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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
nice intro continue soon
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
hey aasha... nice introduction... waiting for the first part... update it soon...

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Nyc intro bt short plz write first part soon & long one
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
                                                                                                                                                                             
thx 4 ur comments.
 
part 1
                                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                                                                           
 
 
today karan slept early.akshi was folding clothes.naitikt came from back huggcd her tightly.
nt:atlast mujh bi apne biwi ke sath vakth mila.jabse baby aya hein apko meri figure hi nahi hein
ak:Smileacha toh teek hein chodiye mujhe
nt: nahi. mein ye mauka kaisa gava saktha hoon.aj mein apko nahi chondungaSmile
ak:Blushing nt...chodiye na.
 nt:bilkul nahi,aj sirf ap aur meinBig smile
he traced his hands through her face.Heart
nt: aj bi ap bahuth khubsoorah heinHeartHeart
he held her tightly and kissed her on nape of the neck.then he make his way to his cheek.she shyingly ran towards the windowBlushing
naitik  went behind her and turnd her towards him.he gently placed a soft kiss on her forhead he came more and more closer to her,he started kissing her here and there.akshi  tried to stop him but he didntnt.naitik  took her in to his arms and placed her on bed and began to kiss her more passionately.akshi was enjoying Blushingthis was smiling badlyBig smileBig smileBig smile he ws about to  kiss her pink lips suddently karan started crying.ak got up to go,but naitik didnt like thi.s he again pulled her in to a huggg...Hug
ak: nt chodiye karan ud gaya
nt:Ouch nahi
she pushed him and went near karan.she tried a lot to make him sleep but he didnt stop crying.akshi take him to their bed and placed him near naitik.he started smiling seeing his papa.SmileSmile
ak: dekha naitik apko dekhe karan kaise has raha hein
nt :haa vo aj bhi correct time par ud gaya hein na isiliye.kya timing hein!!!!!!!
ak:Big smile apka beta hein na isiliye
nt:LOL mujh neend aa raha hein,gd night. he turned 2 other side
akshi smiled seeing thisSmileSmile
next morning akshi opened her eyes,took a shower, karan  is already up.she take him his coat and put him on naitik chest and she sat beside them.karan was too naughty like his father,he started to play with naitiks hair,naitik also wake up and they played together.next their aim is to disturb akshi,naitik pulled her besidi him,karan sit on her stmach and began
to make tickling in her stomach.akshi started smiling.naitik was equally naughty.began to make tickling in her throat with his face.
ak:naitik,karan chodiye mujhe,kyon tang kar rahe ho mujhe
nt:ye toh hamara haq hein;hein na beta
karan smiled as if he agreed to this.
ak:naitik,ap bhikaran ko ligiye,meri tummy mein dardh ho raha hein aur ap bi hatiye(hitting him)
nt:teeh hein,aj keliye itna kafi hein,baaki kal...
he take karan,akshi got up and hold her tummy
ak:jaisa bap vaisa beta,donom shythan hein.
nt:dekha munna,mamma kya keh raha hein.hum shythan hein kya?
 
naitik got ready for office.karan didnt like this.he started crying as us usual.he ran to take him,akshi tried to take him but he didnt leave naitik so he decided  to stay at home
 
 
precap:naksh planning 4 second honey moon
                
        so guys, hope u like it.if u like it i wil surely continue pls do comment @ critiz.pls press th LIKE button if u like it.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                                                                                                   

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashamol

my first ff: Dil toh bacha hein ji!!!!part 1 @ pg 4                                   
 
 
i m a new member i joined if recently.basicaly am nt a writer.bt naksh made me write this.i need great support 4m all of u 2 continu ths ff.pls do commemt @critisize.my name as asha nair.hare asha mol
                                                                                                                                   
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
awesome awww junior munna bhi hamre munna jaisa hai
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preksha_naksh

awesome awww junior munna bhi hamre munna jaisa hai
                                                                   
 
thnk u 4 ur comments.any mistakes?

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