FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37) - Page 11

tamannA

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Posted: 12 years ago

good update dutta is very good

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Ashima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice part rubal i hope im not last to comment lol wow dutta is soo adorable :D

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Ashima

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok one thing more i love the title of ur ff! Its soo beautiful :)

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Azy

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Posted: 12 years ago

me have to catch up 2 parts😒

RESERVED!!😳

Edited-

Part 7!!!

Ohhh now madhu with a kid and that kid is kala's!!!

Dutta drinking!!!

Both sleep in same bed but with a distance, hehehehe

Good n quite long update :)

Thanks dear n good going :p

Edited by AzMishy - 12 years ago

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rubal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal
Nice part rubal i hope im not last to comment lol wow dutta is soo adorable :D

dont worry my mishthi you are not last look at shrushi dii she keeps reserving and reserving but never got time to read

and Azy dii is not here ,she will be here in anytime

thanks for reading and yeah dutta is adorable

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Azy

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Posted: 12 years ago

RESERVED!!!

[this is for the monday update😛]

Part 8

Dutta's father is a real criminal, no wonder he hate him so much, poor kala :(

At leasts she got married to the one whome she loved, madhu's mother is a v cearing person, poor he to dieing, n dutta still grateful to her :)

I am seening the jwellary all missing :p

Sud must have stolen them! hehehe

We want some tasha intractions,

Good devoloping the story, thanks choti :)

Me done with updating my comments so update the next part soon :p hahaha

V intresting n loved it :D

Edited by AzMishy - 12 years ago

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rubal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashima_Mishal
Ok one thing more i love the title of ur ff! Its soo beautiful :)

first i thought that i should change the title but then my friend told me to leave it

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Azy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rubal223
dont worry my mishthi you are not last look at shrushi dii she keeps reserving and reserving but never got time to read
and Azy dii is not here ,she will be here in anytime

thanks for reading and yeah dutta is adorable

ha ha ha

c what a timeing na😛😆😆

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rubal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AzMishy

ha ha ha
c what a timeing na😛😆😆

love you

me going to school

bye😛😛😛😛

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Azy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rubal223
love you
me going to school

bye😛😛😛😛

c u soon😛😛

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