Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai


Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

MY1RST FF Dil toh bacha hein [email protected] (Page 16)

_Rasha_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Wow aasha,it is too romantic.i must say ur ff's sweetness nd cuteness r increasing part by part.there is a freshness in ur ffs.both ur ffs r completely diff.tum humesha muje naksh dreamland pahucha hi deti ho.der4 i commenting late.i imagined all the scenes nd im blushing yaar. Best ek scene ko mention karna is difficult.all the scenes r just fabulous.w8ing 4 naksh bathroom sure wo tho bahut zyada hi romantic honewale hai.thanks 4 d pm nd cont soon.

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged

EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed after read this part i was like Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreamingits full of naksh romance Blushing...precap bathroom romanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...waiting for it badly.Big smile...really its a big big treat for naksh fans.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...pls cont.soonSmile

nahtani88 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
.aastha. Goldie

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
so mch romantic part asha...simply loved it EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
waitin badly fr nxt part NAKSH BATHROOM ROMANCEDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
continue soon,,,,n thanks fr ur pmSmile
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wow lovly part
plzzz cont soon
i4ishra IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
thnks 4 ur support,will update today itseif
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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged

Guys pls giv ur longer comments @ do pm me ur ideas @ suggestions @ also thos things wich u would like 2 see in my ff

Part 5

Next morning akshi opened her eyes,4 a second the events of last night came in 2 her mind making her blush.she saw naitik sleeping next 2 her by tightly hugging her,his hands were around her waist @ face  near her head.she came after a shower @ saw naitik still  sleeping with a cute smile in his cute face.she opened the curtains @sat next 2 him.she was about 2 kiss on his cheeks 2 wake up him,suddently tooj a turn @ the kiss landed on his lips,he moved his hands 2 her waist @ pulled her in 2 the bed @ goy involved in the kiss,akshi somhow gotup 4m the bed @ started hitting him with pillows

Nt:kyon jagah achi nahi lagi kya?.

Ak:nt,ap bi na sone ki natak kar raha tha

Nt:mein?mein toh apni morning kiss ka intezar kar raha tha

Ak:dhat.. ab ap chodiye mein karan ko lekar aati hoon

She placed karan near naitik @ she herself laid near them,naitik was lying between them, karan slowly moved over naitik @ started playing with him,then he noticed his  mamma,he slightly moved 4ward  @ kissed on her cheeks by saying " lab u mamma",akshi was overwhelmed with this childish act,she also kissed him by saying "lab u 2 munna".naitik was watching all these @ was feeling jealous

Nt: are mujhe bi koi kiss digiye ap donom apas mein kiss karthe jaa rahe ho

Akshi heard this @ she kissed on his one cheek @ karan on other cheek.he also reciprocated 2 both but 1 extra 2 akshi

Nt:munna,tum mamma se zyada pyaar karthe ho ya papa se

After little thinking

Ka:papa se,lab u papa

He  again kissed him on his cheeks

Nt:dekha akshara


Nt:apko bura nahi laga

Ak:nahi,balki mein toh bahuth khush hoon


Ak:nt,karan apko zyaada pyaar karthein hein ,ap mujhe zyaada pyaar karthe hein aur mein apne munna ko zyaada pyaar karthein hein,ab toh sab balance ho gaya na

Nt:matlab ap zyada pyaar karan se karthi hein

AkLtaking karan in her lap)vaise nt,mere pass do do munna hein meine bataya nahi ki vo munna kon hein

Nt;sat up @ hold her hand @ moved close 2 her,before he could kiss her,karan ran 2 his lap

Nt:wat a timing??toh mein nahakar aata hoon,aj karan bi mere sath nahayenge,hein na?

Karan nodded

Akshi filled bath tub with water @ she put karan in it @ placed his favorite toys in it.naitik came wearing a towel.she went 2 take this time karan @ naitik planned soon as she stepped in,they  began 2 splash water on her using handshower 4m either side.she shouted 2 stopp but they didn't @ her saree completely turned wet.after somtime karan stopped it @ started 2 play with his toys,but natik continued his mischevious.she angrily went 2wards him @ inturn she splashed water on naitik.karan called him 2 play so he also entered in 2 the tub 2 started playing with him like a baby,naitik talked 2 him in a babyish voice @ akshi was enjoying these,naitik noticed this

Nt:ak,ap bi ayiye bohuth maza ayega

Ak:nahi nahi ap log mujhe bahuth tang karthe hein,mein  nahi awoonga  

Nt:teek hein,bas ap is pipe on kigiye(naughtily)

Then he put some soap water on her way @ again  started playing  with him.akshi didn't saw this  @ she slipped @ fall on naitiks lap

Nt:kya baat hein akshara,mere godh mein baitna apko itna acha laghtha hein

Ak:nt,ap ne toh mujhe gira diya,agar mujhe kuch ho jaata toh?

Nt:(holding her tightly)mere hote huwe apko kuch nahi hoga,(tickling her)hamare sath bi kheliye

Akshi smiled seeing this,karan also becom happy 2 see his mamma @started screaming "mamma" "mamma".trios played 4 hours .nt went under shower akshi take karan 4m tub,he started crying becoz he wants 2 play she allowed her 2 play @ went 2wards naitik


Naitik pulled her under shower

Nt:ak,ap abi tak bataya nahi ki vo munna kon hein.mein ya karan?

Ak:zarroor batawoongi lekin abi nahi baad mein

Nt:ap na ak,mujhe bahuth intezar karwathi hein,pls bataoo na

Ak:nahi..ap nahaligiye mein karan ke pass jaati hoon

Nt"ap kaham jaa rahi hein aj hum sath mein nahayenge

Ak:iski koi zarroorat nahi hein kyonki mein already naha chuki hoon

Nt:koi baat nahi mere sath ek aur baar naha lena

Naitik turn on the shower @water began 2 fall on them.akshi understood wat he is aiming @tries 2 leave but he holds her hand @started singing

yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
dekho na dekho na dekho na dekho na
phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam
phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam
haa saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada
kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha
samjho na samjho na samjho na samjho na
hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole
kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
dekho na dekho na dekho na dekho na
He reduced the space between them 2 [email protected] passionately felt the presence of her,he sart caressing her arms with his fingures @with other hand he removed th her hairs 2 oneside.he turned her 2 face him,he slowely moved his hands that was on her tummy 2 her back,inturn akshi caressed his cheeks with deep lov.they start taking small steps,wile naitik was admiring her beauty,akshi turned red due with shy @ embaressment @her heart sart racing

He felt @ kissed her forhead with all his lov.naitik noticed water was falling through her lips adding more beauty 2 it,he couldn't resist himself,he wants 2 kiss her,soon his lips touched hers @ both immersed in 2 a kiss,both don't want 2 brek 4m it,soon it becom a passionate one

Aftersomtime they came back 2 their senses by hearing karans sound 4m tub,akshi pushed him away.touched her lips with her hands,madly blushed @ smiled looking at natik @ ran away 4m there

She went 2wards karan @start 2 bath him,,healso didn't leave a single chance 2 disturb her

Naitik already decided  tat they will not go 4 any outing 2day becoz he wants 2 spend time with his wife @ son.after such along time these 3 enjoyed eachothers company @ they talked 4 a long time,in between karan was also saying something but no one could understood it

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Edited by ashamol - 06 June 2011 at 1:17am

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