FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37) - Page 16

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chapter10

Dadi maa:bahu sab tohfe tyyar hai na ,damad ji kabhi bhi ate honge

 

 

Dadi maa:accha kiya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Aur sonali ke baare mein kya socha hai.Uske pati aur wo dono ghumne phirne main lage hai ,Sudarshan ko wapas ghar jana hai ya nahi

Rani maa:Pata nahi ,sudarshan ne apne mata pita ke baare ,mein bhi kuch nahi bataya.Thode din ruk jaate hain phir baat karenge,abhi char din hi to huye hai

Rani maa:theek hai main sonali ko bolungo ki sudarshan se baat kare.Main nakku aur madhu ko lekar niche aati hoon.

Madhu:bhabhi kal raat ko mausam kitna accha tha na

Madhu:aapke room ki balcony bahut acchi hai

Rani maa enters in the room.

Nakku:kuch nahi maa ,madhu ko ye kamra bohut accha laga aur isike ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai.

Rani maa:hame khushi hai ke aapko yahan pe accha laga

Nakku:chachi kya hua ,aap mujhe aise kyun pukaar rahi hai

Madhu:Kya,accident?

Nakku:wo ab kahan hai?

Chachi:haan,wo tum logon ka intezaar kar raha hai

Nakku:haan chalo

Madhu:baaji ,bhaiya kahan hai

Rani maa:ham bhi saath chalenge

Nakku:maa ,baali theek bol raha hai.Aap chinta mat kijiye main aapko phone karoongi

Baaji:ji ji

Baaji,madhu and nakku in the car.

Baaji:wo samne se truck waale ki galti thi,police use dhoond rahi hai

Baaji:vahini thodi hi der mein ham hospital mein honge

Baaji:pata nahi ro rahi thi upar se sahil ko sambhalna

nakku:madhu tum chinta mat karo ,sab pehle jaisa ho jaaye gaya

Madhu:(hugs daayi maa)daayi maa ,aap chinta mat kijiye ,bhaiya jaldi hi theek ho jayen ge

Nakku:Sahil kahan hai?

Baaji coming with Sahil.

Nakku:baaji hame lagta tumko daayi maa ko lekar ghar jana chahiye unki tabiyat bhi to theek nahi rehti

Daayii maa:nahi beta wo dutta...

Daayi maa :theek hai,main ghar chalti hoon par mujhe phone kar ke dutta ke baare mein batti rehna

Sahil:par mujhe papa se milna

Sahil:aap promise kar rahe ho

They went back to the Patil niwas.Nakku and Madhu sitting on the bench.

Madhu:haan ,bhabhi main theek hoon soch rahi thi papa ko abhi tak pata chal gaya hoga aur yeh bhi ke main sahil ko lekar yahan par hoon.Wo bahut gussa honge

Madhu:bhabhi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,apne dekha to tha ,bahar kitni saari media thi

Madhu:bhabhi,,,,,,agar papa yahan aa gaye toh

Madhu:haan bhabhi par fir bhi...

Madhu:bhabhi chaliye

Madhu:bhaiya ap theek ho na

Madhu:main to dar hi gayi thi

Madhu:wo ghar pe hai,bhabhi ne kahan ki daayi maa ko araam ki zaroorat hai,isiliye unhone ne hi daayi maa aur sahil ko baaji ke saath bheja hai,,,ghar.Bhaiya main doctor se pooch ke aati hoon,ke aapko discharge kab karen ge.

Dutta:nakku,,,,,,,,,,,,ruko.Mujhe tumse baat karni hai

Dutta:thank you,tumne daayi maa ke baare mein socha

Duttta:tumhare ghar mein sab kaise hai

Dutta:haan,,,,,,,,,wo madhu ne tumhe mere baare main sab bataya

Dutta:par kyun?

Dutta:wo toh main bhi jaanta hoon lekin,,tumhe sahil ke baare mein kyun jaan na tha?

Dutta:wow...tumhe pata nahi,,,,,,,,,,par mujhe pata hai

Dutta:yehi ki tumne socha ,maine tumhe dhoka diya aur sahil aur mera beta hai

Dutta:tum sahi thi ,koi bhi tumhare jagah hota to usse yehi lagta

Dutta:tumhe nahi lagta tumhe yahan rukna chahiye ,waise bhi mere paas itna time toh hota nahi ke main tumse baatein kar sakoon,,,aaj accident ki wajah mere paas itna time hai aur main ise utilize karna chahta hoon,ta ki tum kal aa kar ek typical biwi ki tarha naa bolo maine tumhe kabhi waqt nahi diya

Dutta:yahan aao,,,,,,,baitho(nakku takes the seat)nakku,,,,,,,,,tum ,,,,,,,,,,,,tumhe apni padhai nahi poori karni

Dutta:tum chaho to ab bhi apni graduation poori kar sakti ho,mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai

Dutta:haan ,sach bol raha hoon

Dutta:Daayi maa maan gayi hai ,kal maine unse is baare mein baat ki thi

Dutta:kyun,,,tu meri patni hai ,mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai tere aage padhne mein toh unhe kyun hoga.

Dutta:tumhari marzi par agar unhone mana kar diya to kya tum apni graduation poori nahi karogi

Dutta:nakku waise bhi ghar par baith kar kya karo gi

Dutta:par sahil konsa yahan hamesha ke liye hai

Dutta:chahne se kya hota hai,,,,,,,,yahan par uska dhyaan kaun rakhe ga

Dutta:tum ,,,,,,,,,,,par wo tumhe itni acchi tarah se jaante bhi nahi hai.Pehle pehle sab kehte hai ,,,dheere dheere sab badal jaate hai

Dutta:tumhari graduation

Dutta:oh...tumhara irada mujhe kangaal karne ka hai

Dutta:main jaanta hoon ,tum aisi nahi ho

Dutta:doosro jaisi ,,,,,,,tum acchi ho

Dutta:kya soon tha mere baare mein

Nakku:pehle lagta tha ab nahi lagta

Nakku:yun hi,,,,,,,,,,,,aap acche insaan hai.Aap kabhi isiko dard nahi de sakte

Madhu comes in the room.

to be continue...

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

nice part...

thanks ,it wasnt interesting but what to do ,i m having exams na

Hey Rubal,

Nice update . Thanks for PM .

Dutta ka accident hua , naku aur madhu in hospital 😕. I was feeling bad first but its ok its a small one .

 Tasha initial talks were nice . Knowing about each other . But appears to be so formal .😊

Of course they never know each other . Slowly closeness developes hai naa ?

But dutta is too formal with naku aisa kyu . Dutta  is so happy with naku that she is taking care of his mother which he wants from his wife .

 He wants her to continue studies sooo  sweet . Naku wants to take care of saahil . Really both are made for each other each thinking about other one dutta about naku and naku about dutta.😳

Dutta knows that naku doubts him about saahil and she knows all about him from madhu Good .

Naku is telling him that he is saadiyal before him .😊 and he asking tujhe dar nahi lagtha mujhse aur she is telling no good girl aur waise bhi naku ko dutta se kaisa dar hai naa ? 😊

But i feel their talk is so formal . Don't know why  . I want to see tasha closeness soon . develope some romantic scenes and love scenes between them  waiting for tasha scenes .  😳

Dutta is so good and naku also . Love them in this ff . 😍

Please update soon Rubal .

Thanks for maintaining tasha essense and  for keeping dutta  sriram patil character so clean as in LTL .👏👍🏼
Edited by ziks - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Hey Rubal,

Nice update . Thanks for PM .

Dutta ka accident hua , naku aur madhu in hospital 😕. I was feeling bad first but its ok its a small one .

 Tasha initial talks were nice . Knowing about each other . But appears to be so formal .😊

Of course they never know each other . Slowly closeness developes hai naa ?

But dutta is too formal with naku aisa kyu . Dutta  is so happy with naku that she is taking care of his mother which he wants from his wife .

 He wants her to continue studies sooo  sweet . Naku wants to take care of saahil . Really both are made for each other each thinking about other one dutta about naku and naku about dutta.😳

Dutta knows that naku doubts him about saahil and she knows all about him from madhu Good .

Naku is telling him that he is saadiyal before him .😊 and he asking tujhe dar nahi lagtha mujhse aur she is telling no good girl aur waise bhi naku ko dutta se kaisa dar hai naa ? 😊

But i feel their talk is so formal . Don't know why  . I want to see tasha closeness soon . develope some romantic scenes and love scenes between them  waiting for tasha scenes .  😳 = main kya karoon unki shaadi aise situation mein huyi ,agar unka romance likhti hoon to bahut fake hoga

Dutta is so good and naku also . Love them in this ff . 😍

Please update soon Rubal . = i will try to upday next week because in this i have to study ,my exams

Thanks for maintaining tasha essense and  for keeping dutta  sriram patil character so clean as in LTL .👏👍🏼

thanks for readinng