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FF: Dadak Tha Hai Dil Kisi Kay Liye Maha Epi Part2 (Page 12)

Pari-Gupta IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Nice update
Thanks for the PM

Asin.pkyek Senior Member

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
lovely update...
Madhubala_RK Goldie

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
thank you all for your nice comments!!
Cute_Gal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Nyc update Dear.. Nupur-Mayank part was gr8.. Mish-Kabir were lovely.. n Abhiya were awesome.. Loved it.. Carry on..thanx for d
Deepi20 Goldie

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
I loved your Abhiya scenes! Wow...Abhiya are going to dance together Smile Great update! Continue soon Smile
Madhubala_RK Goldie

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Chapter 7:

In Delhi, Mayank and Nupur takes their key and are on the way to their room.
Mayank:Why did you lie?

Mayank:There, on the reception!
Nupur:There, Oh...If I didn't lied there, we would have not got the room..Ok
Mayank:So...They are many other hotels in Delhi

Nupur:So...You mean at this time of night we will roam around searching for hotel in Delhi like made people and we also have to prepare for our meeting in such a short time...We cannot waste the time!

Mayank:OK...Sorry.Now Lets go!
Mayank press the lift button and lift gets open
Both go inside the lift

Nupur:Oh~ Its too hot in the lift...By God!
Mayank stares at Nupur and smiles!

Suddenly the time goes and the lift stop and get stuck!
Nupur gets scared of the dark and lift getting closed in between...

She start shouting..Mayank puts his hand on Nupur's mouth...
Mayank:Shut Up!
Nupur: Mmm..mmm
Mayank removes his hand!
Nupur:I am afraid!

Both wait for the light to come back and the lift shake for a while...This make Nupur fall on Mayank...
Mayank hold Nupur...

The lift starts
Nupur and Mayank are looking into each others eyes and are lost...

The lift opes...People look at them and smile...
Nupur and Mayank don't notice that the lift have opened!

Man:Now...Get out! Yaar
Mayank and Nupur come back to sense...
They both quickly get out with their suit case from the lift!

In the Party 

Piya and Abhay are dancing and are so others

Gunjan is happy to see Kabir and Misha getting closer!
Gunjan(in heart): I guess Kabir have proposed Misha...Thats why they are lost in each others!

Gunjan: Samrat! Look, They are looking so nice together!

Gunjan:Misha and Kabir! They are made for each other!
Samrat get irritated

Gunjan:And you know they both love each other! So romantic
Samrat is shocked to know this!

Gunjan:Yes! Even I was surprised!

Piya and Abhay are looking into each others eyes!
Abhay:Yes Piya!

Piya: Abhay! Your sis Riddhima is so nice and sweet!
Abhay:Yeah I Know!

Piya smiles
Piya(in heart): What should I talk about? hmmm... yes Let me begin!

Piya:Abhay! You are too young to join office...
Abhay:What you mean?

Piya:I mean you should have been in College in this age, where did this office came from ha?
Abhay smiles

Abhay:Yes! Well My parents sudden death  lead to this all!
Piya:Oh! I am sorry
Abhay:Its ok!
Both smiles

Riddhima:Ok Friends! Thank you for your time! I mean to say Party is Over!

Everyone leaves the dance floor

Gunjan leaves Samrat and runs to Kabir and Misha

Gunjan: Congrats! Misha and Kabir...Now a couple
Misha:You know what happened today?

Gunjan:Yes I keep an eye everywhere hahaha!

They all smile...Samrat is watching all this!

How was it?

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..Bournville.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
i like it. now just remove abhay's shyness and make him tlk to piya for a change.

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 31 May 2011 at 1:18am
Deepi20 Goldie

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Nice update! But can you please make the Abhiya scenes a little longer in your FF especially since we don't get many Abhiya scenes on the show no more? Continue soon Smile

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