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Sajan SS The Film last part pg13

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Hi guys yeh story maine nivriti ke liye likha hain specially its for you dear its a small ss on sajan and also Ekta, Preety and ambika mere baaki sajanian friends jinka naam abhi mujhe yaad nahin aarahaan unke liye bhi please dont feel baad i forgot your names
here is first part
 

Samrat shergil son of the famous film director cum producer Aditya shergil.  He is shooting for his film in a village. Heroine of the film is Miss. Sheena Malhotra

Asst Director- sir everything is ready are you both ready

Sam-how many times I told you to call me sam not sir understood

A D-acha sam are you ready

Sam-ya I am ready but where is your heroine

Production boy-sirji heroine madam kisi se jagda kar rahi hain unhone ek gaon ke ladke ko  tamacha maaraa

AD-kya hum aarahe hain

Sam also goes with him

Sheena-how dare you touch my  hand tumhari aukaad hi kya hain

Ladka-woh jii aap fisal rahi thi isiliye maine aapko bachaane ke liye haat pakda ji maaf keejiye

Sheena-girti toh kya hota tumhare jaise low status people ko ache se jaanti hun ab dettol se haat dona padega actually tumhein nahin shooting yeha rakhne ke liye director ko kehna padega

Sam 'sheena stop it tum usse maafi maangogi

Sheena 'tum  hote kaun ho mujhse yeh kehne waale waise galti uski hain woh mere joote ke barabar hain

Sam-unki wajah se hi hum log hain agar woh log paise lagaake film nahin dekhte toh hamari koi value nahin hain

Sheena-tum mujse jyada ye fan important hain toh teek hain main tumhare saath film nahin karoongi

Sam-teek hain mat karo

She leaves from there in anger

AD-sir aapne yeh kya kiya agar aapke dad ko pata chala toh mujhe is film se nikalenge

Sam-main dad se baat karoonga

AD-par sir doosri heroine kahaan se milegi

S-yeh nahin toh koi aur heroine nahin hain kya saare heroines se pooch kar dekho tab tak main gaon ko dekh kar aata hun aise paces har jagah nahin milte

(he is roaming in the village in the dress of village boy so tha no on can identify him )

(from one house a girl comes out)

Gunjan-bauji main college jaa rahi hun khana table pe hain kha lena

(listening to the sound he turns that side a girl comes out with umbrella her face is not visibe because of umbrella. He becomes keen to look at her and follows her. She notices that someone is following her)

She turns towards him

Gunjan-excuse yeh ho kya raha hain kabse dekh rahi hun aap mujhe follow kyun kar rahe hain main aaphi se pooch rahi hoon

(she is shouting at him he is staring )

Gunjan-main aapse hi baat kar rahi hun

Sam-kya tum meri film ki heroine banogi

Gunjan-kya(shocked) tum ho kaun

Sam-hi I am actor samrat shergil aapse milke bahut khushi hui

Gunjan -mujhe nahin hui

Sam 'dekhiye aap ne agar mere saath acting nahin ki toh mere director aur producer mujhe maar daalenge kya aap chahte hain ki ek baap apne bte ka koon kare

Gunjan- main kuch samji nahin

Sam-is film ka director cum producer mere dad hain aur is film ki heroine meri wajah se film chod ke chali gayi

Gunjan- mujhe acting nahin aati

Sam-mujhe todhi aati hain isiliye film main itne retakes hote hain waise bhi main aapko sikha doonga

Gunjan- phir bhi mujhe aapke saath acting nahin karni

Sam 'ek film ka hero aapko acting ka offer de rahaan hain aur aap mana kar rahi hain

Gunjan-aap jo bhi ho mujhe yeh acting karna pasand nahin pata nahin heroine kaise kaise kapde pehanti hain aur kaise kaise scenes karte hain

Sam-yeh ek gaon ki ladki ki story hain aise cheezein aapko nahin karni padegi

G-maine keh diya na main nahin karoongi

(she leaves)

Samrat shergil itni aasani se haar maanne waala nahin hain meri heroine toh tumhi banogi

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INTERVAL

 part2 pg5
 
part3 pg9
 
part 4 pg 11
 
part 5 (last part) pg 13


Edited by --unknown-- - 18 July 2011 at 3:36am

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
I  like  the  concept ,  please  do  continue  with  it

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
hey its awesome dear...thanks for writing a sajan ss...really very happy...thanks fr dedicating it us...thanks alot
cont. soon and thanks fr the pm..
love
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It's really cute. Beautiful concept.Clap ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page. do cont soon.Smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged

Hey!!! Cool

Another lovely SS... Dancing
Firstly,
 
Congratulations on your new SS!!!Party
Thanks for dedicating this SS to meeHug... =D
 
 
Loved the concept!! ClapClapClap 
 
The title is just awesome!!Smile "The Film!"Clap
 
Nothing much precise or unique, just 'simple and crisp!' Big smile
 
And it does match up with the story!Wink
 
Sheena is such a Censored... How can she treat a person like this??ShockedAngry
 
But then that is true!ROFL 
 
And you protrayed her very well!!
 
Thank God that Censored left the film, warna ko crores ka loss ho jaataROFL
 
How could Sam's dad even select her?Shocked 
 
'tum  hote kaun ho mujhse yeh kehne waale waise galti uski hain woh mere joote ke barabar hain'
 
That is so like Shee-na!Angry 
 
I am glad Samrat took stand of the villager... And "ab dettol se haat dona padega"??? Is she out of her senses???ShockedShocked 
 
But then she did the same on RaTna date in the serial na!!! She is literally mad!!!LOL 
 
But obviously what Samrat said was true"unki wajah se hi hum log hain agar woh log paise lagaake film nahin dekhte toh hamari koi value nahin hain"..
 
Ek film ya actor tabhi chalta hai jab public use like karti hai, Public ke bina kuch bhi nahi hai!!Big smile
 
Public chahe to actor ko support kar sakti hai ya public chahe to ek actor ka carrier thap karsakti hai!
 
Aur jab aisa hota hai to us actor ki zindagi ka sabse bada tamacha hota haiOuch!!
 
Aur waise bhi Shee-nah ko kisi bhi cheez ki value nahi hai!Angry
 
But I am still drooling over  SaJan first meetEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
 
"she is shouting at him he is staring"Day DreamingBlushing
 
Hayyyeee!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedBlushingBlushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
That is so SaJanish!!! Samrat can not help but drool over Gunjan!!LOL
 
"Hi I am actor samrat shergil aapse milke bahut khushi hui"
 
Awww... Can't help but flirt!EmbarrassedLOLEmbarrassedLOLEmbarrassed But Gunjan's relpy was something astonishing "mujhe nahin hui"...ROFL
 
I am bloody sure Samrat will join all ends to manofy Gunjan to act in the film... The line proved it!Big smile
 
"Samrat shergil itni aasani se haar maanne waala nahin hain meri heroine toh tumhi banogi"
 
Even I want her to act, hope she joins the course!Embarrassed
She is a lovely actor!Embarrassed Isn't it?LOL
 
And thanks for the note... "Hi guys yeh story maine nivriti ke liye likha hain specially its for you dear its a small ss on sajan"Hug Awww... You are a charmer!!Embarrassed But this was unexpected!Shocked Thank you so much dear!!HugHug ILU!HeartHugHeart
 
What is your name?? I keep on asking!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
 
Please continue soon and add me in the PM list without any further ado!!
 
That should be understood, Haina?LOL
 
Love Nivriti!!Heart
 
P.S:: If you don't want to tell your name, it is completely fineBig smile!! I just asked out of curiosity!Wink
 
P.P.S:: Sorry for the long reply, just wanted to share my views!Smile


Edited by SajanRox - 23 May 2011 at 3:10am

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
OMGGG...!!!!!
A SaJan SS from you...Shocked Shocked
YAY! YAY! M sooo happy...Big smile Dancing
awwwiiieee...ur a sweetheart...thnx 4 dedicating it to me...Embarrassed
Awesummm SS...love the name- The Film...
& also the Concept...
LOL...Shee-nah was so WELL defined...LOL LOL
shez really a Censored...
awww...the poor villager...Ouch
& she said DETTOL se haath dhona padega...???!!!!...
OMGGG...ROFLing like HELL...ROFL ROFL ROFL
this is so so so shee-nah urf CHADDY AUNTY...LOL LOL LOL
SaJan meeting was HILLARIOUS...!!!ROFL ROFL ROFL
& Gunji the new heroine???!!!...eeepppsss...so happy...Big smile
m sure samrat will manofy her...
Wow!! SaJan falling in love in REAL during shooting THE FILM...Day Dreaming
utterly romanticcc...!!!!!!Embarrassed
thnk u so much for this SS yaar...u made my day...Hug Hug Hug
Luv yaa & this SS vry much...Heart
do cont vry soon plzzz & thnx 4 the PM...Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug

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Thanks 4 the PM.
 
Sajan ss is awesome cont. soon.

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