 

Madhu:ji chaliye

 
Madhu and nakku in the kicthen.
 

Nakku:(making chapatis )madhu,tumhare saath itna kuch ho gaya,tumhare bhaiya gussa karte hai,,,,,,,,,,par tumhe kabhi gussa mein nahi dekha,tumhe doosron se koi shakayat nahi ki.tumhari jagah koi aur hota to shayad apni kismat ko kosta,tum yeh sab kaise sahti ho ,main hoti kab ka chod ke chali gayi hoti

 
Madhu:bhabhi aisa nahi ke mujhe koi farak nahi padta,main bhi insaan hoon ,mujhe bhi dard hota hai,aap bhi hai,aur yahan hi,,,,,,,,main akele apne baare mein sochungi tu sawarthi kehlaungi.Aap bhi to yahan sab dekh rahi hai
 

Nakku:madhu mujhe maaf kardo maine apna sara gussa tumpe nikala

 
Madhu:aapne bhaiya se baat ki,ab sab kuch theek hai na
 

Nakku:haan,sab theek hai.madhu,,,,,,,,,,wo tumhare bhaiya bol rahe the ke kal tum shopping ke liye chale jana,agar mujhe waqt mila to main bhi chalungi

 
Madhu:accha bahana hai ,mujhe yahan se bhejne ka
 

Nakku:ye tumhe yahan se bhejna nahi chahte,ye bas chahte hai ke tum khush raho,ye khud bahot pareshan hai aur ye bas chahte hia ke tum unki maa ke samne na aao kyunkki ye nahi chahte tumhe phir kuch sunna pade

 
Madhu:bhabhi,,,,,,,aaj tak main sunti hi aayi hoon ,,,,,,,mujhe to ab adat ho chuki hai,par mujhe pata hai agar is duniye main mujhe koi samajhta hia to wo sirf bhaiya hain,main bhaiya ko kabhi bhi galat nahi samajh sakti ,main jaanti hoon bhaiya meri khushi ke liye ye shopping plan bana rahe hai
 

Nakku:tum bilkul inke jaisi ho,baatein bhi inke jaisi karti ho sirf ek farak hai

 
Madhu:kya
 

Nakku:tumhare bhaiya ko gussa bahut aata hai

 
Madhu:aisa nahi hai bhaiya gussa sirf galat baat par karte hai
 

Nakku:khana ban gaya,ab ,,,,,kis kis ko dena hai

 
Madhu:mujhe nahi lagta papa ya aayi sahib khayen gi wo toh dinner kar ke aayen honge.Main sahil ko khana deti hoon,bhaiya aur daayi maa ne toh hospital mein hi kha liya tha aur baaji bhi apne doston ke saath gaya tha ,khana kha kar hi aaya hoga
 

Nakku:theek hai,,,,,,suno madhu main bhi saath chaloon

 
Madhu:ji chaliye
 

They both goes to Sahil's room.

 
Madhu:sahil toh yahan nahi hai
 

Nakku:idhar hi hoga main baaji ke kamre mein dekh ke aati hoon

 
Daayi maa(comes)nakku koi zaroorat nahi jane gi wo sahil malkin ke kamre mein hai
 

Madhu:daayi maa bhaiya ne sahil ko unse door rakhne ke liye bola tha

 
Nakku:agar inko pata chale ga to ye bahut gussa honge
 

Daayi maa:main jaanti hoon nakku,par malkin sahil ke saath kuch samay bitana chahti thi,isiliye maine unhe nahi roka,mujhe laga main theek kar rahi hoon

 
Madhu:aapne bilkul theek kiya hai daayi maa ,bhabhi aap lpese bhaiya ko mat batana
 

Nakku:par agar inhe kisi aur se pata chal gaya to

 
Daayi maa:kaun bataye gaya hamare ilawa jaanta hi kaun hai ,tum dono ab so jao kaafi raat ho chuki hai
 

Madhu:ji,,bhabhi chaliye

 
Nakku and madhu going upstairs.
 

Nakku:madhu mujhe neend nahi aa rahi

 
Madhu:mujhe bhi nahi aa rahi,,,,,,ek kaam kare bahar terrace pe chalte hai,,,jhule pe baith kar baat karte hai
 

Nakku:hm,chalo

 
They both went to terrace.Baaji was already there.
 

Madhu:arey ,baaji tum yahan kya kar rahe ho

 
Baaji:aap dono yahan kya kar rahen hai,main to yunhi kuch soch raha tha
 

Nakku:baaji bhaiya,,itni raat ko kya soch rahen the

 
Baaji:arey nahi vahini ,,,,,,,ap dono baitho phir batata hoon,,,,,woh main bhau ke baare main soch raha tha
 

Madhu:baaji kal ham bahar ghumne chale

 
Baaji:chalenge ,kahan jana hai tujhe
 

Madhu:kahin bhi,jahan shaanti mile

 
Dutta(coming toward them):kyun,yahan shaanti nahi mil rahi tujhe
 

Madhu:arey bhaiya aap kab aaye

 
Dutta:abhi sahil ke room mein jaa raha tum logon ki awaaz suni to yahan aa gaya,Sahil kahan hai
 

Madhu:bhaiya wo so gaya,subah dekh lena

 
Dutta:tum log kya batein kar rahe ho
 

Baaji:bhao agar tereko baat karni hai to bhi baith sakta hai,itni der tak seedha khada rahega to thak jayega,doctor ne rest karne ko bola hai

 
Dutta:(took place near to madhu)madhu kahan jana hai tujhe kal,,,,,,, shopping ke liye jao ,nakku kko bhi saath le jana
 

Baaji:haan madhu shopping ke liye chalte hai main bhi naye kapre kharide ga

 
Madhu:bhaiya ,,,,,,,wo ,,,,main ,,,main soch rahi london wapas chali jaun
 

Dutta:maine is baare mein socha hai aur main yehi chahta hoon ke tu yahan ruk,sarita aunty bhi yehi chahti hai

 
Baaji:mereko neend aa rahi hai ,mujhe lagta kaafi raat ho chuki hai,sabko so jana chahiye
 

Dutta:baaji tujhe neend a rahi hai to tu jaa sakta hai par mujhe abhi madhu se baat karni hai.Madhu main tumhe nahi jaane de sakta,tum maa aurSRP ki chinnta mat karo wo bas kuch hi dino mein wapas chale jayenge.

 
Madhu:bhaiya baaji sahi bol raha ,kaafi raat ho chuki hai subah uth kar baat karenge
 

Everyone when left the terrace.

 
Nakku and dutta in their room.The phone rings.
 

Dutta:ji,main bilkul theek hoon,...aap nakku se baat karengi...

 
Dutta:(giving the phone to nakku)nakku ye le baat kar
 

Nakku:kaun hai

 
Dutta:sonali
 

to be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey rubal,

Thanks for the pm . Nice simple update. Madhu, naku freindship is awesome . They got along with each other . Madhu is so sweet girl .

Terrace meeting nice .

Waiting for the next update .
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Posted: 12 years ago

argg i dont like AS.,..y did they take sahil der

 
 
dutta wil go mad if he finds out!!!
 
 
loved d lil tlk outside..
 
 
i hope dutta goes out wit them..wit naku... <3
 
 
eekk sonas phone...
 
 
i hope all is wel n she dsnt bcum a KMH b/n dem Xd
 
 
thnx 4 pm rubal
 
 
pls cont soon wit lots of tasha romance <3 x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice nice and nice !

you know building up realtions is what i enjoy most in updates !

its going cool !

im so liking it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update  waiting for next and when will you update please tell me
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part...why is sonali calling so late at night?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Dear Rubal🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm ...🤗 awesome yaara ...Wow madhu and naku"s getting along really well ...But what happen to our tasha ?😆when will there loves story will begin ...okk iam waiting ...thanx yaara ...pls jaldi update karna ...u take care and see ya around ,,,
love and hugs
suhana🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
mine...

am back after looonng time lol sorry,...totally forgot 😳

nice update choti...

like the budding friendship btwn Naku and Madhu

and the bond btwn Madhu-Dutta...

Baaji will be baaji 😆

and in the end eeek Sonali called hmmm...

i would tell u update soon but itz already there ...so me running to that update now 😛
Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update,👏 thanks😊