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FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter6,page7) (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged

Chapter 3

in Raj Mahal

Rani maa: ( with an angry voice) Arpita tum Avdesh ke saath kyun aayi

Arpita: Rani maa wo meri gadi ka tyre puncture ho gaya tha ,wo usi road se guzar rahe the aur unhone meri madad ki mujhe yahan chod kar.Aur yeh lijiye apne Paise ,mujhe na to waha manjiri mili aur nahi uski maa

Rani maa didn't took the money and went back to her room

in arpita's room

Arpita,in deep thoughts sitting in the swing.Dadi maa enters in the balcony with a plate of food for Arpita.

Dadi maa:(sitting next to Arpita)kya soch rahi hai,arpita?

Arpita:Kuch nahhi dadi,bas yunhi...

Dadi maa:kisi ne kuch kaha tujhe?

Arpita:main aaj tak samajh nahi paa rahi meri galti kya hai?kabhi kabhi lagta hai maa meri chinta karti hai,isiliye mujhe mahal se bahar nahi jaane deti,lekin aaj achanak bahar bhej diya.Par main hi kyun? Sonali dii bhi toh hai,unhe koi kyun nahi rokta?

Dadi maa:(put her hand on Arpita's shoulder)tu bekaar mein soch rahi hai,thak gayi hai isliye,achha yeh bata manjiri ki maa kaisi hai?

Arpita:aap janti hai, aap is baat ko taal rahi hai aur rahi baat manjiri ki maa ki toh wo bilkul theek hai,tv dekh rahi thi

Dadi maa:(confused) kya, tv dekh rahi thi?

Arpita:haan dadi,Rani maa ne mujhse jhoot bola manjiri ki maa ke baare mein.Wohan hospital mein koi nahi tha,isiliye whan se nikalne ke baad maine manjjiri ke ghar call kiya toh manjiri ne bataya ke uski maa theek hai aur usne naa hi raj mahal mein call ki thi.Uski maa tv dekh rahi thi maine khud baat ki unse.Bas ye samajh nahi aa raha ,Rani maa ne mujhe jhoot kyuun bola?

Dadi maa:(getting up from the swing)tu khana kha le ,kisi aur din baat karen ge

Arpita alone in the balcony,again lost in her thoughts.

In Rani maa's room

Raja Sahib:(sitting on their sofa)saraswatii,tumne Arpita ko bahar kyun bheja

Rani maa: aapko kaise pata chala

Raja sahib:maa ne mujhe bataya,Arpita dukhi thi

Rani maa:(really tired)didn't answers

Raja Sahib:Main janta hoon tum uski chinta karti ho par is tarah se tum use bhi pareshaan kar rahi ho

Rani Maa:Aap bhul rahe hai ,Guruji ji ne Arpita ke janam par kya kaha tha

Raja Sahib: Main kaise bhul sakta hoon unhone meri beti ko thukrane ko bola tha ,meri beti ko kala saya bola tha.Par mujhe lag raha hai tum bhool rahi ho pita ji ne wada kiya tha ke woh Arpita ko is wajah se kuch nuksaan nahi pahunchaye ge,par phir tum uski maa hokar aisa barrtaav kyun kar rahi ho?

Rani maa: hum guruji ki baat nahi taal sakte aur phir aaj Avdesh...(she stopped there)

Raja Sahib:Avdesh Kya?

Rani maa: kuch nahi

Raja Sahib:dekho,agar aise hi guruji ki baatein maante rahe to meri Arpita ki shaadi kabhi nahi ho paye gi,aur waise bhi kya bharosa jo dosh guruji ne arpita ki kundli mein dekhe hain wohi sach hai ,guruji insaan hain aur unse galtiyan ho sakti hai.Tum bhi jaanti ho Arpita ke janam se koi mahal mein khush nahi tha kyun ke sab is ghar ka waaris chahte the,par phir bhi pitaji guruji ke khilaaf gaye aur arpita ko apnaya

Rani maa:aisa mat sochiye,sonali ke vida hone ke baad ,hum apni Arpita ke liye achha sa dulha dhoondege

Raja Sahib:tumhe lagata hai,Avdesh se behter koi ho sakta hai?tum bhi janti ho aur main bhi ke Avdesh ki maa ki pehli pasand Arpita thi par tumne guruji ki baat maan kar unhe inkaar kar diya aur sonali ka prastav diiya

Rani maa:aap hamesha guruji ke khilaaf kyun bolte hain,wo apni jagah sahi hai .Pehle badi beti ki shaadi hi honi chahiye

Raja Sahib:Mujhe is baare mein aur koi baat nahi karni(getting up from the sofa)

Rani Maa:aap kaha jaa rahe hai

Raja Sahib:Dekhne jaa raha hoon ,mahal acchi tarah se saja hai ya nahi ,kal mehndi hai aur main sonali ki pasand ke hisaab se mahal saja hua dekhna chahta hoon

Rani maa smiles on his husband's behaviour

Next day in Mumbai ,in Avdesh's office

Mr Roy:Sir,(handing some papers to Avdesh)here's the information about that Land .That Land belongs to girl but not fully because as per my information,according to the Will of the Late.Owner of that Land,its says that Land will be gifted to her Husband after her Marriage.

Avdesh:Thanks Roy ,and what about that guy?

Mr Roy:yes Sir,he will be here in anytime.

Avdesh:Give this Packet to him and ask him to call me today ,i m leaving now ,ghar jaldi nahi pahuncha to bahut daaant padegi daayi maa se

Avdesh left the Office.His Manager thinking what type of person is he,always gives commands and even didn't invited anyone from the Office to his Marriage

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Me First.. Baby, It was a wonderful update.. Im getting a little angry on Rani Maa. Anyway, Update soon Ok Baby.. Love You

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rubal223

Originally posted by KriYa_life

Baby..

Me just read your FF..

wonderful..

I loved your concept...

well done again..
thank you momie but i need help because of Avi family i dont know everyone's name ,in LTL its easy i watched that show form start but GKD 2 mahine hi huye hai
Sure Baby.. Papa is always here for You.

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Rubal, thanks for the update. Avi is a very interesting character indeed and Rani Maa is very mean.

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
hey rubal dear ,
Very interesting update, well done,
Avi n arpi both r just perfect but rani maa is really mean how can diffrenciate between her own two daughters.
Well just waiting for avita's next meeting,
Update soon sweety.

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
hey rubal...
itz awesome...
avi 's awesome and arpi so cute...
update soon...Big smile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Hey Rubal...

Nice update dearClap

Raja Sahib loves his daughterEmbarrassed

Why is rani maa believing Guruji so blindlyConfused

Its interesting sweetie..update soonWink


           



Edited by prash_t - 28 May 2011 at 11:59am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
woww baby
this story is getting better and better
i just love u and u r story
but hate raani ma

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