MY1RST FF Dil toh bacha hein jipt11@135promo145 - Page 23

Originally posted by: ashamol

 

thanks alot stuti

its means a lot 4 me

happy 2 know u liked @ didnt feel any awkward😉

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

i wont feel awkward wid this part.. dunno bout others... some might feel!! lolzz... but they are married.. so... no worries!

Originally posted by: saman.17

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 me first...😳 k let me start how can u expect long comments after reading tis bas i'm in naksh land now...😳😳 pura ff padne ke waqt mera haalat aesa hi tha ☺️ i no yeh serial me kabhi nhi hoga but yahan padke bahut bahut mazaa aaya 😃 ur imagination is too gud👏 kaafi had tak milti hai mujhse 😆😃 just loving naksh romance day by day tumhara ff bahut hi romantic hota jaa raha hai pata nhi next part me aur kya kya milega...😕😳 just one suggesion while writing ur next part i just need lil more of karan's part involved in it although its vry nice but i want to c naksh spending some time with tere son & karan doin naughty things like his dad...😃 i want to c beauty of tere relationship kaise naksh apni reponsibilies nibhaate hai as mom-dad & dont want munna to be like his dad totally useless... ll be eagerly waiting for ur next part 😳

thanks for the pm & cont soon...😛

Originally posted by: ashamol

 

1rst of al  a very very big thank u

i added more romance in this part bec there were a lot of karan scen in previous part,any way i wil try 2 mix both

thanks 4 ur suggestions i will surely add these things in future

haan next part mein kuch hein sospense

 thank u giving such a long comments

keep reading

Originally posted by: fazeel

wow asha just awesome yaar no words to describe yaar i am in nakshaland 

 

 naksha romatic moments i was imanging the scence😳 wow how romatic yaar😍

akshara kuya car stop kiya ab hum wait karna padaga yaar all ff writersbeoming cv's yaar

anywaya you done fab job yaar👏and jaldi next part update karna

 par phir say aur bar read karugi ab 2 times read karna baki hai

Originally posted by: nivedha_123

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☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️...wow..asha u made my day.😍...i was in a bad mood frm the morning but after read this part i was like 😳😳😳😳😃...i can picturize ur FF.😉😉...ur tooo good.👏👏...i didnt feel any awkwardness😆...pls cont..soon😊...im waiting..😍

Originally posted by: ashamol

 

suspence ke bina maza kya????but its a nice scene

i stop there not 2 create a suspence but actually a bit long

happy u liked it

 

Originally posted by: saman.17

😃 😃 😃 ll be eagerly waiting for ur next part...😃

Originally posted by: fazeel

asha why karan is not well kya huwa u dont mention in ff