FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37) - Page 14

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by eternity_of_luv


me waiting for update
not fair
am not waiting for one month
๐Ÿ˜ญ
i m not going now ,i m stll trying to convice my mom because of that evil aunt
Posted: 12 years ago

chapter9

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Raj mahal
 
 
suds:kya hua ,itna moo phula kar kyun baithi ho?
 
 
sona:maa chahti hai main apne gehne unko de doon,unka kehna hai yeh gehne dutta ki patni ke liye aye the aur ab in gehno par nakkusha ka haq hai
 

suds:yeh kya bol rahi ho,gehne de denge toh jiyen ge kaise,tum janti ho aaj hi maine papa se baat ki thi aur woh is shaadi se bohut naraaz hai,maine socha tha yeh gehne hamare kaam aaye ge

 
sona:mujhe khud nahi samajh aa raha yeh nakku ke liye achanak itna pyaar kyun
 

suds:pyaar toh aaye ga wo dutta shriram patil itne amiir joon thehre

 
sona:tum kaise bol sakte ho wo bohut zyaada amiir hai,dekha nahi tha shaadi pe kitne log aaye the ,aur kapde bhi toh itne sadharan pehne the
 

suds:wo dutta shriram patil hai,apni shaadi pe business suit nahi pehne ga,aur mumbai pe toh sab jante hai unko

 
sona:haan haan sab jante hai,main to unka naam bhi nahi suna tha
 

suds:wo apni koi khabar aane hi nahi dete to naam kaise sunogi

 
Sona:chalo hamare paas do crore to hai ,itne paise hamara kuch to ho hi jayega
 

suds:mujhe pehla apna business kholna hai

 
sona:tum jaante ho main filmo mein try karna chati hoon
 

suds:pata nahi tumhare maa baap kitne din hame yaha rehne denge

 
sona:uski chinta tum mat karo,wo khud mujhe kuch dino ke liye yahan rakhna chahte hai,aur kuch na huya to hum kuch soch hi lenge
 

suds:maine toh plan bhi bana liya hai

 
sona:kya plan hai tuumhara
 

suds:tum dekhti jayo,samay aane par tumhe hi bataun ga

 
Patil Niwas
 

madhu:bhaiya hum sab bhabhi ke ghar jaa rahe hai

 
Dutta:haan ,pata nahi koi rasam hai
 

madhu:bhabhi aap mahal mein rehti thi

 
nakku:haan ,mahal hai par yahan se bada nahi
 

Baaji:bhau main nahi jaa raha,mujhe sahil ke saath yahan rehna hai

 
dutta:par kyun tum hamare saath kyun nahi chalte
 

Baaji:bhau woh kahin bhi rone lagta hai,apni izzat ka sawal ha

 
dutta:(smiled)seedha bol tu jaana nahi chahta ,ise izzat ka kahan se sawaal utha hai
 

Baaji:kya bhau...

 
daayima:tum log yahan hi baatein karte raho ge ,der ho rahi rahi jaldi chalo, gaddi mein baitho
 

They drive to udaypur

 
Raj Mahal
 

Raja Sahib greeted everyone ,so does other family members.

 
Rani maa:(hugged nakku)kaisi ho nakku
 

nakku:main theek hoon rani maa,wo dii khush hai na

 
Rani maa:Haan haan wo khush hai ,sudarshan accha insaan hai
 

Sona(coming towards nakku and rani maa)kya baatein ho rahi hai

 
Rani maa:wo teri haal chal pooch rahi thi
 

sona:haan nakku meri chinta mat karo ,main khush hoon.Tum kaisi ho sudsarshan bataa rahe the dutta bohut aamir hai aur guuse wala bhi

 
nakku:haan yeh bohut ammiir hai
 

Rani maa:yeh kaisa sawal pooch rahi ho sonali,wo acche khaandaan se hai isiliye tumhari shaadi unse pakki huyi thi

 
sona:maa aap toh aise bol rahe ho jaise maine koi galat baat kar di ho.sach to yehi hai ke rishta mere liye aaya tha
 

Nakku is feeling bad.Rani maa noticed this,but didn't said anything because they were in hall and many people were present there.

 
sona:nakku teri saree bahut khubsoorat hai,kahan si li toone
 

nakku :dii aap kaisa sawal pooch rahi hai ,aaj shaadi ka teesra din ho aur mujhse yeh umeed karti hai ke main shopping karne gayi thi.Yeh jewelry aur mere saare kapde daayi maa ne shaadi se pehle kharedi the

 
sona:oh...tabhi main socho tu itni bhaari saree kaise pehen sakti hai,tujhe itni chamkti cheeze pasand nahi hai na
 

nakku :Dii ham wahan chale yahan sab baithe hai akele baat karte rahen ge to sab kya sonche ge

 
sona:nakku tune mujhse mere pati ke baare mein kuch nahi poocha
 

Nakku:aapne bataya to tha ,aap khush hai.Aur jiju us din kaafi acche insaan lag rahe the.dii jiju ke parivaar mein kaun kaun hai?

 
sona:o ho ...tu kya boring baatein lekar baith gayi"parivaar mein kaun hai",parents hai aur kaun. Tere pati ka chela kahan hai aur yeh teri nanad hai na,itni chup chap kyun hai
 

Nakku:baaji bhaiya ghar par hai,unki tabiyat theek nahi thi aur yeh , madhu,agar aap kahin pehli baar jaati hai to sidha apona FM radio toh on nahi karti use toh pata bhi nahi hai yaha kaun kaun hai

 
Dutta:nakku ,idhar aana
 

Nakku:ji

 
Dutta:madhu ko apne saath rakho ,wo kitni uljhi hui lag rahi hai
 

Nakku:ji

 
Nakku went to madhu and started chatting with her.
 

seth ji:nakku,kaisi ho

 
Nakku:main theek hoon sethji tum batao,college kaisa chal raha hai
 

Sethji:college bhi theek hai pata nahi is saal paas honga ya fail

 
Nakku:maa se bahut daant padegi,agar fail ho gaye
 

Madhu:yeh aapke bhai hai bhabhi?

 
Nakku:haan madhu yeh mera chota bhai hai , seth ji.Aur sethji yeh meri nanad hai madhu ,kal hi london se wapas lauti hai
 

Sethji:haan,isiliye main socho aapko shaadi mein nahi dekha tha.

 
Rani maa:ab sabko khana kha lena chahiya
 

Raja sahib:haan haan bhuke thodi na marna hai

 
Dutta: mujhe abhi jana hoga ,ek zammen ke kaam se jaana hai
 

Raja Sahib:damad ji aise kaise chale jayenga thodi der aur ruk jayeeye,khana kha kar chaliye ga.Aur madhu bhi to pehli baaar yahan aayi hai bina kuch khaye peeye kaise jaane denge

 
Dutta:mera jaan bohut zaroori hai,kaam beech mein nahi chod sakta ,aur jab kal nakku ko lene aaunga tab madhu ki jitni khatirdaari karni hai kar lijiye
 

Rani Maa: Aap madhu ko yahan hi hamare paas kyun nahi rehne dete,ek hi din ki toh baat hai,kyun madhu tum rehna chahogi apni bhabhi ke parivaar ke saath

 
Madhu:main...
 

Nakku:haan madhu yahan ruko,main tumhe apni seheli ke saath bhi milaun gi,kal saath mein ghar chalen ge

 
Dutta:madhu ,tum rukna chahti ho yahan nakku ke saath
 
 

Madhu:ji,par bhaiya kal aap pakka lene aayenga na

 
Dutta:haan aaunga,theek hai ab main chalta hoon
 

Rani maa:damadji rukiye aapko kuch dena tha

 
Dutta:ji
 

Rani maa gave a file to dutta

 
Rani maa:yeh nakku ki hisse ki property hai ,woh nakku ke dadaji ne nakku ke pati ke liye chodi thi
 

Dutta:par main ye kaise le sakta hoon

 
Rani maa:nakku ke dada ji ke iccha ke mutabik yeh aaphi ka hai,aapko lena hi hoga
 

Raja Sahib:waise bhi hamne aapko aur nakku ko koi tohfa nahi diya abhi tak,isi hamari aur se gift samajh kar hi rakh lijiye

 
Dutta:jii,thekk hai.Agar aap sab aisa hi chahte hai to theek hai
 
 
Dutta went out of raj mahal.
 

Raj Mahal

 
nakku:madhu tum yahan so jayo main apni dadi se milkar aati hoon
 

Madhu:bhabhi aapka kamra bohut sundar hai

 
nakku:thank you,par sab maa ki pasand hai
 

Madhu:toh kya hua kamra to aaphi ka sundar hai

 
nakku:main thodi der main aati hoon
 

madhu:good night bhabhi

 
Nakku:good night
 

Nakku went to rani maa's room.Rani maa opened the door and make nakku to sit on the sofa.

 
Nakku:kya baat thi rani maa ,aapne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya
 

Rani maa:mujhe tujhse kuch poochna tha

 
Nakku:ji
 

Rani maa:dutta accha insaan hai na,tujhpe chila to nahi hai na

 
Nakku:rani maa aap bekaar mein hi chinta kar rahe ho ,main theek hoon wahan aur sach baat yeh ke inse accha insaan mujhe kabhi mil hi nahi sakta
 

Rani maa:tere ghar pe sab theek hai na Daayi maa aur madhu tujhse acche se pesh aate hai na

 
Nakku:daayi maa mujhe bahut pyaar karti hai ,madhu to bahut acchi hai aur baaji sara din mazaak karta rehta hai.Main wahan kush hoon shayad yahan se bhi zyaada
 

Rani maa:matlab?

 
Nakku:wahan kisi ki daant nahi sunni padti
 

Rani maa:haan haan hum to jaise hamesha hi tere piche pade rehte the

 
Sonali came in Rani maa's room.
 

sona:maa aap kya baattein kar rahi ho nakku se

 
Rani maa:kuch nahi,bas yun hi
 

Sona:accha hai nakku tu bhi yahan hai mujhe hum dono se relatedkuch baat karni thi

 
Rani maa:kya baat hai sonali,bolo
 

Sona:Rani maa,aapne jo zameen ke kagaz dutta ko diye wo zameen kiski thi

 
Rani maa:tumhare dadaji ki
 

Sona:haan dadaji ki aur aapko nahi lagta us zameen par ham dono behno ka haq hai aur aapne wo zameen sidha dutta ko de di

 
Rani maa:us zameen par sirf nakku ka haq hai ,yeh tumhare dadji ki Will par likha tha,aur Will ke mutrabik wo zameen ab dutta ki hai
 

Sona:oh to dadaji ne woh zameen makku ke future ke liye rakhi thi.Phir maa mere liye kya rakha tha dadji ne?

 
Rani maa:Tumhaare liye.Sonali tumhaare liye kuch bhi nahi hai aur na hi sethji ke liye
 

Sonali:wah maa ye kya baat huyi mujhe to aap alag kar rahi hai.Nakku ko zameen mil gayi ,sabhi gehne nakku ko mil gaye,Sethji ghar ka beta hai kal ko Raj mahal uska hi hoga,mujhe kya milega?

 
Rani maa:sonali betiya paraya dhan hoti hai unhe wohi milta hai jo unke pati ka hota hai
 

sona:wohi toh main pooch rahi hoon mere pati ka kya hai,aapne dutta ko zameen di aur mere pati ko kkuch bhi nahi,mujhe jawab chahiye rani maa

 
Rani maa:woh zameen tumhare dadaji ne di hai maine nahi ,agar jawab chahiye to dadaji se poocho mujhe nahi
 

sona:kya baat hai maa ,dadaji to rahe nahi acchi tarika hia baat ko khatam karne ka ,mujhe nahi lagta main yahan aur rook payun gii aur ye llijiye apni nakisha ke gehne

 
Rani maa:toh tum gehne le aayi(Rani maa took the jewelry from sonali and gave iit nakku)nakku yeh gehne tumhare hai ,shaadi se pehle daayi maa ne apni bahu ke liye bheej waaye the,in pe tumhara haq hai
 

Sonali went out of the room.

 
Nakku:par maa dii bahot naraaz hai
 

Rani maa:tum uski chinta mat karo ,woh gusse mein hai.Use sahi galat ki samajh nahi hai

 
Nakku:Par maa dii sahi hai
 

Rani maa:nahi ,woh galat hai hum isme kuch nahi kar sakte ,yeh fainsla tumhaaree dadji ka tha,hum ise nahi badal sakte.Ye sab chod tu bata madhu kaisi ladki hai

 
Nakku:Madhu bahut acchi hai ,inki hi tarah hai zyaada bolti nahi hai.Par aap yeh kyun pooch rahi hai
 

Rani maa:mujhe wo pasand hai seth ji ke liye

 
Nakku(smiled)bhool jaaye maa woh sethji se badi hai ek saal
 

Rani maa:ohhh mere saare plan paani mein mil gaye ,par jo bhi ho ladki to acchi hai ,kisi acche ghar mein jayye gi

 
Nakku:so toh hai ye koi kasar nahi chodenge madhu ki shaadi par aur jo bhi kaladidi ke saath uske baad to wo madhuu ko lekar bahot possesive honge
 

Rani maa:kala??????????yeh kaun hai

 
Nakku:chodiye na maa ,is baat se koi farak nahi padta.Aapko pata hai yahan aane ke bad main bohut khush hoon
 

Rani maa:haan,lag raha hai ,tumhe wahan koi takleef toh nahi hai na

 
Nakku:reason yeh hai maine aaj aapko kitni baar maa pookara aur aapne mujhe kuch nahi bola
 

Rani maa:tumhe neend nahi aa rahi,jaa kar so jayo

 
Nakku:ji main chalti hoon
 

Sonali's room

 
suds:kya huya ,kahan se aa rahi ho aur itne gusse mein kyun kag rahi ho
 

sona:maa ne woh gehne nakku ko dilwa diye ,zammen nakku ko mil gayi .hamaree paas to kuch bhi nahi hai

 
suds:chinta mat karo ,do crore hai na
 

sona: haan do crore hai par tumne ab tak nahi bataya tumhe wo paise mile kahan se

 
suds:tum jaan kar kya karogi
 

sona:batao tumhe itne saare paise kahan se mile

 
suds:theek hai suno...
 
 

to be continued

sorry guys for late update but i was really busy.Aur ranju dii rona mat and yeah next update saturday ko mile gi,jitne gaaliyaan ya chappals marni hai mujhpe maar do,me happy always ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
Mine :)
Guess me the 1st res n last to update I think :(

Nice part again, hmmm now Rani maa seems to be v concern n sides to Nakku! is she doing it genuinely r not well v have to wait na :D
Can't seems to trust with choti's Mind :p

Ohhh SudSon is sooo dead mean n J!!

This land issue will be a huge issue na :p

Still NO Tasha Romance!!!
Soon update the next part :p
Ruby awesome dear, love how the story going :)
Edited by AzMishy - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update, ๐Ÿ‘has Datta given that money to Suds? Waiting for the next update๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by mnx12


Nice update, ๐Ÿ‘has Datta given that money to Suds? Waiting for the next update๐Ÿ˜Š

i m glad you liked
thanks for reading๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update rubal
me know that dutta know that property is on nakku's husbands name and all plan is made by him of tasha's marriage and 2 crore he give it to suds to marry sonali
thanks for pm

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by rubal223


i m not going now ,i m stll trying to convice my mom because of that evil aunt


try hard
best of luck

Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. Kuch romance lao na in dono ke beech mein pliz. waiting for next part desperately.
Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update honey!!
 
 
loved it
 
 
but hate sona/sudz XD
 
 
ukno i thnk d jewellery sona gav bak 2 naku is fake..suds sold the real thng das wer he got 2crore 4rm ryt...disgusting ppl
 
 
nywyz plsss tashas LS shuru karo...<3
 
 
thnx 4 pm
 
 
pls cont soon.x
 
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update, please start their romance soon,eagerly waiting for next update,thank for pm.

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